[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [users] new stuff

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit fc3e0a9887107cef1822ac5f02ff28835ecf5344
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Fri Mar 16 18:06:12 2012 +0000

    [users] new stuff

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   42 +++++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index dcc2b4e..f0eb654 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -10,27 +10,28 @@
 <sect1 id="rnusers">
   <title>What's New for Users</title>
 
-<sect2 id="rnusers.introduction">
-  <title>Introduction</title>
+<sect2 id="rnusers.highlights">
+  <title>Highlights</title>
   <para>
     &gnomeversion; is the second GNOME release since 3.0 back in April 2011. It brings 
-    a large number of improvements to the GNOME 3 user experience, including many bug 
-    fixes and small enhancements.
-    Busy release. Evolving application story. Big emphasis on incremental updates. 
-    Highlights this release include x, y and z.
+    a large number of improvements to the GNOME 3 user experience, including a huge 
+    number of bug fixes and small enhancements. The result is a shinier, more polished, 
+    more reliable GNOME 3.
   </para>
   <para>
-    Lots of other solid new features, including video chat in Empathy and...
+    This release also contains some important new developments. It includes a host of 
+    updated applications, several of which were newly introduced last release. These 
+    improvements are part of GNOME's new application development push. You will see 
+    also see a host of improvements to the components and building blocks that make up 
+    GNOME 3 applications in this release. This includes smooth scrolling, updated 
+    user interface components, a much refined visual theme and new application menus.
   </para>
-</sect2>
-
-<sect2 id="highlights">
-  <title>Highlights</title>
   <para>
-    Lots of highlights this release. It's awesome.
+    Other highlights for this release include a new document search facility and a 
+    new animated background that updates over the course of the day.
   </para>
 
-  <sect3 id="gnome-3-apps">
+  <sect3 id="rnusers.gnome-3-applications">
     <title>Updated Applications</title>
     <para>
       Evolving our applications has been a major theme for this release cycle. 
@@ -75,7 +76,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect3>
 
-  <sect3 id="document-search">
+  <sect3 id="rnusers.document-search">
     <title>Document Search</title>
     <para>
       Searching from the Activities Overview already gives you a quick way to access 
@@ -94,7 +95,7 @@
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
-  <sect3 id="application-menus">
+  <sect3 id="rnusers.application-menus">
     <title>Application Menus</title>
     <para>
       Application menus are a new feature that will become an increasingly
@@ -117,7 +118,7 @@
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
-  <sect3 id="updated-interface-components">
+  <sect3 id="rnusers.interface-components">
     <title>Updated Interface Components</title>
       <para>
         A number of basic interface components have been modernized this release. 
@@ -151,7 +152,7 @@
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
-  <sect3 id="details">
+  <sect3 id="rnusers.details">
     <title>A Bonanza of Smaller Improvements</title>
     <para>
       Incremental improvements and polishing has been a big focus for this release. 
@@ -228,6 +229,13 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect3>
 
+  <sect3 id="rnusers.smooth-scrolling">
+    <title>Smooth Scrolling</title>
+    <para>
+      TODO
+    </para>
+  </sect3>
+
   <sect3 id="rnusers.background">
     <title>New Animated Background</title>
     <figure id="fig.users.background">