[gnome-games] Review for 3.4, pages marked final
- From: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-games] Review for 3.4, pages marked final
- Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2012 01:46:45 +0000 (UTC)
commit aa9bdac1b817f5751d190aeddca30b51443a42b2
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date: Tue Mar 13 21:43:52 2012 -0400
Review for 3.4, pages marked final
glines/help/C/bug-filing.page | 3 +-
glines/help/C/change-board-size.page | 21 +++++++---
glines/help/C/change-theme.page | 9 ++--
glines/help/C/develop.page | 2 +-
glines/help/C/documentation.page | 18 ++++----
glines/help/C/fast-moves.page | 16 ++++---
glines/help/C/index.page | 11 +++--
glines/help/C/license.page | 3 +-
glines/help/C/play.page | 77 +++++++++++++++++++++------------
glines/help/C/rules.page | 23 +++++++---
glines/help/C/scores.page | 15 ++++---
glines/help/C/shortcuts.page | 2 +-
glines/help/C/strategy.page | 2 +-
glines/help/C/translate.page | 32 +++++++-------
14 files changed, 142 insertions(+), 92 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/glines/help/C/bug-filing.page b/glines/help/C/bug-filing.page
index 8cc99be..1eb164c 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/bug-filing.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/bug-filing.page
@@ -5,7 +5,8 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
<link type="seealso" xref="commandline"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.2" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
+
<credit type="editor copyright">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski com</email>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/change-board-size.page b/glines/help/C/change-board-size.page
index 6ab0c3f..ec2ae66 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/change-board-size.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/change-board-size.page
@@ -3,8 +3,7 @@
id="change-board-size">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#tips" />
- <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
-
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name>Lahiru lanka</name>
<email> lankakck gmailcom</email>
@@ -14,15 +13,24 @@
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Michael Hill</name>
+ <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+ </credit>
</info>
<title>Change board size</title>
- <p>To change the board:</p>
+ <p>To change the board size:</p>
<list>
<item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq></p></item>
- </list>
+ <item><p>Under <gui>Board Size</gui>, select <gui>Small</gui>,
+ <gui>Medium</gui>, or <gui>Large</gui>.</p></item>
+ </list>
- <p>The <gui>Board Size</gui> section lets you to select a small, medium or large board. While a board with larger size gives you more space, it also places more objects on the board per turn.</p>
+ <note style="tip">
+ <p>While a larger board gives you more space, there are also more objects in
+ play for each turn.</p>
+ </note>
<section id="board-parameters">
<title>Board parameters</title>
@@ -33,7 +41,8 @@
<td><p><em>Size</em></p></td>
<td><p><em>Width</em></p></td>
<td><p><em>Height</em></p></td>
- <td><p><em>Number of types</em></p></td> <td><p><em>New objects per turn</em></p></td>
+ <td><p><em>Number of types</em></p></td>
+ <td><p><em>New objects per turn</em></p></td>
<td><p><em>Number of cells</em></p></td>
</tr>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/change-theme.page b/glines/help/C/change-theme.page
index 9c9ca2f..25c1cbf 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/change-theme.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/change-theme.page
@@ -3,8 +3,7 @@
id="change-theme">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#tips" />
- <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
-
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name>Lahiru lanka</name>
<email>lankakck gmailcom</email>
@@ -24,8 +23,10 @@
<item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p>
<list>
-<item><p>Select <gui>balls</gui> or <gui>shapes</gui> from the <gui>Image</gui> drop down menu to change the playing pieces.</p></item>
-<item><p>Click on the colored box next to <gui>Image background</gui> to access the color palette.</p></item>
+<item><p>Select <gui>balls</gui> or <gui>shapes</gui> from the <gui>Image</gui>
+ drop down menu to change the playing pieces.</p></item>
+<item><p>Click on the colored box next to <gui>Image background</gui> to access
+ the color palette.</p></item>
</list>
</item>
<item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p></item>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/develop.page b/glines/help/C/develop.page
index 25a39d4..d399798 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/develop.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/develop.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.2" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/documentation.page b/glines/help/C/documentation.page
index 447af33..e2bac75 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/documentation.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/documentation.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
type="topic" style="task"
id="documentation">
<info>
- <revision pkgversion="3.2" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
<credit type="editor copyright">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -16,14 +16,14 @@
<title>Help write documentation</title>
-<p>
- The <app>GNOME Games</app> documentation is maintained by a volunteer community. You are welcome to participate.</p>
-
-<p>To contribute to the Documentation Project, feel free to get in touch with us using <link href="https://cbe003.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.gnome.org%2Fdocs";>irc</link>, or via our <link href="http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-doc-list";>mailing list</link>.
-</p>
-<p>
-Our <link href="https://live.gnome.org/DocumentationProject/Contributing";>wiki</link> page contains useful information.
