[gnome-user-docs] Review/update power-closelid and power-suspendfail

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit f4393283714d2f011fbbc528b9468826439f6d06
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 googlemail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 20 13:45:42 2012 +0000

    Review/update power-closelid and power-suspendfail

 gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page    |   24 ++++++++--
 gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page |   80 +++++++++++++++++++++++++----------
 2 files changed, 76 insertions(+), 28 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
index 984b9ee..5cc62c1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
@@ -6,26 +6,41 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="power"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="power-suspendfail"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
     
     <desc>Laptops go to sleep when you close the lid, in order to save power.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Why does my computer turn off when I close the lid?</title>
 
-<p>When you close the lid of your laptop, your computer will <em>suspend</em> in order to save power. This means that the computer is not actually turned off - it has just gone to sleep. You can wake it up by opening the lid. If it doesn't wake up, try clicking the mouse or pressing a key. If that still doesn't work, press the power button.</p>
+<p>When you close the lid of your laptop, your computer will <link
+xref="power-suspend"><em>suspend</em></link> in order to save power. This means
+that the computer is not actually turned off - it has just gone to sleep. You
+can resume it by opening the lid. If it does not resume, try clicking the mouse
+or pressing a key. If that still does not work, press the power button.</p>
 
-<p>Some computers are unable to suspend properly, normally because their hardware isn't completely supported by the operating system (e.g. the Linux drivers are incomplete). In this case, you may find that you are unable to wake up your computer after you've closed the lid. You can try to <link xref="power-suspendfail">fix the problem with suspend</link>, or you can prevent the computer from trying to suspend when you close the lid.</p>
+<p>Some computers are unable to suspend properly, normally because their
+hardware is not completely supported by the operating system (for example, the
+Linux drivers are incomplete). In this case, you may find that you are unable
+to resume your computer after you have closed the lid. You can try to <link
+xref="power-suspendfail">fix the problem with suspend</link>, or you can
+prevent the computer from trying to suspend when you close the lid.</p>
 
 <section id="nosuspend">
  <title>Stop the computer from suspending when the lid is closed</title>
- <p>If you don't want the computer to suspend when you close the lid, you can change the settings for that behavior.  To set the computer to blank the screen, rather than suspend, when the lid is closed:</p>
+ <p>If you do not want the computer to suspend when you close the lid, you can
+ change the settings for that behavior. To set the computer to blank the
+ screen, rather than suspend, when the lid is closed:</p>
  <note style="warning">
    <p>Be very careful if you change this setting. Some laptops can overheat
    if they are left running with the lid closed, especially if they are in
@@ -48,7 +63,6 @@
      </screen>
    </item>
  </steps>
- <p>There are other settings available besides "blank," such as "nothing," which causes the computer to do nothing.</p>
 </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page b/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page
index 8284372..41191a5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page
@@ -5,47 +5,81 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
     
-    <desc>Some computer hardware causes problems with suspend/hibernate.</desc>
+    <desc>Some computer hardware causes problems with suspend or hibernate.</desc>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-<title>Why won't my computer turn back on after I sent it to sleep?</title>
-
-<comment>
-  <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
-  <p>Standard terminology is suspend. Instances of sleep are bugs.</p>
-</comment>
+<title>Why does my computer not turn back on after I suspended it?</title>
 
-<p>If you send your computer to sleep (suspend it) or hibernate it, then try to wake it up or turn it back on, you may find that it doesn't work as you expected. This could be because suspend/hibernate aren't supported properly by your hardware.</p>
+<p>If you <link xref="power-suspend">suspend</link> or <link
+xref="power-hibernate">hibernate</link> your computer, then try to resume it or
+turn it back on, you may find that it does not work as you expected. This could
+be because suspend and hibernate are not supported properly by your
+hardware.</p>
 
