[gnome-user-docs] Edits for style to files-share.page

[Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>]

commit 2ac04813615d514d52794ce5eea8c4936fb071ba
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 20 03:57:18 2012 +0100

    Edits for style to files-share.page

 gnome-help/C/files-share.page |   14 +++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/files-sort.page  |    6 +++++-
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-share.page b/gnome-help/C/files-share.page
index 9271cf4..998879c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-share.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-share.page
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     <desc>Easily transfer files to your contacts and devices from
     the file manager.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
 <title>Share and transfer files</title>
 
 <comment>
-  <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
-  <p>If we get gnome-user-share integrated nicely in 3.2, we should discuss
+  <cite date="2012-02-20">jim</cite>
+  <p>If we get gnome-user-share integrated eventually, we should discuss
   or link that here.</p>
 </comment>
 
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ directly from the file manager.</p>
 <note style="tip">
   <p>You can send multiple files at once. Select multiple files by holding
   down <key>Ctrl</key>, then right-click any selected file. You can have
-  the files automatically packed into a tar or zip archive.</p>
+  the files automatically compressed into a zip or tar archive.</p>
 </note>
 
 <list>
@@ -62,10 +62,10 @@ directly from the file manager.</p>
   <gui>Bluetooth (OBEX Push)</gui> and select the device to send the file to.
   You will only see devices you have already paired with.
   See <link xref="bluetooth"/> for more information.</p></item>
-  <item><p>To copy the file to an external device like a USB flash drive,
+  <item><p>To copy a file to an external device like a USB flash drive,
   or to upload it to a server you've connected to, select <gui>Removable
-  disks and shares</gui>, then select the device or server you want to
-  copy the file to.</p></item>
+  disks and shares</gui>, then select the device or server where you want to
+  copy the file.</p></item>
 </list>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-sort.page b/gnome-help/C/files-sort.page
index 571cefd..14e2091 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-sort.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-sort.page
@@ -6,11 +6,15 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="files"/>
     <desc>Arrange files by name, size, type, or when they were changed.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+      <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>