-</p>
+<p>The <app>GNOME Games</app> documentation is maintained by a volunteer
+ community. You are welcome to participate.</p>
+<p>To contribute to the Documentation Project, feel free to get in touch with us
+ using <link href="https://cbe003.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.gnome.org%2Fdocs";>irc</link>,
+ or via our <link href="http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-doc-list";>mailing
+ list</link>.</p>
+<p>Our <link href="https://live.gnome.org/DocumentationProject/Contributing";>wiki</link>
+ page contains useful information.</p>
</page>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/fast-moves.page b/glines/help/C/fast-moves.page
index 4299936..5c97355 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/fast-moves.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/fast-moves.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
id="fast-moves">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#tips" />
- <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name>Lahiru lanka</name>
@@ -14,19 +14,23 @@
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Michael Hill</name>
+ <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+ </credit>
<desc></desc>
</info>
<title>Change speed</title>
- <p>You can speed up the object movements:</p>
+ <p>To speed up object movements:</p>
<steps>
<item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
- <item><p>Under <gui>General</gui> check the <gui>Use fast moves</gui> option</p></item>
- <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui></p></item>
+ <item><p>Under <gui>General</gui>, select <gui>Use fast moves</gui>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p></item>
</steps>
- <note><p>Any changes you make are instantly applied and remembered for the next time you run
- <key>Five or More</key></p></note>
+ <note><p>Any changes you make are instantly applied and remembered for the
+ next time you run <app>Five or More</app>.</p></note>
</page>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/index.page b/glines/help/C/index.page
index a89c294..4187866 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/index.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/index.page
@@ -6,15 +6,16 @@
<title type='link' role="trail"><media type="image" src="figures/logo.png"/></title>
<title type='link'>Five or More</title>
<title type='text'>Five or More</title>
- <revision pkgversion="3.2" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
+
<credit type="author">
- <name>Lahiru lanka</name>
- <email>lankakck gmail com</email>
+ <name>Lahiru lanka</name>
+ <email>lankakck gmail com</email>
</credit>
- <credit type="author editor">
+ <credit type="author editor">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
- </credit>
+ </credit>
<license>
<p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
</license>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/license.page b/glines/help/C/license.page
index 4de563d..b7a4343 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/license.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/license.page
@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@
<info>
<link type="seealso" xref="index"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.2" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
+
<desc>Legal information.</desc>
</info>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/play.page b/glines/help/C/play.page
index 250c824..80ac9d2 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/play.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/play.page
@@ -3,45 +3,66 @@
id="play">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play" />
- <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name>Lahiru lanka</name>
<email> lankakck gmailcom</email>
<years>2011</years>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Michael Hill</name>
+ <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+ </credit>
<desc></desc>
</info>
<title>How to Play</title>
-<p>To start a new game click <guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>New</gui></guiseq>.</p>
-<section id="mouse">
-<title>Using the mouse</title>
-<steps>
- <item>
- <p>Click on the object you want to move. The selected object will begin spinning.</p>
- </item>
- <item><p>Click on the cell you want to move the object to.</p></item>
-</steps>
-</section>
-<section id="keyboard">
-<title>Using the keyboard</title>
-<steps>
-<item><p>Press any of the arrow keys. An outline around a cell will appear on the board.</p></item>
-<item><p>Using the arrow keys, navigate to the object you want to move.</p></item>
-<item><p>To select the object, press the <key>Enter</key> or <key>Spacebar</key>. The selected object will begin spinning.</p></item>
-<item><p>Move to the destination cell, and again press the <key>Enter</key> or <key>Spacebar</key>. This will cause the chosen object to me moved to the destination cell.</p></item>
-</steps>
-</section>
-
-
- <section id="usage-video">
- <title>Video demonstration</title>
- <media type="video" mime="application/ogg" src="figures/glines-demo.ogv">
-
- </media>
- </section>
+ <p>To start a new game click <guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>New</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+
+ <section id="mouse">
+
+ <title>Using the mouse</title>
+
+ <steps>
+ <item>
+ <p>Click on the object you want to move. The selected object will begin
+ spinning.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Click on the destination cell.</p>
+ </item>
+ </steps>
+
+ </section>
+
+ <section id="keyboard">
+
+ <title>Using the keyboard</title>
+
+ <steps>
+ <item><p>Press any of the arrow keys. An outline around a cell will appear
+ on the board.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Using the arrow keys, navigate to the object you want to
+ move.</p></item>
+ <item><p>To select the object, press the <key>Enter</key> or
+ <key>Spacebar</key>. The selected object will begin spinning.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Move to the destination cell, and again press the
+ <key>Enter</key> or <key>Spacebar</key>. The chosen object will move to
+ the destination cell.</p></item>
+ </steps>
+
+ </section>
+
+ <section id="usage-video">
+
+ <title>Video demonstration</title>
+
+ <media type="video" mime="application/ogg" src="figures/glines-demo.ogv">
+ </media>
+
+ </section>
</page>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/rules.page b/glines/help/C/rules.page
index 441e185..b2342e1 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/rules.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/rules.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
id="rules">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play" />
- <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name></name>
@@ -16,17 +16,26 @@
<title>Rules</title>
<list>
-<item><p>At the start of the game there are either 3 or 7 objects placed on your board, depending on the <link xref="change-board-size">board size</link>.</p></item>
