[gnome-user-docs] Mark reviewed topics as final. Small changes for correctness and style.

From: Phil Bull <philbull src gnome org>
To: commits-list gnome org
Cc:
Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Mark reviewed topics as final. Small changes for correctness and style.
Date: Tue, 21 Feb 2012 00:56:27 +0000 (UTC)
commit 8ba5c134dce3aea4362d844e634f51b2f193fd7f
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date:   Tue Feb 21 00:56:05 2012 +0000

    Mark reviewed topics as final. Small changes for correctness and style.

 gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page          |    8 +++---
 gnome-help/C/net-browser.page            |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page    |    6 ++--
 gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page      |    6 ++--
 gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page        |    8 +++---
 gnome-help/C/net-email.page              |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-findip.page             |   14 +++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page    |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page     |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page   |    5 ++-
 gnome-help/C/net-general.page            |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page      |    6 ++--
 gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page         |    6 ++--
 gnome-help/C/net-manual.page             |   18 ++++++----------
 gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page      |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-problem.page            |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page      |   33 +++++++++++++++--------------
 gnome-help/C/net-security.page           |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-slow.page               |   18 ++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page      |    6 ++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wired.page              |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page     |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page  |    2 +-
 25 files changed, 87 insertions(+), 87 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page b/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
index b0e2188..97c96a2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     
     <desc>There are few Linux viruses, so you probably don't need anti-virus software.</desc>
     
@@ -19,12 +19,12 @@
 
 <title>Do I need anti-virus software?</title>
 
-<p>If you are used to Windows or Mac OS, you are probably also used to having anti-virus software running all of the time. Anti-virus software runs in the background, constantly checking for computer viruses which might find their way onto your computer and cause problems.</p>
+<p>If you are used to Windows or Mac OS, you are probably also used to having anti-virus software running all of the time. Anti-virus software runs in the background, constantly checking for computer viruses that might find their way onto your computer and cause problems.</p>
 
-<p>Anti-virus software does exist for Linux, but you probably don't need to use it. Viruses which affect Linux are still very rare. Some argue that this is because Linux is not as widely used as other operating systems, so no-one writes viruses for it. Others argue that Linux is intrinsically more secure, and security problems which viruses could make use of are fixed very quickly.</p>
+<p>Anti-virus software does exist for Linux, but you probably don't need to use it. Viruses that affect Linux are still very rare. Some argue that this is because Linux is not as widely used as other operating systems, so no-one writes viruses for it. Others argue that Linux is intrinsically more secure, and security problems that viruses could make use of are fixed very quickly.</p>
 
 <p>Whatever the reason, Linux viruses are so rare that you don't really need to worry about them at the moment.</p>
 
-<p>If you want to be extra-safe, or if you want to check for viruses in files that you are passing between yourself and people using Windows and Mac OS, you can still install anti-virus software. Check in the software installer or search online - a number of applications are available.</p>
+<p>If you want to be extra-safe, or if you want to check for viruses in files that you are passing between yourself and people using Windows and Mac OS, you can still install anti-virus software. Check in the software installer or search online; a number of applications are available.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
index 0f5e78c..711563b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
@@ -3,14 +3,14 @@
       id="net-browser">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
     <desc>
       <link xref="net-default-browser">Change the default browser</link>,
       <link xref="net-install-flash">install Flash</link>,
-      <link xref="net-install-moonlight">install Moonlight</link>...
+      <link xref="net-install-moonlight">Silverlight support</link>...
     </desc>
  
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
index a75dea0..d3e73e7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Change the default web browser by going to <gui>System Info</gui> in the <gui>System Settings</gui>.</desc>
+    <desc>Change the default web browser by going to <gui>Details</gui> in the <gui>System Settings</gui>.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Open <gui>System Info</gui> and choose <gui>Default Applications</gui> from the list on the left side of the window.</p>
+  <p>Open <gui>Details</gui> and choose <gui>Default Applications</gui> from the list on the left side of the window.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
index 4235e03..b2451f8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-email"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Change the default email client by going to <gui>System Info</gui> in the <gui>System Settings</gui>.</desc>
+    <desc>Change the default email client by going to <gui>Details</gui> in the <gui>System Settings</gui>.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Open <gui>System Info</gui> and choose <gui>Default Applications</gui> from the list on the left side of the window.</p>
+  <p>Open <gui>Details</gui> and choose <gui>Default Applications</gui> from the list on the left side of the window.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
index 1b4ba34..ce643b8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
@@ -6,22 +6,22 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-antivirus"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Viruses are unlikely to infect your computer but could infect computers of people you email.</desc>
+    <desc>Viruses are unlikely to infect your computer, but could infect the computers of people you email.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Do I need to scan my emails for viruses?</title>
 