-<section id="wakeup">
- <title>My computer is asleep and won't wake up</title>
- <p>If you sent your computer to sleep (suspended it) and then press a key or click the mouse, it should wake up and display a screen asking for your password. If this does not happen, try pressing the power button (don't hold it in; just press it once).</p>
- <p>If this still doesn't help, make sure that your computer's monitor is switched on and try pressing a key on the keyboard again.</p>
- <p>As a last resort, turn off the computer by holding-in the power button for 5-10 seconds. You will lose any unsaved work by doing this. You should then be able to turn on the computer again, though.</p>
- <p>If this happens every time you send your computer to sleep, the suspend feature may not work with your hardware.</p>
+<section id="resume">
+  <title>My computer is suspended and is not resuming</title>
+  <p>If you suspend your computer and then press a key or click the mouse, it
+  should wake up and display a screen asking for your password. If this does
+  not happen, try pressing the power button (do not hold it in, just press it
+  once).</p>
+  <p>If this still does not help, make sure that your computer's monitor is
+  switched on and try pressing a key on the keyboard again.</p>
+  <p>As a last resort, turn off the computer by holding-in the power button for
+  4-10 seconds, although you will lose any unsaved work by doing this. You
+  should then be able to turn on the computer again.</p>
+  <p>If this happens every time you suspend your computer, the suspend
+  feature may not work with your hardware.</p>
+  <note style="warning">
+    <p>If your computer loses power and does not have an alternative power
+    supply (such as a working battery), it will switch off.</p>
+  </note>
 </section>
 
 <section id="hibernate">
- <title>None of my applications/documents are open when I turn on the computer again</title>
- <p>If you hibernated your computer and switched it on again, but none of your documents or applications are open, it probably failed to hibernate properly. Sometimes this happens because of a minor problem, and the computer will be able to hibernate properly the next time you do it. It might also happen because you had installed a software update which required the computer to be restarted; in this case, the computer may have shut down instead of hibernating.</p>
- 
- <p>It is also possible that the computer is not capable of hibernating because the hardware doesn't support it properly. This might be because of a problem with Linux drivers for your hardware, for example. You can test this by hibernating again and seeing if it works the second time. If it doesn't, it's probably a problem with your computer's drivers.</p>
+  <title>None of my applications/documents are open when I turn on the computer
+  again</title>
+  <p>If you hibernated your computer and switched it on again, but none of your
+  documents or applications are open, it probably failed to hibernate properly.
+  Sometimes this happens because of a minor problem, and the computer will be
+  able to hibernate properly the next time you do it. It might also happen
+  because you had installed a software update which required the computer to be
+  restarted; in this case, the computer may have shut down instead of
+  hibernating.</p>
+  <p>It is also possible that the computer is not capable of hibernating
+  because the hardware does not support it properly. This might be because of a
+  problem with Linux drivers for your hardware, for example. You can test this
+  by hibernating again and seeing if it works the second time. If it does not,
+  it is probably a problem with drivers on your computer.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="hardware">
- <title>My wireless connection (or other hardware) doesn't work when I wake up my computer</title>
- <p>If you send your computer to sleep or hibernate it and then wake it up again, you may find that your internet connection, mouse, or some other device doesn't work properly. This could be because the device's driver doesn't properly support suspend/hibernate. This is a <link xref="hardware-driver">problem with the driver</link> and not the device itself.</p>
- <p>If the device has a power switch, try turning it off and then on again. In most cases, the device will start working again. If it connects via a USB cable or similar, unplug the device and then plug it in again and see if it works.</p>
- <p>If you cannot turn off/unplug the device, or if this doesn't work, you may need to restart your computer for the device to start working again.</p>
+  <title>My wireless connection (or other hardware) does not work when I wake
+  up my computer</title>
+  <p>If you suspend or hibernate your computer and then resume it again, you
+  may find that your internet connection, mouse, or some other device does not
+  work properly. This could be because the driver for the device does not
+  properly support suspend or hibernate. This is a <link
+  xref="hardware-driver">problem with the driver</link> and not the device
+  itself.</p>
+  <p>If the device has a power switch, try turning it off and then on again. In
+  most cases, the device will start working again. If it connects via a USB
+  cable or similar, unplug the device and then plug it in again and see if it
+  works.</p>
+  <p>If you cannot turn off/unplug the device, or if this does not work, you
+  may need to restart your computer for the device to start working again.</p>
 </section>
 
 </page>