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[release-notes/gnome-3-4] Fix some typos

commit a27c5c88b7544379713aa5ba04d50f7daa7f8148
Author: Piotr DrÄg <piotrdrag gmail com>
Date:   Fri Mar 16 16:00:38 2012 +0100

    Fix some typos

 help/C/rndevelopers.xml     |   20 ++++++++++----------
 help/C/rnlookingforward.xml |    6 +++---
 help/C/rnusers.xml          |   18 +++++++++---------
 3 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rndevelopers.xml b/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
index 9b5e5fe..015b4bc 100644
--- a/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
      GNOME's low-level software utility library <application>GLib</application> has seen various improvements:
 	 <itemizedlist>
 	  <listitem><para>
-      The Threading support was <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/glib/&glibversion;/glib-Threads.html";>rewritten</ulink>. As a side effect, calling <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/glib/&glibversion;/glib-Deprecated-Thread-APIs.html#g-thread-init";><classname>g_thread_init()</classname></ulink> is no longer needed.
+      The threading support was <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/glib/&glibversion;/glib-Threads.html";>rewritten</ulink>. As a side effect, calling <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/glib/&glibversion;/glib-Deprecated-Thread-APIs.html#g-thread-init";><classname>g_thread_init()</classname></ulink> is no longer needed.
     </para></listitem>
 	  <listitem><para>
       GNOME's default storage backend <classname>GSettings</classname> received native support for Mac OS X. There is also better <classname>GSettings</classname> support for plugins and extensions via <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/gio/&glibversion;/gio-GSettingsSchema-GSettingsSchemaSource.html";><classname>GSettingsSchemaSource</classname></ulink>.
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
       <ulink url="http://www.unicode.org/versions/Unicode6.1.0/";>Unicode 6.1</ulink> support
     </para></listitem>
 	  <listitem><para>
-New Network status monitor interface: <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/gio/&glibversion;/GNetworkMonitor.html";><classname>GNetworkMonitor</classname></ulink>
+New network status monitor interface: <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/gio/&glibversion;/GNetworkMonitor.html";><classname>GNetworkMonitor</classname></ulink>
     </para></listitem>
 <!-- http://blogs.gnome.org/mclasen/2012/02/27/advances-in-deprecation-technology/ -->
 	  <listitem><para>
@@ -86,10 +86,10 @@ Smooth scrolling support by the new scroll direction <ulink url="http://develope
     </para></listitem>
 <!-- https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=79285 -->
 	  <listitem><para>
-Session support: <classname>GtkApplication</classname> supports logout notification and negotiation (similar to deprecated EggSMClient)
+Session support: <classname>GtkApplication</classname> supports log out notification and negotiation (similar to deprecated EggSMClient)
     </para></listitem>
 	  <listitem><para>
-Menu and Window support in <classname><ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/gtk3/&gtkversion;/GtkApplication.html";>GtkApplication</ulink></classname>, including Mac OS X support
+Menu and window support in <classname><ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/gtk3/&gtkversion;/GtkApplication.html";>GtkApplication</ulink></classname>, including Mac OS X support
     </para></listitem>
 	 </itemizedlist>
 	 </para>
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ Menu and Window support in <classname><ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/gtk
      <ulink url="http://docs.clutter-project.org/docs/clutter-cookbook/1.0/script-state.html";>cookbook recipe</ulink>)
     </para></listitem>
 	  <listitem><para>
-     <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/clutter/unstable/ClutterCairoTexture.html#ClutterCairoTexture-draw";>Improved <application>Cairo</application> drawing integration</ulink>, with the 
+     <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/clutter/unstable/ClutterCairoTexture.html#ClutterCairoTexture-draw";>Improved <application>cairo</application> drawing integration</ulink>, with the 
      same signal-based approach used by <application>GTK+</application>
     </para></listitem>
 	  <listitem><para>
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ Python bindings to using introspection.
   </sect2>
 
  <sect2 id="jhbuild">
- <title>Again easier to Compile GNOME With JHBuild</title>
+ <title>Again Easier to Compile GNOME With JHBuild</title>
 <!-- TODO: Andre asked fredp to come up with a list of relevant changes -->
 <para>TODO: "jhbuild make"</para>
  </sect2>
@@ -199,8 +199,8 @@ Python bindings to using introspection.
       The GNOME platform overview in the 
       <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/";>GNOME Developer Center</ulink> 
       has been reorganized to make it easier to start GNOME development in one 
-      of the featured languages C, C++, Python, Javascript and Vala.
-      Also, the Javascript tutorials have received many improvements.
+      of the featured languages C, C++, Python, JavaScript and Vala.
+      Also, the JavaScript tutorials have received many improvements.
     </para>
   </sect2>
 
