[gnome-user-docs] disk pages marked review

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 58aab7424108898b546b4d0dd8b3e6c62ab6af75
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Mar 5 19:44:39 2012 -0500

    disk pages marked review

 gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page  |    4 +++
 gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page   |   44 ++++++++----------------------------
 gnome-help/C/disk-check.page      |   11 ++++-----
 gnome-help/C/disk-format.page     |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/disk.page            |    2 +-
 6 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 44 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
index 8ac219a..7106a7c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
@@ -14,6 +14,10 @@
       <name>Natalia Ruz Leiva</name>
       <email>nruz alumnos inf utfsm cl</email>
     </credit>
+   <credit type="editor">
+     <name>Michael Hill</name>
+     <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+   </credit>
 
     <desc>Run benchmarks on your hard disk to check how fast it is.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page
index 9b933b8..c4c0862 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page
@@ -12,8 +12,12 @@
       <name>Natalia Ruz Leiva</name>
       <email>nruz alumnos inf utfsm cl</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Use <gui>Disk Usage Analyzer</gui> or <gui>System Monitor</gui> to
     check space and capacity.</desc>
@@ -31,49 +35,21 @@
   <p>To check the free disk space and disk capacity using
  <app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app>:</p>
 
-<comment>
-  <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
-  <p>Rewrite steps to use common simple form in 3.0.1</p>
-</comment>
-
 <list>
  <item>
   <p>Open <app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app> from the <gui>Activities</gui>
   overview. The window will display the <gui>Total file system capacity</gui>
-  and <gui>Total file system usage</gui>. Click to toggle between
-  <gui>View as Rings Chart</gui> and <gui>View as Treemap Chart</gui>.</p>
+  and <gui>Total file system usage</gui>.</p>
  </item> 
  <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Scan Home</gui> to check the disk space in the Home folder.</p>
- </item> 
- <item>
-  <p>Click the <gui>Scan filesystem</gui> icon to check the '/' (Root) folder.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
-  <p>Click the <gui>Scan a folder</gui> icon to scan disk space inside a
-  specific folder.</p>
- </item> 
- <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Scan a remote folder</gui> to scan disk space inside a remote
-  folder.</p>
+  <p>Click one of the toolbar buttons to choose to <gui>Scan Home</gui>,
+   <gui>Scan filesystem</gui>, <gui>Scan a folder</gui>, or <gui>Scan a remote
+   folder</gui>.</p>
  </item> 
 </list>
   <p>The information is displayed according to <gui>Folder</gui>, <gui>Usage</gui>,
-  <gui>Size</gui> and <gui>Contents</gui>. Click on the column headings to
-  adjust the sort order.</p>
-<list>
- <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Stop</gui> or <gui>Refresh</gui> anytime you need to cancel or
-  update the scanning. See more details in
+  <gui>Size</gui> and <gui>Contents</gui>. See more details in
   <link href="ghelp:baobab?baobab-usage"><app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app></link>.</p>
- </item>
-</list>
-
-<note style="tip">
-  <p><gui>Disk Usage Analyzer</gui> can also be run by pressing
- <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq>, typing 'baobab' (without the
- single-quotes) and pressing <key>Enter</key>.</p>
-</note>
 
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-check.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-check.page
index 83577fd..a0662c9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-check.page
@@ -13,8 +13,12 @@
       <name>Natalia Ruz Leiva</name>
       <email>nruz alumnos inf utfsm cl</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Test your hard disk for problems to make sure that it's healthy.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -22,11 +26,6 @@
 
 <title>Check your hard disk for problems</title>
 
-<comment>
-  <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
-  <p>Rewrite steps to use common simple form in 3.0.1</p>
-</comment>
-
 <section id="disk-status">
  <title>Checking the hard disk</title>
   <p>Hard disks have a built-in health-check tool called <app>SMART</app> 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
index 8c01b2f..b14b706 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Remove all of the files and folders from an external hard disk or USB
     flash drive by formatting it.</desc>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
    <gui>Format Volume</gui>.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-   <p>In the window that pops up, choose a file system <gui>Type</gui> for the
+   <p>In the window that pops up, choose a filesystem <gui>Type</gui> for the
    disk.</p>
    <p>If you use the disk on Windows and Mac OS computers in addition to Linux
    computers, choose <gui>FAT</gui>. If you only use it on Windows, <gui>NTFS</gui>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page
index 607c174..53caa35 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
  
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
   
     <desc>Understand what volumes and partitions are and use the disk utility 
     to manage them.</desc>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk.page b/gnome-help/C/disk.page
index 6984d10..33fb932 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
   </credit>
 
-  <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
   <desc>
     <link xref="disk-capacity">Disk space</link>,