[gnome-user-docs] Add information to multiple selection.



commit ab6cd9018746c7bbf9ec2e5848609a62b1ccce1c
Author: Julita Inca <yrazes gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 20 19:02:26 2012 -0500

    Add information to multiple selection.

 gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/documents-info.page            |    8 +++++---
 gnome-help/C/documents-location.page        |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/documents-online.page          |    7 +++++--
 gnome-help/C/documents-print.page           |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/documents-select.page          |   16 +++++++++-------
 6 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page
index 01a1b10..6d7cd6b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page
@@ -18,7 +18,8 @@
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-20" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
     <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
+    the reader will be able to send all of the documents in a collection to 
+    someone by email or similar.</p>
   </comment>
 
   <p>Short introductory text...</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-info.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-info.page
index e62a8db..34060da 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-info.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-info.page
@@ -17,11 +17,13 @@
 
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-20" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
+    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to sort and search documents and 
+      collections. By the end of this page, the reader will be able to:
+     - Explain how you can view metadata, and what metadata is typically stored.
+     - Mention that this metadata is searched.</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p>Short introductory text...</p>
+  <p>Shorts .</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>First step...</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-location.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-location.page
index 84943a6..5572f9c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-location.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-location.page
@@ -18,7 +18,8 @@
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-20" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
     <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
+    the reader will be able to find out which location a document is stored
+    in (i.e. find its URI).</p>
   </comment>
 
   <p>Short introductory text...</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-online.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-online.page
index 5ba94aa..9fea24e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-online.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-online.page
@@ -17,8 +17,11 @@
 
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-20" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
+    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to work with Google Docs. 
+     By the end of this page, the reader will be able to:
+     - Explain how you can view remote/Google documents in Documents
+     - Explain that you need to add an account in Online Accounts (link to
+     those topics)</p>
   </comment>
 
   <p>Short introductory text...</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-print.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-print.page
index 43ae32d..47785ea 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-print.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-print.page
@@ -18,7 +18,8 @@
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-20" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
     <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
+    the reader will be able to print a document (can you even print them yet?).
+    </p>
   </comment>
 
   <p>Short introductory text...</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-select.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-select.page
index dbd9407..e676810 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-select.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-select.page
@@ -10,23 +10,25 @@
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc></desc>
+   <desc>Use selection mode to select more than one document or collection.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Selecting multiple documents</title>
 
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-20" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
+    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to sort their documents. 
+    By the end of this page, the reader will be able to explain how selection
+    mode works</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p>Short introductory text...</p>
+  <p>You may select many documents or collections to send them by mail to friends 
+  or co-workers, to print them, or maybe to be delete them. 
+  To select documents or collections at the same time:</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>First step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the button that looks like a check.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Select the documents or collections you need.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
 </page>



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