[gnome-games] mahjongg: fixed user help bug 680433



commit cd1cd67750ed6a79c2dcf93a178ddfeae0297fec
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Thu Jul 26 18:13:25 2012 +0200

    mahjongg: fixed user help bug 680433

 gnome-mahjongg/help/C/gameplay.page  |   54 ++++++++++++++++++++++------------
 gnome-mahjongg/help/C/hints.page     |   46 +++++++++++++++-------------
 gnome-mahjongg/help/C/map.page       |   20 +++++++++---
 gnome-mahjongg/help/C/scoring.page   |   38 +++++++++++++++--------
 gnome-mahjongg/help/C/toolbar.page   |    8 ++++-
 gnome-mahjongg/help/C/translate.page |   41 ++++++++++++++------------
 6 files changed, 128 insertions(+), 79 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/gameplay.page b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/gameplay.page
index 46641d3..ce1a0e9 100644
--- a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/gameplay.page
+++ b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/gameplay.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2012-03-08" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.4" version="0.2" date="2012-07-26" status="final"/>
    <credit type="author">
     <name>Chris Beiser</name>
     <email>ctbeiser gmail com</email>
@@ -13,28 +13,44 @@
      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
    </credit>
+   <credit type="editor">
+     <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+     <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+   </credit>
    <license>
      <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
    </license>
   </info>
 
   <title>Basic gameplay</title>
-    <p>
-	Mahjongg is played by matching two identical tiles per turn. A tile is eligible for matching if no part of another tile is lying directly on it, and it has a free long edge on either the left or the right. You win by removing all tiles, and you are scored by the amount of time it takes you to do so.
-    </p>
-    <p>There are many different <link xref="map">tile layouts</link> to choose from.</p>
-    <p>
-      To match two tiles:
-    </p>
-    <steps>
-     <item><p>Click on the a tile you want to match. If it is an eligible tile, it will be highlighted.</p></item>
-     <item><p>Click on a matching tile. If it is a truely a matching tile, both tiles will vanish.</p></item>
-    </steps>
-
-    <section id="usage-video">
-      <title>Video demonstration</title>
-       <media type="video" mime="application/ogg" src="figures/mahjongg-video.ogv">
-
-        </media>
-    </section>
+
+  <p>Mahjongg is played by matching two identical tiles per turn. A tile is
+  eligible for matching if no part of another tile is lying directly on it, and
+  it has a free long edge on either the left or the right. You win by removing
+  all tiles, and you are scored by the amount of time it takes you to do so.
+  </p>
+
+  <p>There are many different <link xref="map">tile layouts</link> to choose
+  from.</p>
+
+  <p>To match two tiles:</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on the a tile you want to match. If it is an eligible tile, it
+      will be highlighted.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on a matching tile. If it is a truly a matching tile, both
+      tiles will vanish.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
+  <section id="usage-video">
+  <title>Video demonstration</title>
+
+  <media type="video" mime="application/ogg"
+  src="figures/mahjongg-video.ogv"><p>Video of gameplay</p></media>
+
+  </section>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/hints.page b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/hints.page
index 4b1654e..c0bd2ed 100644
--- a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/hints.page
+++ b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/hints.page
@@ -4,22 +4,26 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2012-03-08" status="final"/>
-   <credit type="author">
-    <name>Chris Beiser</name>
-    <email>ctbeiser gmail com</email>
-   </credit>
-   <credit type="editor">
-    <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
-    <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
-   </credit>
-   <credit type="editor">
-     <name>Michael Hill</name>
-     <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
-   </credit>
-   <license>
-     <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
-   </license>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.4" version="0.2" date="2012-07-26" status="final"/>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Chris Beiser</name>
+      <email>ctbeiser gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <license>
+      <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
+    </license>
   </info>
 
   <title>Hints</title>
@@ -29,18 +33,18 @@
   exists.</p>
 
   <p><gui>Hint</gui> can be accessed by clicking
-   <guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>Hint</gui></guiseq>. Alternatively, use the
-   <gui>Hint</gui> button on the <link xref="toolbar">toolbar</link>, or press
-   <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>.</p>
+  <guiseq><gui>Mahjongg</gui><gui>Hint</gui></guiseq>. Alternatively, use the
+  <gui>Hint</gui> button in the <link xref="toolbar">toolbar</link>, or press
+  <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>.</p>
 
   <note>
     <p><gui>Hint</gui> can make Mahjongg too easy, and should be used
-     sparingly.</p>
+    sparingly.</p>
     <p>There is a 30-second penalty for each use of the "hint" option.</p>
   </note>
 
   <section id="hints-video">
-    <title>Video demonstation</title>
+    <title>Video demonstration</title>
     <media type="video" width="500" mime="application/ogg" src="figures/hints-video.ogv">
     <tt:tt xmlns:tt="http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml";>
      <tt:body>
diff --git a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/map.page b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/map.page
index 324e971..a9d4eb4 100644
--- a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/map.page
+++ b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/map.page
@@ -3,26 +3,36 @@
       id="map">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-03-08" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.4" version="0.2" date="2012-07-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2012</years>
+    </credit>
 
