[release-notes/gnome-3-4] Finalize a11y page

[Andre Klapper <aklapper src gnome org>]

commit 69e0b2e11db53fdb378c787b70d1b9a6cb791c37
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Tue Mar 20 14:45:46 2012 +0100

    Finalize a11y page

 help/C/rna11y.xml |   36 ++++++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index 35f32b2..7673851 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -5,18 +5,15 @@
 <!ENTITY gnomeversion "3.4">
 ]>
 
+<!-- https://live.gnome.org/Accessibility/ReleaseNotes/ThreePointFour -->
 <sect1 id="rna11y">
  <title>What's New in Accessibility</title>
- -->
-
-    <para>
-     General TODO: Go through
-https://live.gnome.org/Accessibility/ReleaseNotes/ThreePointFour and merge stuff here --Andre
-   </para>
-
    <para>
     GNOME &gnomeversion; is the most beautiful accessible desktop to date, with
-    an emphasis on being reliable and usable for everyone. GNOME has started a <ulink url="www.gnome.org/friends">Friend of GNOME fundraising campaing</ulink> in order to strengthen its commitment to accessibility with more resources and make 2012 the year of accessibility.
+    an emphasis on being reliable and usable for everyone. GNOME has started a 
+    <ulink url="www.gnome.org/friends">Friend of GNOME fundraising campaign</ulink> 
+    in order to strengthen its commitment to accessibility with more resources 
+    and make 2012 the year of accessibility.
   </para>
   <para>
     For this release, we present the following features:
@@ -26,22 +23,25 @@ https://live.gnome.org/Accessibility/ReleaseNotes/ThreePointFour and merge stuff
 
     <listitem>
     <para>
-     Orca interaction with GNOME Shell has been thoroughly reviewed and many improvements has been made, especially with respect to accessible names, roles, and states. We encourage Orca users to give GNOME Shell a try and provide feedback.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      TODO: Waiting for more feedback, expected reply after code freeze, mainly for orca, ATK and AT-SPI
+     The interaction of the screen reader <application>Orca</application> with 
+     <application>GNOME Shell</application> has been thoroughly reviewed and 
+     many improvements has been made, especially with respect to accessible 
+     names, roles, and states. We encourage <application>Orca</application> 
+     users to provide feedback.
     </para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
     <para>
-    The Symbolic icon set has been re-themed and extended to produce an improved High Contrast experience for users. Support for the new widgets such as spin buttons and inline toolbars has been added.
+    The Symbolic icon set has been re-themed and extended to produce an improved 
+    High Contrast experience for users. Support for the new widgets such as spin 
+    buttons and inline toolbars has been added.
     </para>
     <figure id="fig.a11y.highContrast">
         <!-- TRANSLATORS: To enable this, turn on high contrast in the accessibility
         menu
         -->
-        <title>Nautilus using the High Contrast theme</title>
+        <title>File manager <application>Nautilus</application> using the High Contrast theme</title>
         <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
           <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;rna11y-high-contrast.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
@@ -50,10 +50,14 @@ https://live.gnome.org/Accessibility/ReleaseNotes/ThreePointFour and merge stuff
 
     <listitem>
     <para>
-	  This release includes a new Universal Access Control Center dialog for modifying magnifier user preferences. The new "Zoom Options" dialog allows users to configure the magnification factor, the mouse tracking, the position of the magnified view on screen and enabling the crosshairs to help users find the mouse pointer.
+	  This release includes a new Universal Access Control Center dialog for 
+    modifying magnifier user preferences. The new "Zoom Options" dialog allows 
+    users to configure the magnification factor, the mouse tracking, the 
+    position of the magnified view on screen and enabling the crosshairs to 
+    help users find the mouse pointer.
     </para>
     <figure id="fig.a11y.zoom">
-        <!-- TRANSLATORS: To check this dialog, goes to the universal access settings
+        <!-- TRANSLATORS: To check this dialog, go to the universal access settings
         and press the options button in the seing tab.
         -->
         <title>The new zoom options dialog</title>