[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [users] more restructuring

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit ca527b43deb0cbfcb342384d2854d8b46e976672
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Mar 14 23:34:29 2012 +0100

    [users] more restructuring
    
    Let's try highlights followed by other instead.

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   97 ++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------------
 1 files changed, 41 insertions(+), 56 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index f50cf11..ea13616 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -10,44 +10,36 @@
 <sect1 id="rnusers">
   <title>What's New for Users</title>
 
-  <sect2 id="gnome-3-apps">
+  <sect2 id="highlights">
+    <title>Highlights</title>
+
+  <sect3 id="gnome-3-apps">
     <title>Updated GNOME 3 Applications</title>
     <para>
-      Focus for this release - updated GNOME 3 application designs.
+      Focus for this release - updated GNOME 3 applications.
     </para>
-
-    <sect3 id="documents">
-      <title>Documents</title>
-      <para>
-        TODO: Documents: No sidebar; New search interface; Collections; App menu; can print, and has Portrait mode.
-      </para>
-    </sect3>
-
-    <sect3 id="epiphany">
-      <title>Web</title>
-      <para>
+    <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem><para>
+        Documents: no sidebar; New search interface; Collections; App menu; can print, and has Portrait mode.
+      </para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
         TODO: Epiphany now called <application>Web</application> and new interface: 
         http://blogs.gnome.org/xan/2012/01/17/epiphany-marches-on/ | Misc: 
         http://blogs.igalia.com/mario/2011/12/06/webkitgtk-hackfest-wk2-a11y-and-ephiphanys-ad-blocker/
-      </para>
-    </sect3>
-
-    <sect3 id="contacts">
-      <title>Contacts</title>
-      <para>
+      </para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
         TODO: Contacts: New sidebar and contact pane design; Inline editing; Inline 
         linking suggestions; App menu; Webcam integration; Type-Ahead; New avatar 
         selector
-      </para>
-    </sect3>
-
-  </sect2>
-
-  <sect2 id="core">
-    <title>Core Experience</title>
-    <para>
-      TODO:New features, new ui components, polished visual look.
-    </para>
+      </para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
+        TODO: gnome-disk-utility rewrite: http://davidz25.blogspot.com/2012/03/simpler-faster-better.html
+      </para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
+        TODO: new seahorse UI
+      </para></listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
+  </sect3>
 
   <sect3 id="document-search">
     <title>Document Search</title>
@@ -66,7 +58,7 @@
   </sect3>
 
   <sect3 id="details">
-    <title>Every Detail Matters</title>
+    <title>Refined Activities Overview</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
         TODO: Every Detail matters: https://live.gnome.org/EveryDetailMatters | 
@@ -89,8 +81,8 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect3>
 
-  <sect3 id="color-chooser">
-    <title>Updated Color Chooser</title>
+  <sect3 id="updated-widgets">
+    <title>Updated Interface Components</title>
       <figure id="fig.users.colorchooser">
       <!-- TRANSLATORS: To get this dialog, you can start Evolution and go 
       to "Edit > Preferences > Mail Preferences > Genersal > Message 
@@ -103,19 +95,19 @@
           </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
       </figure>
     <para>
-      TODO
+      TODO: new scrollbars, new spin buttons
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
-  <sect3 id="theme-and-widgets">
-    <title>Better looking, updated user interface building blocks</title>
+  <sect3 id="theme">
+    <title>Polished Visual Theme</title>
       <para>
         TODO
       </para>
   </sect3>
 
   <sect3 id="system-settings">
-    <title>System Settings</title>
+    <title>Improved System Settings</title>
     <!-- https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointThree/Features/WacomPanel -->
     <para>
       TODO: Following up the support for Wacom graphics tablets in 3.2, Calibration 
@@ -127,6 +119,14 @@
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
+  </sect2>
+
+  <sect2 id="other">
+    <title>Other Changes</title>
+    <para>
+      There are other things too, of course.
+    </para>
+
 	<sect3 id="user-docs">
 	  <title>Documentation That Really Helps You</title>
     <para>
@@ -171,8 +171,8 @@
       </itemizedlist>
 	</sect3>
 
-  <sect3 id="core-more">
-    <title>MOAR</title>
+  <sect3 id="core-ux-more">
+    <title>A multitude of other improvements</title>
       <para>
         TODO: moar
       </para>
@@ -221,16 +221,8 @@ TODO: The list of recent files in the Open and Save dialogs (GtkFileChooserEntry
   </itemizedlist>
   </sect3>
 
-  </sect2>
-
-  <sect2 id="core-apps">
-     <title>Core Applications</title>
-       <para>
-         Applications have got better and stuff.
-       </para>
-
 	<sect3 id="empathy">
-    <title>TODO: Communication: Empathy</title>
+    <title>Empathy Gains Video calling and Live Messenger Support</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
         TODO: Brand new audio/Video call UI: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=629902
@@ -265,15 +257,8 @@ TODO: The list of recent files in the Open and Save dialogs (GtkFileChooserEntry
 Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666891 | gnome-system-monitor: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=667829 | gnome-packagekit: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666788 | control center user accounts: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666573 and https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=658352 | settings-daemon: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666787 | nm: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666783
 -->
 
-	<sect3 id="gnome-disk-utility">
-	  <title>TODO: Manage your Storage Media</title>
-      <para>
-        TODO: gnome-disk-utility rewrite: http://davidz25.blogspot.com/2012/03/simpler-faster-better.html
-      </para>
-  </sect3>
-
-  <sect3 id="core-apps-more">
-    <title>Core Apps - MOAR</title>
+  <sect3 id="apps-more">
+    <title>Many other application enhancements</title>
       <itemizedlist>
 <!-- https://live.gnome.org/Gedit/RoadMap | http://blogs.gnome.org/jessevdk/2012/01/15/gedit-3-2-6-released-for-os-x-native/ -->
         <listitem><para>