[baobab] Fix typo and improve scan-home



commit db2b1e256084d0afaec2be4e4dc34f98aa4eb9ca
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 googlemail com>
Date:   Thu Dec 22 16:51:48 2011 +0100

    Fix typo and improve scan-home

 help/C/scan-home.page |   23 ++++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/scan-home.page b/help/C/scan-home.page
index 4387fb3..023fec9 100644
--- a/help/C/scan-home.page
+++ b/help/C/scan-home.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-19" status="stub"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-20" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-20" status="draft"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#scan"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
@@ -35,27 +35,27 @@
   <p>The <file>Home</file> folder is where most files are located for the
   average user because default settings are often set to save or copy files
   into subdirectories within it. This includes downloads from the internet,
-  documents which you work on and photos from your camera. Normally, a
+  documents which you work on and photos from your camera. Normally, one
   <file>Home</file> folder exists for each user on the computer.</p>
   
   <note style="advanced">
-    <p>The default subdirectories are usually include <file>Desktop</file>,
+    <p>The default subdirectories usually include <file>Desktop</file>,
     <file>Documents</file>, <file>Downloads</file>, <file>Pictures</file> and
-    <file>Music</file>, among others: these are called <em>XDK user dirs</em>.
+    <file>Music</file>, among others: these are called <em>XDG user dirs</em>.
     Some of these will already exist when GNOME is installed, others will be
-    created by applications as and when they are needed.</p>
+    created by applications when they are needed.</p>
   </note>
 
   <p>To scan your <file>Home</file> folder:</p>
   <list>
-    <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Analyzer</gui><gui>Scan Home
+    <item><p>select <guiseq><gui>Analyzer</gui><gui>Scan Home
     Folder</gui></guiseq> from the menu</p>.</item>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>Scan Home</gui> in the toolbar</p>.</item>
-    <item><p>Press <keyseq><key>CTRL</key><key>S</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>click <gui>Scan Home</gui> in the toolbar</p>.</item>
+    <item><p>press <keyseq><key>CTRL</key><key>S</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
   </list>
 
-  <p>The results may be useful in deciding which folders compress, which applications to uninstall, 
-  or which folders can be
+  <p>The results may be useful in deciding which applications to uninstall, 
+  or which folders can be <link href="ghelp:file-roller">archived</link>,
   <link href="help:gnome-help/files-delete">deleted</link> or
   <link href="help:gnome-help/files-copy">moved</link>, to free up space on the
   hard disk. You can also use them to estimate how much space would be needed
@@ -63,7 +63,8 @@
   <file>Home</file> directory.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>Click the <gui>Stop</gui> in the toolbar to cancel the current, or <gui>Refresh</gui> to repeat the last scan.</p>
+    <p>Click the <gui>Stop</gui> button in the toolbar to cancel the current
+    scan, or <gui>Refresh</gui> to repeat the last scan.</p>
   </note> 
 
 </page>



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