-<p>Viruses are programs which cause problems if they manage to find their way onto your computer. A common way of them getting onto your computer is through email messages.</p>
+<p>Viruses are programs that cause problems if they manage to find their way onto your computer. A common way of them getting onto your computer is through email messages.</p>
 
-<p>Viruses which can affect computers running Linux are quite rare, so you are <link xref="net-antivirus">unlikely to get a virus through email or otherwise</link>. If you receive an email with a virus hidden in it, it will probably have no effect on your computer. As such, you probably don't need to scan your email for viruses.</p>
+<p>Viruses that can affect computers running Linux are quite rare, so you are <link xref="net-antivirus">unlikely to get a virus through email or otherwise</link>. If you receive an email with a virus hidden in it, it will probably have no effect on your computer. As such, you probably don't need to scan your email for viruses.</p>
 
 <p>You may, however, wish to scan your email for viruses in case you happen to forward a virus from one person to another. For example, if one of your friends has a Windows computer with a virus and sends you a virus-infected email, and you then forward that email to another friend with a Windows computer, then the second friend might get the virus too. You could install an anti-virus application to scan your emails to prevent this, but it's unlikely to happen and most people using Windows and Mac OS have anti-virus software of their own anyway.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
index 4ed9aee..2851cbb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-email">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
index dc25f58..f0f540e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-what-is-ip-address"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -22,19 +22,21 @@
 
   <title>Find your IP address</title>
 
-  <p>Knowing your IP address can help you to troubleshoot problems with your internet connection. You may be surprised to learn that you have <em>two</em> IP addresses: an IP address for your computer on the internal network and an IP address for your computer on the internet.</p>
+  <p>Knowing your IP address can help you troubleshoot problems with your internet connection. You may be surprised to learn that you have <em>two</em> IP addresses: an IP address for your computer on the internal network and an IP address for your computer on the internet.</p>
 
-  <p>Find your internal IP address:</p>
   <steps>
+    <title>Find your internal (network) IP address</title>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wired</gui> or <gui>Wireless</gui> from the list on the left, depending on which network connection you want to find the IP address for.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Your internal IP address will be displayed as the <gui>IP Address</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Your internal IP address will be displayed in the list of information.</p></item>
   </steps>  
 
-  <p>Find your external, internet IP address:</p>
   <steps>
+  	<title>Find your external (internet) IP address</title>
     <item><p>Visit <link href="http://whatismyipaddress.com/";>whatismyipaddress.com</link>.</p></item>
     <item><p>The site will display your external IP address for you.</p></item>
   </steps>
- 
+
+<p>Depending on how your computer connects to the internet, these addresses may be the same.</p>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
index b154418..a639c54 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
     <desc>You can control which programs can access the network. This helps to keep your computer secure.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Paul W. Frields</name>
       <email>stickster gmail com</email>
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ As it is, we're stuck in "whatever distros do" territory.</p>
 </comment>
 
   <p>Your system should be equipped with a <em>firewall</em> that allows it to block programs from being accessed by other people on the internet or your network. This helps to keep your computer secure.</p>
-  <p>Many applications can provide network services. For instance, you can share files or let someone view your desktop remotely. Depending on how your computer is set up, you may need to adjust the firewall to allow these services to work as intended.</p>
+  <p>Many applications can use your network connection. For instance, you can share files or let someone view your desktop remotely when connected to a network. Depending on how your computer is set up, you may need to adjust the firewall to allow these services to work as intended.</p>
   <p>Each program that provides network services uses a specific <em>network port</em>. To enable other computers on the network to access a service, you may need to "open" its assigned port on the firewall:</p>
 
   <steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
index d386255..2ed8a67 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-firewall-on-off"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     <desc>You need to specify the right network port to enable/disable network access for a program with your firewall.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Paul W. Frields</name>
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Commonly-used network ports</title>
-  <p>This is a list of network ports commonly used by applications which provide network services, like file sharing or remote desktop viewing. You can change your system's firewall to <link xref="net-firewall-on-off">block or allow access</link> to these applications. There are thousands of ports in use, so this table isn't complete.</p>
+  <p>This is a list of network ports commonly used by applications that provide network services, like file sharing or remote desktop viewing. You can change your system's firewall to <link xref="net-firewall-on-off">block or allow access</link> to these applications. There are thousands of ports in use, so this table isn't complete.</p>
 