   </info>
 
   <title>Change tile layout</title>
 
   <p>There are 9 different layouts. To select a different tile layout:</p>
+
   <steps>
-   <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-   <item><p>Under <gui>Maps</gui> select a layout from the drop-down menu.</p></item>
-   <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui></p></item>
+    <item><p>Click
+    <guiseq><gui>Mahjongg</gui><gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Under <gui>Maps</gui> select a layout from the drop-down
+    menu.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui></p></item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>Your new tile layout will take effect immediately.</p>
+  <p>Your new tile layout will take effect immediately unless you have already
+  started a game and chose for the effect to take place after you are
+  finished.</p>
 
 <table>
  <tr>
diff --git a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/scoring.page b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/scoring.page
index f5be1d0..644ee9e 100644
--- a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/scoring.page
+++ b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/scoring.page
@@ -4,23 +4,35 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2012-03-08" status="final"/>
-   <credit type="author">
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.4" version="0.2" date="2012-07-26" status="final"/>
+  <credit type="author">
     <name>Chris Beiser</name>
     <email>ctbeiser gmail com</email>
-   </credit>
-   <license>
-     <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
-   </license>
+  </credit>
+  <credit type="editor">
+    <name>Ekateirna Gerasimova</name>
+    <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+  </credit>
+  <license>
+    <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
+  </license>
   </info>
 
   <title>Scoring</title>
 
-    <p>In <app>Mahjongg</app>, you are scored by how quickly you can complete a board.</p>
-    <p>To view the highscore board:</p>
-    <list>
-      <item><p><guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>Scores</gui></guiseq></p></item>
-    </list>
-    <note><p>The scores are stored on a per <link xref="map">map</link> basis.
-    You can view the highscores for a particular map by selecting it from the drop-down menu.</p></note>
+  <p>In <app>Mahjongg</app>, you are scored by how quickly you can complete a
+  board.</p>
+
+  <p>To view the highscore board:</p>
+  <steps>
+    <item><p>Select
+    <guiseq><gui>Mahjongg</gui><gui>Scores</gui></guiseq></p></item>
+  </steps>
+
+  <note>
+    <p>The scores are stored on a per <link xref="map">map</link> basis.  You
+    can view the highscores for a particular map by selecting it from the
+    drop-down menu.</p>
+  </note>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/toolbar.page b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/toolbar.page
index e80978a..1771d99 100644
--- a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/toolbar.page
+++ b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/toolbar.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="toolbar">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-03-08" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.4" version="0.2" date="2012-07-26" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -13,6 +13,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc></desc>
   </info>
@@ -20,7 +24,7 @@
   <title>Show/hide the toolbar</title>
 
   <p>To show or hide the toolbar, click
-  <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Toolbar</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+  <guiseq><gui>Mahjongg</gui><gui>Toolbar</gui></guiseq>.</p>
 
   <p>The toolbar, located under the menu bar, lets you perform common actions
   with your mouse. To use a toolbar item, just click on it. The buttons, from
diff --git a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/translate.page b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/translate.page
index 47f27ff..e932b0e 100644
--- a/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/translate.page
+++ b/gnome-mahjongg/help/C/translate.page
@@ -3,43 +3,46 @@
 	id="translate">
 
   <info>
-   <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2012-03-08" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.4" version="0.2" date="2012-07-26" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
-     <credit type="editor">
+    <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <license>
-       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
-     </license>
+      <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
+    </license>
   </info>
 
 <title>Help translate</title>
 
-  <p>The <app>GNOME Games</app> user interface and documentation is being
-   translated by a world-wide volunteer community.  You are welcome to
-   participate.</p>
+  <p>The GNOME Games user interface and documentation is being translated by a
+  world-wide volunteer community: you are welcome to participate.</p>
 
   <p>There are <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/module/gnome-games/";>many
-   languages</link> for which translations are still needed.</p>
+  languages</link> for which translations are still needed.</p>
 
-  <p>To start translating you will need to
-   <link href="http:l10n.gnome.org">create an account</link> and join the
-   <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/teams/";>translation team</link> for your
-   language. This will give you the ability to upload new translations.</p>
+  <p>To start translating you will need to <link
+  href="http://l10n.gnome.org";>create an account</link> and join the <link
+  href="http://l10n.gnome.org/teams/";>translation team</link> for your
+  language. This will give you the ability to upload new translations.</p>
 
-  <p>You can chat with GNOME translators using
-   <link href="https://cbe003.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.gnome.org%2Fi18n";>irc</link>.
-   People on the channel are located worldwide, so you may not get an immediate
-   response as a result of timezone differences.</p>
+  <p>You can chat with GNOME translators using irc: join the #i18n chanel on
+  the irc.gnome.org server. People on the channel are located worldwide, so you
+  may not get an immediate response as a result of timezone differences.</p>
 
   <p>Alternatively, you can contact the Internationalization Team using their
-   <link href="http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-i18n";>mailing
-   list</link>.</p>
+  <link href="http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-i18n";>mailing
+  list</link>.</p>
+
 </page>



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