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[gnome-user-docs] Finish power-*.page review for 3.4.0

commit 6edafeab06e6cd32c569372a1f0d2275ab73e578
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 googlemail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 20 14:14:46 2012 +0000

    Finish power-*.page review for 3.4.0

 gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page      |   24 +++++++++++++++---
 gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page    |   33 ++++++++++++++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page  |   25 +++++++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page |   42 +++++++++++++++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/power.page               |    8 +++---
 gnome-help/Makefile.am                |    5 ++-
 6 files changed, 104 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page b/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page
index 6a52862..c9b8bbb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page
@@ -4,22 +4,38 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="power#battery"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
     <desc>Allowing the battery to completely discharge is bad for it.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Why did my computer turn off/hibernate when the battery got to 10%?</title>
 
-<p>When the charge level of the battery gets too low, your computer will automatically hibernate (that is, it will save all of your open documents and applications, and then turn off). It does this to make sure that the battery doesn't completely discharge, since this is bad for the battery. If the battery just ran out, the computer wouldn't have time to shut down properly either.</p>
+<p>When the charge level of the battery gets too low, your computer will
+automatically <link xref="power-hibernate">hibernate</link>. It does this to
+make sure that the battery does not completely discharge, since this is bad for
+the battery. If the battery just ran out, the computer would not have time to
+shut down properly either.</p>
 
-<p>You can change what happens when the battery level gets too low by clicking your name at the top of the screen, selecting <gui>System Settings</gui>, and then opening the <gui>Power</gui> settings. Look at the <gui>When power is critically low</gui> setting. You can choose for the computer to hibernate or shut down. If you choose shut down, your applications and documents <em>will not</em> be saved before the computer turns off.</p>
+<p>You can change what happens when the battery level gets too low by opening
+<app>Power</app> from the <gui>Activities</gui> overview. Look at the <gui>When
+power is critically low</gui> setting. You can choose for the computer to
+hibernate or shut down. If you choose shut down, your applications and
+documents <em>will not</em> be saved before the computer turns off.</p>
 
-<p>Some computers have problems hibernating, and may not be able to recover the applications and documents you had open when you turn on the computer again. In this case, it is possible that you could lose some of your work if you didn't save it before the computer hibernated. You may be able to <link xref="power-suspendfail">fix problems with hibernation</link> though.</p>
+<p>Some computers have problems hibernating, and may not be able to recover the
+applications and documents you had open when you turn on the computer again. In
+this case, it is possible that you could lose some of your work if you did not
+save it before the computer hibernated. You may be able to <link
+xref="power-suspendfail">fix problems with hibernation</link> though.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page b/gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page
index 0032df4..e85f7c3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page
@@ -7,22 +7,45 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="power-suspendfail"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
-    <desc>Some wireless devices have problems handling when your computer is sent to sleep and don't wake up again properly.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
+    <desc>Some wireless devices have problems handling when your computer is suspended and does not resume properly.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>I have no wireless network when I wake up my computer</title>
 
-<p>If you have sent your computer to sleep (suspended it) or hibernated it, you may find that your wireless internet connection doesn't work when you wake it up again. This happens when the wireless device's <link xref="hardware-driver">drivers</link> don't fully support certain power saving features. Typically, the wireless connection fails to turn on properly when the computer wakes up.</p>
+<p>If you have suspended your computer, or it has hibernated, you may find that
+your wireless internet connection does not work when you resume it again. This
+happens when the <link xref="hardware-driver">driver</link> for the wireless
+device does not fully support certain power saving features. Typically, the
+wireless connection fails to turn on properly when the computer is resumed.</p>
 
-<p>If this happens, try turning your wireless connection off and then on again. If you have a power switch for the wireless card, turn it off and then on again and see if it works. Some laptops have a keyboard shortcut that can be used to turn the wireless on and off; its icon often looks like a "radio beacon". You can also try clicking the network icon on the top bar and unchecking <gui>Enable wireless</gui>, waiting for a few seconds, and the re-checking it.</p>
+<p>If this happens, try switching your wireless off and then back on again:</p>
+<steps>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui></p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select the <gui>Wireless</gui> tab</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Switch the wireless off and then on again</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>If the wireless still does not work, switch on <gui>Airplane Mode</gui> and then switch it off again</p>
+  </item>
+</steps>
 
