[gnome-user-docs] user pages first batch reviewed for 3.4.0

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 02a4467d119547a90216cc15f257e8c8af9d5178
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Feb 20 14:13:42 2012 -0500

    user pages first batch reviewed for 3.4.0

 gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page |   12 ++++++------
 gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page  |   12 ++++++++----
 3 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
index 076553e..6574a69 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
       <link xref="user-changepassword">change password</link>,
       <link xref="user-admin-change">administrators</link>...
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
index ce7ec74..835aa93 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     
     <desc>You need admin privileges to change important parts of your system.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -19,10 +19,10 @@
 
 <title>How do administrative privileges work?</title>
 
-  <p>As well as the files that <em>you</em> create, your computer also has a
- number of files which are needed by the system for it to work properly. If
- these important <em>system files</em> are changed improperly they can cause
- various things to break, so they are protected from changes by default. Certain
+  <p>As well as the files that <em>you</em> create, your computer has a number
+ of files which are needed by the system for it to work properly. If these
+ important <em>system files</em> are changed improperly they can cause various
+ things to break, so they are protected from changes by default. Certain
  applications also modify important parts of the system, and so are also
  protected.</p>
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
  file and break something.</p>
 
   <p>In summary, admin privileges allow you to change important parts of your
- system when you need to, but prevent you from doing it accidentally.</p>
+ system when needed, but prevent you from doing it accidentally.</p>
 
 <note>
  <title>What does "super user" mean?</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
index 6b77fc6..62b9a11 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#passwords"/>
     
     <desc>Use longer, more complicated passwords.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -19,6 +19,10 @@
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -43,8 +47,8 @@
  <item>
   <p>Use a mixture of upper-case and lower-case letters, numbers, symbols and
  spaces in the password.  This makes it more difficult to guess; there are more
- symbols to choose from, so more possible passwords that someone would have to
- check when trying to guess yours.</p>
+ symbols from which to choose, meaning more possible passwords that someone
+ would have to check when trying to guess yours.</p>
   <note>
   <p>A good method for choosing a password is to take the first letter of each
  word in a phrase that you can remember.  The phrase could be the name of a
@@ -59,7 +63,7 @@
  <item>
   <p>Do not use any words that appear in a standard dictionary in any language.
   Password crackers will try these first.   The most common password is
- "password" - people can guess passwords like this very quickly!</p>
+ "password" -- people can guess passwords like this very quickly!</p>
   </item>
   <item>
   <p>Do not use any personal information such as a date, license plate number,