[release-notes/gnome-3-4] Move Boxes to 'Looking Forward' section. I do not consider it ready yet.



commit 1700a0ec9c4bfa1a050520fefa72c480a0e20039
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sat Mar 17 23:32:59 2012 +0100

    Move Boxes to 'Looking Forward' section. I do not consider it ready yet.

 help/C/rnlookingforward.xml |   11 +++++++++--
 help/C/rnusers.xml          |   24 ++++--------------------
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
index dcc4a88..7f41478 100644
--- a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
@@ -21,8 +21,15 @@
 <!-- https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointThree/Features/Boxes -->
 <!-- TODO: Bonus points for a boxes screenshot (with not too much translatable text) -->
       <listitem><para>
-				<application>Boxes</application> is in the making: An application for 
-				easy accessing of other computer systems or images.
+        <application>Boxes</application> is in the making: A brand new GNOME 3 
+        application which allows you to easily connect to remote machines as 
+        well as use virtual machines.
+        A first testing version of Boxes is already available for GNOME 
+        &gnomeversion;, however it might not come included with your system
+        yet.
+      </para></listitem>
+  </sect3>
+
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 7cd8d3f..6bc641f 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -21,11 +21,10 @@
   <para>
     This release also contains some important new developments. GNOME 3 applications have 
     been a major focus for recent design and development effort, and a host of applications 
-    have had significant updates for the release. We are also introducing Boxes, a brand new 
-    GNOME 3 app which allows you to easily connect to remote machines as well as use virtual 
-    machines. You will also also see a host of improvements to the building blocks that 
-    make up GNOME 3 applications in this release. This includes smooth scrolling, refreshed 
-    user interface components, a much refined visual theme and application menus.
+    have had significant updates for the release. You will also also see a host of 
+    improvements to the building blocks that make up GNOME 3 applications in this release. 
+    This includes smooth scrolling, refreshed user interface components, a much refined 
+    visual theme and application menus.
   </para>
   <para>
     Other highlights for this release include a new document search facility and a 
@@ -251,21 +250,6 @@
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
-  <sect3 id="rnusers.boxes">
-    <title>Boxes</title>
-      <para>
-        <application>Boxes</application> is a new GNOME 3 application that is having its 
-        first public outing in GNOME &gnomeversion;. If you ever use another machine 
-        through a remote desktop connection, or use virtual machines, <application>Boxes
-        </application> is the application for you: it makes using other machines simple, 
-        easy and seamless.
-      </para>
-      <para>
-        Boxes is not a default part of GNOME 3 and it might not come included with 
-        your system. However, it should be available through your distribution.
-      </para>
-  </sect3>
-
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2 id="other">



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