[gnome-games] gnomine: improve help language in index.page



commit 63c40acc47ba27145cf26173fbc5021c95b63c60
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Jun 15 22:55:21 2012 +0100

    gnomine: improve help language in index.page

 gnomine/help/C/index.page |   17 ++++++++++++-----
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/index.page b/gnomine/help/C/index.page
index 4d4e0b7..b99c612 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/index.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/index.page
@@ -9,16 +9,23 @@
     <credit type="author">
       <name></name>
       <email></email>
-    </credit> <license>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
   </info>
 
-  <title><media type="image" src="figures/logo32.png">GNOME Mines logo</media>GNOME Mines</title>
+  <title><media type="image" src="figures/logo32.png">GNOME Mines
+  logo</media>GNOME Mines</title>
   <p>
-    <app>Gnomine</app> is a Mine Sweeper clone game. The aim of the game is to
-    locate all the mines hidden under tiles on a square board. You'll need some
-    reflection and some luck to find all of them without causing an explosion.
+    <app>Gnomine</app> is a clone of the game Minesweeper. The aim is to locate
+    all the mines that are hidden under tiles on a rectangular board. You will
+    need to use a combination of logic and luck to find all the mines without
+    triggering an explosion.
   </p>
   <section id="play" style="2column">
     <title>Game Play</title>



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