+<item><p>At the start of the game there are either 3 or 7 objects placed on your
+ board, depending on the <link xref="change-board-size">board size</link>.</p></item>
-<item><p>Each time you <link xref="play">move an object</link>, additional objects are placed randomly on the board. The number of new objects placed each turn also depends on the board. A preview of the objects to be placed on the board appears in the upper left corner of the game window.</p></item>
+<item><p>Each time you <link xref="play">move an object</link>, additional
+ objects are placed randomly on the board. The number of new objects placed each
+ turn also depends on the board. A preview of the objects to be placed on the
+ board appears in the upper left corner of the game window.</p></item>
-<item><p>There must be a clear path from the original position of the object to the destination cell (i.e you can not jump over objects).</p></item>
+<item><p>There must be a clear path from the original position of the object to
+ the destination cell (i.e you can not jump over objects).</p></item>
-<item><p>A straight horizontal, vertical or diagonal line of five or more similar objects will disappear from the game board. When this happens you will have an extra move without additional objects being added to the board.</p></item>
+<item><p>A straight horizontal, vertical or diagonal line of five or more
+ similar objects will disappear from the game board. When this happens you will
+ have an extra move without additional objects being added to the board.</p></item>
-<item><p>The more objects you clear, the longer the game will go on. The longer you play, the higher your <link xref="scores">score</link>.</p></item>
+<item><p>The more objects you clear, the longer the game will go on. The longer
+ you play, the higher your <link xref="scores">score</link>.</p></item>
-<item><p>The game is over when the board is full, since no object can be moved at that point.</p></item>
+<item><p>The game is over when the board is full, since no object can be moved
+ at that point.</p></item>
</list>
<table>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/scores.page b/glines/help/C/scores.page
index c77ac84..7c63d57 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/scores.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/scores.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
id="scores">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play" />
- <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name>Lahiru lanka</name>
@@ -18,7 +18,8 @@
</info>
<title>Scoring</title>
-<p>You score points by creating lines of 5 or more objects. The points you gain depends on the number of objects that disappear.</p>
+<p>You score points by creating lines of 5 or more objects. The number of
+ points depends on the number of objects that disappear.</p>
<table rules="rowgroups cols" frame="all">
<tbody>
@@ -72,10 +73,10 @@
</table>
<note style="tip">
-<p>
-You can view the high scores by clicking <guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>Scores</gui></guiseq>.
-</p>
-<p>
-The <app>Five or More</app> scores are recorded according to the board size. You can select the <gui>Board Size</gui> of interest using the drop down menu.</p>
+<p>You can view the high scores by clicking
+ <guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>Scores</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+<p>The <app>Five or More</app> scores are recorded according to the board size.
+ You can select the <gui>Board Size</gui> of interest using the drop down
+ menu.</p>
</note>
</page>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/shortcuts.page b/glines/help/C/shortcuts.page
index f6556f4..c3d2698 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/shortcuts.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/shortcuts.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
id="shortcuts">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#advanced" />
- <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/strategy.page b/glines/help/C/strategy.page
index 1521ac1..dee6981 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/strategy.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/strategy.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
id="strategy">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play" />
- <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
diff --git a/glines/help/C/translate.page b/glines/help/C/translate.page
index f22610e..2d87bdc 100644
--- a/glines/help/C/translate.page
+++ b/glines/help/C/translate.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.2" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -21,19 +21,21 @@
</info>
<title>Help translate</title>
-<p>
- The <app>GNOME games</app> user interface and documentation is being translated by a world-wide volunteer community. You are welcome to participate.
-</p>
-<p>
- There are <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/module/gnome-games/";>many languages</link> for which translations are still needed.
-</p>
-<p>
-To start translating you will need to <link href="http:l10n.gnome.org">create an account</link> and join the <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/teams/";>translation team</link> for your language. This will give you the ability to upload new translations.
-</p>
-<p>
- You can chat with GNOME translators using <link href="https://cbe003.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.gnome.org%2Fi18n";>irc</link>. People on the channel are located worldwide, so you may not get an immediate response as a result of timezone differences.
-</p>
-<p>Alternatively, you can contact the Internationalization Team using their <link href="http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-i18n";>mailing list</link>.
-</p>
+<p>The <app>GNOME Games</app> user interface and documentation is being
+ translated by a world-wide volunteer community. You are welcome to
+ participate.</p>
+<p>There are <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/module/gnome-games/";>many languages</link>
+ for which translations are still needed.</p>
+<p>To start translating you will need to <link href="http:l10n.gnome.org">create
+ an account</link> and join the <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/teams/";>translation
+ team</link> for your language. This will give you the ability to upload new
+ translations.</p>
+<p>You can chat with GNOME translators using
+ <link href="https://cbe003.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.gnome.org%2Fi18n";>irc</link>.
+ People on the channel are located worldwide, so you may not get an immediate
+ response as a result of timezone differences.</p>
+<p>Alternatively, you can contact the Internationalization Team using their
+ <link href="http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-i18n";>mailing
+ list</link>.</p>
</page>
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