   <table shade="rows" frame="top">
     <thead>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
index d12e29b..2607156 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
@@ -3,15 +3,16 @@
       id="net-fixed-ip-address">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="net-findip"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Using a static IP address can make it easier to administer some network services.</desc>
+    <desc>Using a static IP address can make it easier to provide some network services from your computer.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-general.page b/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
index 418ad48..3415cc4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-general">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page b/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page
index 5d09cd2..0134901 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
 <title>Install the Flash plug-in</title>
 
-<p><app>Flash</app> is a <em>plug-in</em> for your web browser which allows you to watch videos and use interactive web pages on some websites. Some websites won't work without Flash.</p>
+<p><app>Flash</app> is a <em>plug-in</em> for your web browser that allows you to watch videos and use interactive web pages on some websites. Some websites won't work without Flash.</p>
 
 <comment>
 <cite>shaunm</cite>
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
   <p>Go to the <link href="http://get.adobe.com/flashplayer";>Flash Player download website</link>. Your browser and operating system should be automatically detected.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Click where it says <gui>Select a version to download</gui> and choose the type of software installer that works for your Linux distribution. If you don't know which to use, choose the <file>.tar.gz</file> option.</p>
+  <p>Click where it says <gui>Select version to download</gui> and choose the type of software installer that works for your Linux distribution. If you don't know which to use, choose the <file>.tar.gz</file> option.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
   <p>Look at the <link href="http://kb2.adobe.com/cps/153/tn_15380.html";>installation instructions for Flash</link> to learn how to install it for your web browser.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page b/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page
index 2001d67..df81149 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
index 6b54093..66d7916 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 
   <title>What is a MAC address?</title>
 
-  <p>A <em>MAC address</em> is the unique identifier that is assigned by the manufacturer to a piece of network hardware (like a wireless card or an ethernet card). <em>MAC</em> stands for <em>Media Access Control</em>, and each identifier is intended to be unique to a particular device.</p>
+  <p>A <em>MAC address</em> is the unique identifier that is assigned by the manufacturer to a piece of network hardware (like a wireless card or an ethernet card). MAC stands for <em>Media Access Control</em>, and each identifier is intended to be unique to a particular device.</p>
 
   <p>A MAC address consists of six sets of two characters, each separated by a colon. <code>00:1B:44:11:3A:B7</code> is an example of a MAC address.</p>
 
@@ -32,6 +32,6 @@
     <item><p>Your MAC address will be displayed as the <gui>Hardware Address</gui>.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>In practice, you may need to <link xref="net-editcon">modify or "spoof" a MAC address</link>. For example, some internet service providers may require that a specific MAC address be used to access their service. If the network card stops working, and you need to change your network card, the service won't work anymore. In such cases, you would need to spoof the MAC address.</p>
+  <p>In practice, you may need to <link xref="net-editcon">modify or "spoof" a MAC address</link>. For example, some internet service providers may require that a specific MAC address be used to access their service. If the network card stops working, and you need swap a new card in, the service won't work anymore. In such cases, you would need to spoof the MAC address.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
index 207fbaa..4a9647e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
@@ -5,34 +5,30 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc></desc>
+    <desc>If network settings don't get assigned automatically, you may have to enter them yourself.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Manually set network settings</title>
 
-<p>If your network doesn't automatically assign network settings to your computer, you may have to manually enter the settings yourself. This topic assumes that you already know the correct settings to use. If not, you may need to ask your network administrator or look at the settings of your router or switch.</p>
-
-<p>To manually set your network settings:</p>
+<p>If your network doesn't automatically assign network settings to your computer, you may have to manually enter the settings yourself. This topic assumes that you already know the correct settings to use. If not, you may need to ask your network administrator or look at the settings of your router or network switch.</p>
 
 <steps>
+  <title>To manually set your network settings:</title>
  <item>
   <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Find the network connection that you want to setup manually. For example, if you plug in to the network with a cable, look at <gui>Wired</gui>.</p>
- </item>
- 
- <item>
-  <p>Click the connection you want to edit to select it, then click <gui>Configure</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Select the network connection that you want to setup manually and click <gui>Configure</gui>. For example, if you plug in to the network with a cable, look at <gui>Wired</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Make sure that your wireless card is turned on or a network cable is plugged in. Otherwise, you won't be able to click <gui>Configure</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
@@ -49,7 +45,7 @@
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Save</gui>. If you are not connected to the network, go to the network icon on the top bar and connect to it. Test the network settings by trying to visit a website or look at shared files on the network, for example.</p>
+  <p>Click <gui>Save</gui>. If you are not connected to the network, click the network icon on the top bar and connect. Test the network settings by trying to visit a website or looking at shared files on the network, for example.</p>
  </item>
  