-<p>If this doesn't work, restarting your computer should get the wireless working again.</p>
+<p>If this does not work, restarting your computer should make the wireless work
+again.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page b/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
index 36d1f7f..6bfe245 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
     <desc>Your computer will work, but you might need a different power cable or a travel adapter.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -19,16 +19,29 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-<title>Will my computer work with a different country's power supply?</title>
+<title>Will my computer work with a power supply in another country?</title>
 
-<p>Different countries use power supplies at different voltages (usually 110V or 220-240V) and AC frequencies (usually 50 Hz or 60 Hz). Your computer should work with a different country's power supply as long as you have an appropriate power adapter. You may also need to flip a switch.</p>
+<p>Different countries use power supplies at different voltages (usually 110V
+or 220-240V) and AC frequencies (usually 50 Hz or 60 Hz). Your computer should
+work with a different power supply in a different country as long as you have
+an appropriate power adapter. You may also need to flip a switch.</p>
 
-<p>If you have a laptop, all you should need to do is get the right plug for your power adapter. Many laptops come packaged with more than one plug for their adapter, so you may already have the right one. If not, plugging your existing one into a standard travel adapter will suffice.</p>
+<p>If you have a laptop, all you should need to do is get the right plug for
+your power adapter. Many laptops come packaged with more than one plug for
+their adapter, so you may already have the right one. If not, plugging your
+existing one into a standard travel adapter will suffice.</p>
 
-<p>If you have a desktop computer, you can also get a cable with a different plug, or use a travel adapter. In this case, however, you may need to change the voltage switch on the computer's power supply, if there is one. Many computers don't have a switch like this, and will happily work with either voltage. Look at the back of the computer and find the socket that the power cable plugs into. Somewhere nearby, there may be a small switch marked "110V" or "230V" (for example). Switch it if you need to.</p>
+<p>If you have a desktop computer, you can also get a cable with a different
+plug, or use a travel adapter. In this case, however, you may need to change
+the voltage switch on the computer's power supply, if there is one. Many
+computers do not have a switch like this, and will happily work with either
+voltage. Look at the back of the computer and find the socket that the power
+cable plugs into. Somewhere nearby, there may be a small switch marked "110V"
+or "230V" (for example). Switch it if you need to.</p>
 
 <note style="warning">
- <p>Be careful when changing power cables or using travel adapters. Switch everything off first if you can.</p>
+  <p>Be careful when changing power cables or using travel adapters. Switch
+  everything off first if you can.</p>
 </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page b/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page
index e18c769..4f0023f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics" group="#last"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
     
     <desc>Loose cables and hardware problems are possible reasons.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
@@ -18,34 +18,52 @@
 
 <title>My computer will not turn on</title>
 
-<p>There are a number of reasons why your computer will not turn on. This topic gives a brief overview of some of the possible reasons.</p>
+<p>There are a number of reasons why your computer will not turn on. This topic
+gives a brief overview of some of the possible reasons.</p>
 
   <comment>
    <cite date="2012-02-19" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
    <p>This is a complicated topic. Give troubleshooting steps/reasons for why the computer won't turn on. Some of the reasons may be down to hardware failure.</p>
    <p>This was marked incomplete as of 2011-04-04. I marked it final
-   for 3.0. If there's more to add, revisit for 3.2.</p>
+   for 3.0. If there is more to add, revisit for 3.2.</p>
   </comment>
 	
