[gnome-user-docs] disk-benchmark and user-changepassword reviewed

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 82fea65836a35e2e50c8fd11ddf21a85aee45217
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Wed Feb 29 22:32:36 2012 -0500

    disk-benchmark and user-changepassword reviewed

 gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page      |   22 +++++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page |   25 ++++++++++++++++++++-----
 2 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
index d5fd434..8ac219a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="disk"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 <steps>
 
  <item>
-  <p>Open the <app>Disk Utility</app> application from the <gui>Activities</gui>
+  <p>Open the <app>Disk Utility</app> application from the activities
   overview.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
@@ -44,12 +44,16 @@
 
 </steps> 
 
-  <p>When the test is finished, the results will appear on the graph.</p>
-
- <comment>
-  <p>It would be really really great if somebody could write something about the
-  results and the charts, I can't do that... I don't really know what does it
-  mean. thanks.</p>
- </comment>
+  <p>When the test is finished, the results will appear on the graph. The green
+   points and connecting lines indicate the samples taken; these correspond to
+   the right axis, showing access time, plotted against the bottom axis,
+   representing percentage time elapsed during the benchmark. The blue line
+   represents read rates, while the red line represents write rates; these are
+   shown as access data rates on the left axis, plotted against percentage of the
+   disk traveled, from the outside to the spindle, along the bottom axis.</p>
+
+  <p>Below the graph, values are displayed for minimum, maximum and average
+   read and write rates, average access time and time elapsed since the last
+   benchmark test.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index 9610ddc..3f88051 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <desc>Keep your account secure by changing your password often
     in your account settings.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -81,11 +81,26 @@
   <steps>
     <item><p>Open the <app>Passwords and Keys</app> application from
     the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p></item>
-    <item><p>In the <gui>Passwords</gui> tab, right-click on <gui>Passwords: login</gui>.
-    Select <gui>Change Password</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Enter your <gui>Old Password</gui>, followed by your new <gui>Password</gui>,
-    and <gui>Confirm</gui> your new password by entering it again.</p></item>
+    <item><p>In the <gui>View</gui> menu, ensure <gui>By keyring</gui> is
+     checked.</p></item>
+    <item><p>In the sidebar under <gui>Passwords</gui>, right-click on
+     <gui>Login keyring</gui> and select <gui>Change Password</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Enter your <gui>Old Password</gui>, followed by your new
+     <gui>Password</gui>, and <gui>Confirm</gui> your new password by entering
+     it again.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <gui>OK</gui>.</p></item>
   </steps>
+
+  <note style="info package">
+    <p>You must have the <sys>seahorse</sys> package installed to use
+     <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
+
+    <if:choose xmlns:if="http://projectmallard.org/if/1.0/";>
+      <if:when test="action:install">
+        <p><link action="install:seahorse" style="button">Install seahorse</link></p>
+      </if:when>
+    </if:choose>
+  </note>
+
   </section>
 </page>