[gnome-devel-docs] Fixed bug #614210

[Daniel Mustieles GarcÃa <dmustieles src gnome org>]

commit 5a32d5f06d304ea04e88e5679dc9aa431dbf8847
Author: Daniel Mustieles <daniel mustieles gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 19 22:23:23 2012 +0100

    Fixed bug #614210

 hig/C/hig-diff.xml |    2 +-
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/hig/C/hig-diff.xml b/hig/C/hig-diff.xml
index cbd9136..210428a 100644
--- a/hig/C/hig-diff.xml
+++ b/hig/C/hig-diff.xml
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@
       <sect3 id="menu-item-functional-description">
 	<title>Include a functional description in the menu name</title>
 
-	<para revisionflag="changed">In the menu item name, include a description of functionality in addition to the proper name of the application. This is especially useful novice users, and to users of systems where numerous applications are installed by default. Users are more likely to find your application if the name that appears in the menu includes a description of its functionality.</para>
+	<para revisionflag="changed">In the menu item name, include a description of functionality in addition to the proper name of the application. This is especially useful to novice users, and to users of systems where numerous applications are installed by default. Users are more likely to find your application if the name that appears in the menu includes a description of its functionality.</para>
 
 	<para><phrase revisionflag="added">For example, </phrase><ulink url="http://web.mit.edu/is/usability/aui/"; revisionflag="added">user testing of MIT's Athena system</ulink> revealed that users had difficulty finding the file manager because they were unfamiliar with the name "Nautilus". Because users did not associate the word "Nautilus" with the concept "file manager" the menu item did not help them. This is an example of not using the user's language. See <xref linkend="principles-match"/> for more on this topic.</para>