 <section id="nopower">
- <title>Computer not plugged in, empty battery, or loose cable</title>
- <p>Make sure that the power cables of the computer are firmly plugged in and the power outlets are switched on. Make sure that the monitor is plugged in and switched on too. If you have a laptop, connect the charging cable (in case it has run out of battery). You may also want to check that the battery is correctly fitted in place (check the underside of the laptop).</p>
+  <title>Computer not plugged in, empty battery, or loose cable</title>
+  <p>Make sure that the power cables of the computer are firmly plugged in and
+  the power outlets are switched on. Make sure that the monitor is plugged in
+  and switched on too. If you have a laptop, connect the charging cable (in
+  case it has run out of battery). You may also want to check that the battery
+  is correctly fitted in place (check the underside of the laptop) if it is
+  removable.</p>
 </section>
  
 <section id="hardwareproblem">
- <title>Problem with the computer hardware</title>
- <p>A component of your computer may be broken or malfunctioning. If this is the case, you will need to get your computer repaired. Common faults include a broken power supply unit, incorrectly-fitted components (such as the memory/RAM) and a faulty motherboard.</p>
+  <title>Problem with the computer hardware</title>
+  <p>A component of your computer may be broken or malfunctioning. If this is
+  the case, you will need to get your computer repaired. Common faults include
+  a broken power supply unit, incorrectly-fitted components (such as the
+  memory/RAM) and a faulty motherboard.</p>
 </section>
  
 <section id="beeps">
- <title>The computer beeps and then switches off</title>
- <p>If the computer beeps several times when you turn it on and then turns off (or fails to start), it may be indicating that it has detected a problem. These beeps are sometimes referred to as <em>beep codes</em>, and the pattern of beeps is intended to tell you what the problem with the computer is. Different manufacturers use different beep codes, so you will have to consult the manual for your computer's motherboard, or take your computer in for repairs.</p>
+  <title>The computer beeps and then switches off</title>
+  <p>If the computer beeps several times when you turn it on and then turns off
+  (or fails to start), it may be indicating that it has detected a problem.
+  These beeps are sometimes referred to as <em>beep codes</em>, and the pattern
+  of beeps is intended to tell you what the problem with the computer is.
+  Different manufacturers use different beep codes, so you will have to consult
+  the manual for your computer's motherboard, or take your computer in for
+  repairs.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="fans">
- <title>The computer fans are spinning but nothing is on the screen</title>
- <p>The first thing to check is that your monitor is plugged in and turned on.</p>
- <p>This problem could also be due to a hardware fault. The fans might turn on when you press the power button, but other essential parts of the computer might fail to turn on. In this case, take your computer in for repairs.</p>
+  <title>The computer fans are spinning but nothing is on the screen</title>
+  <p>The first thing to check is that your monitor is plugged in and turned
+  on.</p>
+  <p>This problem could also be due to a hardware fault. The fans might turn on
+  when you press the power button, but other essential parts of the computer
+  might fail to turn on. In this case, take your computer in for repairs.</p>
 </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power.page b/gnome-help/C/power.page
index 8fc4bbe..42118f1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware" />
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Natalia Ruz</name>
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
     
     <desc>
-      <link xref="power-suspendhibernate">Suspend</link>,
-      <link xref="power-batterylife">energy savings</link>,
-      <link xref="power-whydim">screen dimming</link>...
+      <link xref="power-suspend">Suspend</link>,
+      <link xref="power-off">power off</link>,
+      <link xref="power-whydim">screen dimming</link>â
     </desc>
     
 </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index 35de0c6..a0aaaab 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -224,15 +224,16 @@ HELP_FILES = \
 	power-batteryoptimal.page \
 	power-batteryslow.page \
 	power-batterywindows.page \
-	power-brighter.page \
 	power-closelid.page \
 	power-constantfan.page \
+	power-hibernate.page \
 	power-hotcomputer.page \
 	power-lowpower.page \
 	power-nowireless.page \
+	power-off.page \
 	power-othercountry.page \
 	power-suspendfail.page \
-	power-suspendhibernate.page \
+	power-suspend.page \
 	power-whydim.page \
 	power-willnotturnon.page \
 	power.page \
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