 </steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
index 3c226ee..7a98fd9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-othersedit"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ some standard language. grep for similar.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>From the <gui>Network Name</gui> drop-down list, select the connection you want everyone to be able to use and then click <gui>Options</gui>.</p>
+  <p>From the <gui>Network Name</gui> drop-down list, select the connection you want everyone to be able to use and then click <gui>Configure</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page b/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
index 7ece6b1..1f95d81 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
@@ -3,13 +3,13 @@
       id="net-problem">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-21" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
     <desc>
       <link xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting">Troubleshooting wireless connections</link>,
-      <link xref="net-wireless-find">Finding your wifi network</link>,
+      <link xref="net-wireless-find">finding your wifi network</link>...
         </desc>
  
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page b/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
index 677dde0..dfab575 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-security-tips">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-21" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
@@ -20,34 +20,35 @@
 
 <title>Staying safe on the internet</title>
 
-<p>A reason why you may be using Linux is for the robust security that it is known for. One reason 
-Linux is relatively safe from malware and viruses is due to the number of people that use it.
-Viruses are targeted at popular operating systems like Windows that have an extremely massive 
-user base. Linux is also very secure due to its open source nature which allows experts 
+<p>A possible reason for why you are using Linux is the robust security that 
+it is known for. One reason that Linux is relatively safe from malware and 
+viruses is due to the lower number of people who use it.
+Viruses are targeted at popular operating systems like Windows, that have an extremely large 
+user base. Linux is also very secure due to its open source nature, which allows experts 
 to modify and enhance the security features included with each distribution.</p>
 
-<p>Despite the measures taken to ensure your installation of Linux is secure, there
-are always vulnerabilities. As an average user on the internet you are still susceptible to:</p>
+<p>Despite the measures taken to ensure that your installation of Linux is secure, there
+are always vulnerabilities. As an average user on the internet you can still be susceptible to:</p>
 
  <list>
-  <item><p>Phishing Scams (Sites that try to obtain sensitive information through deception)</p></item>
+  <item><p>Phishing Scams (websites and emails that try to obtain sensitive information through deception)</p></item>
   <item><p><link xref="net-email-virus">Forwarding malicious emails</link></p></item>
-  <item><p><link xref="net-antivirus">Applications with malicious intents (Viruses)</link></p></item>
-  <item><p><link xref="net-wireless-wepwpa">Unwarranted remote/local network access</link></p></item>
+  <item><p><link xref="net-antivirus">Applications with malicious intent (viruses)</link></p></item>
+  <item><p><link xref="net-wireless-wepwpa">Unauthorised remote/local network access</link></p></item>
  </list>
 
-<p>To stay safe from malicious exploits, keep in mind the following tips:</p>
+<p>To stay safe online, keep in mind the following tips:</p>
 
  <list>
-  <item><p>Do not open emails, attachments, or links that were sent from people you do not know.</p></item>
-  <item><p>If a website's offer is too good to be true or asks for sensitive information
-that seems unnecessary, then think twice about what you are submitting and the potential 
+  <item><p>Be wary of emails, attachments, or links that were sent from people you do not know.</p></item>
+  <item><p>If a website's offer is too good to be true, or asks for sensitive information
+that seems unnecessary, then think twice about what information you are submitting and the potential 
 consequences if that information is compromised by identity thieves or other criminals.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Be careful in providing any application root level permissions, especially ones that 
+  <item><p>Be careful in providing any application <link xref="user-admin-explain">root level permissions</link>, especially ones that 
 you have not used before or apps that are not well-known. Providing anyone/anything with root level 
 permissions puts your computer at high risk to exploitation.</p></item>
   <item><p>Make sure you are only running necessary remote-access services. Having
-<app>SSH</app> or <app>VNC</app> running can be useful but also leaves your computer open to intrusion if not 
+SSH or VNC running can be useful, but also leaves your computer open to intrusion if not 
 secured properly. Consider using a <link xref="net-firewall-on-off">firewall</link> to help 
 protect your computer from intrusion.</p></item>
  </list>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-security.page b/gnome-help/C/net-security.page
index a3cfcd8..b643170 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-security.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-security.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-security">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-21" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
index 08d9953..610c3e9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-21" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -23,33 +23,33 @@
 