@@ -223,11 +223,11 @@ by allowing to automatically connect widgets and code.
     <listitem><para>
          Several applications (such as <application>gnome-dictionary</application>, <application>gnome-system-monitor</application>, 
 <application>transmageddon</application>) provide improved cross-desktop 
-compatibility by inheriting the <ulink url="http://standards.freedesktop.org/basedir-spec/latest/index.html";>FreeDesktop.org directory specification</ulink>.
+compatibility by inheriting the <ulink url="http://standards.freedesktop.org/basedir-spec/latest/index.html";>freedesktop.org directory specification</ulink>.
  		</para></listitem>
 <!-- http://blogs.gnome.org/jessevdk/2011/11/13/gedit-code-assistance-plugin/ -->
     <listitem><para>
-Developers that use the text editor <application>Gedit</application> can use the new plugin <application>gedit-code-assistance</application> which provides code assistance for C, C++ and Objective-C by utilizing <application>clang</application>.
+Developers that use the text editor <application>gedit</application> can use the new plugin <application>gedit-code-assistance</application> which provides code assistance for C, C++ and Objective-C by utilizing <application>clang</application>.
  		</para></listitem>
 <!-- http://blogs.gnome.org/tvb/2011/11/24/a-long-overdue-blog/ 
 http://git.gnome.org/browse/evolution-data-server/commit/?id=3a8ed437a3547803f1453f73dbf22911b8ae0051 -->
diff --git a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
index 8293943..dcc4a88 100644
--- a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     new features and enhancements are planned for &nextversion;.
   </para>
   <sect2 id="rnlookingforward-users">
-    <title>User-visible changes</title>
+    <title>User-Visible Changes</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
         Improved rendering of HTML messages in <application>Evolution</application> by using <application>WebKit</application> instead of <application>GtkHtml</application>.
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
   <sect2 id="rnlookingforward-a11y">
-    <title>Accessibility changes</title>
+    <title>Accessibility Changes</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
   TODO: WebKitGtk+2: http://blogs.igalia.com/mario/2012/01/27/accessibility-support-in-webkit2gtk/ ?
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
   <sect2 id="rnlookingforward-devs">
-    <title>Developer-related changes</title>
+    <title>Developer-Related Changes</title>
     <itemizedlist>
 <!-- https://live.gnome.org/GnomeShell/Design/Whiteboards/Search after chat with fmuellner on IRC -->
 			<listitem><para>
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 1613ddb..621fc0d 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
     Highlights this release include x, y and z.
   </para>
   <para>
-    Lots of other solid new features, including video chat in Empathy and ...
+    Lots of other solid new features, including video chat in Empathy and...
   </para>
 </sect2>
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
   <sect3 id="document-search">
     <title>Document Search</title>
     <para>
-      Searching from the Activites Overview already gives you a quick way to access 
+      Searching from the Activities Overview already gives you a quick way to access 
       to applications, contacts and system settings. A big new feature for this release 
       is the addition of documents to these search results.
     </para>
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
       </para>
       <figure id="fig.users.colorchooser">
       <!-- TRANSLATORS: you can get this dialog through the System Settings Background, 
-      panel. Select System Settings > Background, then Colours and Gradients from the 
+      panel. Select System Settings > Background, then Colors and Gradients from the 
       dropdown. Then select the button in the bottom-right corner of the window.
       Screenshot Guidelines: https://live.gnome.org/GnomeMarketing/ScreenshotGuidelines-->
         <title>Simplified Color Chooser</title>
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
     <para>
       Scrollbars are another component that have been updated for
       &gnomeversion;. The new version takes up less space and removes the tiny
-      'stepper' buttons that traditionally feature on scrollbars.
+      "stepper" buttons that traditionally feature on scrollbars.
     </para>
     <para>
       We also included new spin buttons for &gnomeversion;. The previous
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
         Better looking system modal dialogs.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        Several important notifications improvements. For one, notification popups will 
+        Several important notifications improvements. For one, notification pop-ups will
         avoid the pointer so that they do not get in the way. Secondly, if you
         were away a summary of the notification will be shown once you are back.
         Lastly, we have limited the notification overview trigger to only the
@@ -301,10 +301,10 @@
 	</sect3>
 
 	<sect3 id="empathy">
-    <title>Empathy Gains Video calling and Live Messenger Support</title>
+    <title>Empathy Gains Video Calling and Live Messenger Support</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
-        TODO: Brand new audio/Video call UI: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=629902
+        TODO: Brand new Audio/Video call UI: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=629902
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
         TODO: MSN-XMPP support: blogs.gnome.org/xclaesse/2011/11/03/msn-in-empathy-with-xmpp/ | 
@@ -353,11 +353,11 @@ Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: http
 
 
   <sect3 id="apps-more">
-    <title>Many other application enhancements</title>
+    <title>Many Other Application Enhancements</title>
       <itemizedlist>
 <!-- https://live.gnome.org/Gedit/RoadMap | http://blogs.gnome.org/jessevdk/2012/01/15/gedit-3-2-6-released-for-os-x-native/ -->
         <listitem><para>
-				  The text editor <application>Gedit</application> received native support for Mac OS X.
+				  The text editor <application>gedit</application> received native support for Mac OS X.
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666718 -->
         <listitem><para>
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