[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [users] simplify the structure



commit 2decb809a418ef9916766170fe8c79ac3fbb25e6
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 19 19:21:28 2012 +0000

    [users] simplify the structure

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   72 +++++++++++++++++++--------------------------------
 1 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 91b3d8a..76f9e4e 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -9,9 +9,6 @@
 
 <sect1 id="rnusers">
   <title>What's New for Users</title>
-
-<sect2 id="rnusers.highlights">
-  <title>Highlights</title>
   <figure id="fig.users.gnome-3-4">
     <title>GNOME 3.4</title>
       <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
@@ -38,8 +35,8 @@
     of the day. Enjoy!
   </para>
 
-  <sect3 id="rnusers.gnome-3-applications">
-    <title>Updated Applications</title>
+  <sect2 id="rnusers.gnome-3-applications">
+    <title>New Look GNOME 3 Applications</title>
     <para>
       Evolving our applications has been a major theme for this release cycle. 
       The new GNOME 3 applications that were released in &lastversion; have all received 
@@ -99,10 +96,9 @@
       Another tool we have updated is <application>Passwords and Keys</application>. 
       It has also been given a much more refined and elegant user interface.
     </para>
+  </sect2>
 
-  </sect3>
-
-  <sect3 id="users.document-search">
+  <sect2 id="users.document-search">
     <title>Document Search</title>
     <figure id="fig.users.document-search">
       <title>Search for Documents from the Activities Overview</title>
@@ -125,9 +121,9 @@
       will extended in future releases to include other types of content, such as Music and 
       Videos.
     </para>
-  </sect3>
+  </sect2>
 
-  <sect3 id="rnusers.application-menus">
+  <sect2 id="rnusers.application-menus">
     <figure id="fig.users.application-menu">
       <title>Application Menus</title>
         <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
@@ -155,9 +151,9 @@
       will never be hidden. This as a hidden menu bar is more difficult to use
       while using focus-follows-mouse.
     </para> -->
-  </sect3>
+  </sect2>
 
-  <sect3 id="rnusers.interface-components">
+  <sect2 id="rnusers.interface-components">
     <title>Refreshed Interface Components</title>
       <para>
         A number of GNOME application interface components have been modernized this release. 
@@ -189,9 +185,9 @@
       We also revised the design of spin buttons for &gnomeversion;, which used to be fiddly. 
       The new versions are much easier to use and look great too.
     </para>
-  </sect3>
+  </sect2>
 
-  <sect3 id="rnusers.details">
+  <sect2 id="rnusers.details">
     <title>A Bonanza of Smaller Improvements</title>
     <para>
       Incremental improvements and polishing has been a big focus for this release. 
@@ -272,9 +268,9 @@
         Lastly, we have limited the notification overview trigger to only the
         lower right corner as to avoid interacting with certain applications. -->
     </itemizedlist>
-  </sect3>
+  </sect2>
 
-  <sect3 id="rnusers.smooth-scrolling">
+  <sect2 id="rnusers.smooth-scrolling">
     <title>Smooth Scrolling</title>
     <para>
       Scrolling has got smooth in GNOME &gnomeversion;. In previous releases it could be a slightly jerky 
@@ -285,9 +281,9 @@
       Smooth scrolling is the first result of our ongoing touch input work, which is planned to deliver 
       more features in the future.
     </para>
-  </sect3>
+  </sect2>
 
-  <sect3 id="rnusers.background">
+  <sect2 id="rnusers.background">
     <title>New Animated Background</title>
     <figure id="fig.users.background">
       <title>Morning, Daytime and Night</title>
@@ -301,17 +297,9 @@
       is also dynamic, becoming brighter and more radiant during the day, and dark and shadowy 
       in the evening.
     </para>
-  </sect3>
-
-</sect2>
-
-<sect2 id="rnusers.other">
-  <title>Other Changes</title>
-  <para>
-    There are other things too, of course.
-  </para>
+  </sect2>
 
-  <sect3 id="system-settings">
+  <sect2 id="system-settings">
     <title>Improved System Settings</title>
     <para>
       <application>System Settings</application> have received a number of
@@ -340,9 +328,9 @@
         'All Settings' button (which now features a grid icon instead).
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-  </sect3>
+  </sect2>
 
-	<sect3 id="rnusers.user-docs">
+	<sect2 id="rnusers.user-docs">
 	  <title>Documentation That Really Helps You</title>
     <para>
       Traditional user documentation is written like a paper book; a good story,
@@ -384,9 +372,9 @@
           url="http://library.gnome.org/users/gnome-help/&gnomeversion;";>Desktop Help</ulink>.
         </para></listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-	</sect3>
+	</sect2>
 
-	<sect3 id="rnusers.empathy">
+	<sect2 id="rnusers.empathy">
     <title>Video Calling and Live Messenger Support</title>
     <figure id="fig.users.video-calling">
       <title>New to Empathy: Video Calling</title>
@@ -417,27 +405,23 @@
         Facebook chat support, so you can chat with your Facebook friends!
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-  </sect3>
+  </sect2>
 
 <!-- 
 Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666891 | gnome-system-monitor: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=667829 | gnome-packagekit: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666788 | control center user accounts: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666573 and https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=658352 | settings-daemon: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666787 | nm: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666783
 -->
 
-  <sect3 id="rnusers.nautilus-undo">
-    <title>Undo File Operations</title>
-      <para>
-			  The file manager <application>Nautilus</application> provides Undo 
-				support which allows you to revert a change your made.
-      </para>
-  </sect3>
-
-  <sect3 id="apps-more">
+  <sect2 id="apps-more">
     <title>Many Other Application Enhancements</title>
     <para>
       TODO: many more. yada yada.
     </para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem><para>
+	  		  The file manager <application>Nautilus</application> provides Undo 
+		  		support which allows you to revert a change your made.
+        </para></listitem>
+        <listitem><para>
           <application>Sound Juicer</application> has a new metadata fetching facility which 
           provides enhanced support for multi-disc albums.
         </para></listitem>
@@ -481,9 +465,7 @@ http://git.gnome.org/browse/evolution/commit/?id=e0548d2 and https://bugzilla.gn
           in the sidebar.
           </para></listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
-	</sect3>
-
-</sect2>
+	</sect2>
 
 </sect1>
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