 <list>
  <item>
-  <p>Busy time of day</p>
-  <p>Internet service providers commonly set-up internet connections so that they are shared between several households. Even though you connect separately, through your own phone line or cable connection, the connection to the rest of the internet at the telephone exchange might actually be shared. If this is the case and lots of your neighbors are using the internet at the same time as you, you might notice a slow-down. You're most likely to experience this at times when your neighbors are probably on the internet (in the evenings, for example).</p>
+  <p><em style="strong">Busy time of day</em></p>
+  <p>Internet service providers commonly setup internet connections so that they are shared between several households. Even though you connect separately, through your own phone line or cable connection, the connection to the rest of the internet at the telephone exchange might actually be shared. If this is the case and lots of your neighbors are using the internet at the same time as you, you might notice a slow-down. You're most likely to experience this at times when your neighbors are probably on the internet (in the evenings, for example).</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Downloading lots of things at once</p>
+  <p><em style="strong">Downloading lots of things at once</em></p>
   <p>If you or someone else using your internet connection are downloading several files at once, or watching videos, the internet connection might not be fast enough to keep up with the demand. In this case, it will feel slower.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Unreliable connection</p>
+  <p><em style="strong">Unreliable connection</em></p>
   <p>Some internet connections are just unreliable, especially temporary ones or those in high demand areas. If you are in a busy coffee shop or a conference center, the internet connection might be too busy or simply unreliable.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Low wireless connection signal</p>
+  <p><em style="strong">Low wireless connection signal</em></p>
   <p>If you're connected to the internet by wireless (wifi), check the network icon on the top bar to see if you have good wireless signal. If not, the internet may seem slow because you don't have a very strong signal.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Using a slower mobile internet connection</p>
+  <p><em style="strong">Using a slower mobile internet connection</em></p>
   <p>If you have a mobile internet connection and notice that it is going slowly, you may have moved into an area where signal reception is poor. When this happens, the internet connection will automatically switch from a fast "mobile broadband" connection like 3G to a more reliable, but slower, connection like GPRS.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Web browser has a problem</p>
-  <p>Sometimes web browsers encounter a problem which makes them run slow. This could be for any number of reasons - you could have visited a website which the browser struggled to load, or you might have had the browser open for a long time, for example. Try closing all of the browser's windows and then opening the browser again to see if this makes a difference.</p>
+  <p><em style="strong">Web browser has a problem</em></p>
+  <p>Sometimes web browsers encounter a problem that makes them run slow. This could be for any number of reasons - you could have visited a website that the browser struggled to load, or you might have had the browser open for a long time, for example. Try closing all of the browser's windows and then opening the browser again to see if this makes a difference.</p>
  </item>
  
 </list>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
index 9472383..232a67d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
   <title>What is an IP address?</title>
 
-  <p>"IP address" stands for <em>Internet Protocol address</em>, and each device that is connected to a network (such as the internet) has one.</p>
+  <p>"IP address" stands for <em>Internet Protocol address</em>, and each device that is connected to a network (like the internet) has one.</p>
 
   <p>An IP address is similar to your phone number. Your phone number is a unique set of numbers that identifies your phone so that other people can call you. Similarly, an IP address is a unique set of numbers that identifies your computer so that it can send and receive data with other computers.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
index d96ca79..5384173 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -19,12 +19,12 @@
 
 <p>To set up most wired network connections, all you need to do is plug in a network cable. The network icon on the top bar should spin or pulse for a few seconds and then will change to a "socket" icon when you are connected.</p>
 
-<p>If this does not happen, you should first of all make sure that your network cable is plugged in. One end of the cable should be plugged into the rectangular Ethernet (network) port on your computer, the other end should be plugged into a switch, router, network wall socket or similar (depending on the network setup you have). Usually, a light beside the Ethernet port will indicate it is plugged and active.</p>
+<p>If this does not happen, you should first of all make sure that your network cable is plugged in. One end of the cable should be plugged into the rectangular Ethernet (network) port on your computer, and the other end should be plugged into a switch, router, network wall socket or similar (depending on the network setup you have). Sometimes, a light beside the Ethernet port will indicate that it is plugged in and active.</p>
 
 <note>
  <p>You can't plug one computer directly into another one with a network cable (at least, not without some extra setting-up). To connect two computers, you should plug them both into a network hub, router or switch.</p>
 </note>
 
-<p>If you are still not connected, your network may not support automatic setup (DHCP). In this case you'll have to <link xref="net-manual">configure it manually</link>.</p>
+<p>If you are still not connected, your network may not support automatic setup (DHCP). In this case you will have to <link xref="net-manual">configure it manually</link>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
index 1140ee1..9c60f18 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-wired">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
index dba2f68..84ee2fd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Use an ad-hoc network to allow other devices to connect to you
-    and your network connections.</desc>
+    <desc>Use an ad-hoc network to allow other devices to connect to your
+    computer and its network connections.</desc>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
index 2fd8e29..c2d357b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
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