[baobab/mallard-documentation: 18/27] Post-review fixes to help



commit 569a91afc884a437ba25c0b4e37908e2c6c08ea3
Author: Julita Inca <yrazes gmail com>
Date:   Fri Feb 17 07:42:58 2012 -0500

    Post-review fixes to help

 help/C/custom-location.page                        |    2 +-
 .../C/{multi-core.page => prob-multi-devices.page} |   11 +++++------
 help/C/{no-come-up.page => prob-no-launch.page}    |    0
 help/C/scan-filesystem.page                        |    1 -
 help/C/scan-folder.page                            |    5 ++---
 help/C/scan-home.page                              |    6 +++---
 6 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/custom-location.page b/help/C/custom-location.page
index 4bbb5a6..e79c7df 100644
--- a/help/C/custom-location.page
+++ b/help/C/custom-location.page
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Scan a remote filesystem using Custom Location.</desc>
+    <desc>Scan a remote file system using Custom Location.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Custom Location</title>
diff --git a/help/C/multi-core.page b/help/C/prob-multi-devices.page
similarity index 79%
rename from help/C/multi-core.page
rename to help/C/prob-multi-devices.page
index 42a6c0e..0543c39 100644
--- a/help/C/multi-core.page
+++ b/help/C/prob-multi-devices.page
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Choose which physical devices in your computer are scanned.</desc>
+    <desc>Choose which ph devices in your computer are scanned.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Can I scan my disks separately if I have more than one?</title>
@@ -30,11 +30,10 @@
   only one or two are usually used. To customize the hard disk scan:</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click the <gui>Edit</gui> menu.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <gui>Preferences</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Use the checkboxes to select only the physical disk or disks to be
-    scanned.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>Preferences</gui> from the <gui>Edit</gui> menu.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Select the storage device you need to be scanned.</p></item>
     <item><p>Check <gui>Monitor changes to your home folder</gui> to be notified
-    when files are added to or removed from the <file>Home</file> folder.</p></item>
+    when files are added to or removed from the <file>Home</file> folder.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/no-come-up.page b/help/C/prob-no-launch.page
similarity index 100%
rename from help/C/no-come-up.page
rename to help/C/prob-no-launch.page
diff --git a/help/C/scan-filesystem.page b/help/C/scan-filesystem.page
index cc47669..33136dc 100644
--- a/help/C/scan-filesystem.page
+++ b/help/C/scan-filesystem.page
@@ -33,7 +33,6 @@
   <list>
     <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Analyzer</gui><gui>Scan
     filesystem</gui></guiseq> from the menu.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>Scan Filesystem</gui> in the toolbar.</p></item>
     <item><p>Press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>F</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
   </list>
 
diff --git a/help/C/scan-folder.page b/help/C/scan-folder.page
index f1ff4da..eeed276 100644
--- a/help/C/scan-folder.page
+++ b/help/C/scan-folder.page
@@ -34,9 +34,8 @@
     <item><p>Launch the command using one of the following:</p>
 
       <list>
-        <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Analyzer</gui><gui>Scan
-        Folder</gui></guiseq> from the menu.</p></item>
-        <item><p>Click <gui>Scan a folder</gui> in the toolbar.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Analyzer</gui>
+              <gui>Scan Folderâ</gui></guiseq> from the menu.</p></item>
         <item><p>Press <keyseq><key>CTRL</key><key>O</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
       </list>
     </item>
diff --git a/help/C/scan-home.page b/help/C/scan-home.page
index f8c4adc..bca85d2 100644
--- a/help/C/scan-home.page
+++ b/help/C/scan-home.page
@@ -50,7 +50,6 @@
   <list>
     <item><p>select <guiseq><gui>Analyzer</gui><gui>Scan Home
     Folder</gui></guiseq> from the menu.</p></item>
-    <item><p>click <gui>Scan Home</gui> in the toolbar.</p></item>
     <item><p>press <keyseq><key>CTRL</key><key>S</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
   </list>
 
@@ -67,7 +66,8 @@
   for a <link href="help:gnome-help/backup-how">backup</link> of your
   <file>Home</file> directory.</p>
 
-  <p>Right click on any folder and select <gui>Open Folder</gui> to browse all the folders inside, 
-    or <gui>Move to Trash</gui> to move your folder to <file>Trash</file>.</p>
+  <p>Right click on any folder and select <gui>Open Folder</gui> 
+  to browse all the folders inside, or <gui>Move to Trash</gui> 
+  to move your folder to <file>Trash</file>.</p>
 
 </page>



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