[gnome-user-docs] Remove power-brighter and update display-dimscreen

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 410a69bc5eb517652c2b616d07e98b2f80f3d743
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 googlemail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 20 13:01:12 2012 +0000

    Remove power-brighter and update display-dimscreen
    
    Deleted power-brighter.page because it is almost the same as
    display-dimscreen.page and updated display-dimscreen for 3.4.0

 gnome-help/C/a11y-contrast.page     |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page |   35 ++++++++++++++++++------------
 gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page    |   40 -----------------------------------
 3 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 56 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-contrast.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-contrast.page
index c0ba7b0..e2127cc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-contrast.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-contrast.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="a11y-contrast">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#vision" group="lowvision"/>
-    <link type="seealso" xref="power-brighter" />
+    <link type="seealso" xref="display-dimscreen" />
 
 
     <credit type="author">
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
   <title>Adjust the contrast</title>
 
-<p>You can adjust the contrast of windows and buttons so that they're easier to see. This is not the same as <link xref="power-brighter">changing the brightness of the whole screen</link>; only parts of the <em>user interface</em> will change.</p>
+<p>You can adjust the contrast of windows and buttons so that they're easier to see. This is not the same as <link xref="display-dimscreen">changing the brightness of the whole screen</link>; only parts of the <em>user interface</em> will change.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
index 4caea9f..6625530 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
@@ -5,10 +5,13 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="power-whydim"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="display-lock"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
-    <desc>Dim the screen to save power or increase the brightness to
-    make it more readable in bright light.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
+    <desc>Dim the screen to save power or increase the brightness to make it
+    more readable in bright light.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -21,15 +24,19 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info> 
 
   <title>Set screen brightness</title>
 
-  <p>You can change the brightness of your screen to save power or to
-  make the screen more readable in bright light. You can also have
-  the screen dim automatically when on battery power and have it
-  turn off automatically when not in use.</p>
+  <p>You can change the brightness of your screen to save power or to make the
+  screen more readable in bright light. You can also have the screen dim
+  automatically when on battery power and have it turn off automatically when
+  not in use.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>Set the brightness</title>
@@ -45,12 +52,12 @@
   </note>
 
   <p>Select <gui>Dim screen to save power</gui> to have the brightness
-  automatically lowered when you're on battery power. The backlight of
-  your screen can take a lot of power and significantly reduce how
-  long your battery will last before it needs to be recharged.</p>
+  automatically lowered when you are on battery power. The backlight of your
+  screen can take a lot of power and significantly reduce how long your battery
+  will last before it needs to be recharged.</p>
 
-  <p>The screen will automatically turn off after you haven't used it
-  for a while. This only affects the display, and doesn't turn off
-  your computer. You can adjust how long you have to be inactive
-  with the <gui>Turn off after</gui> drop-down list.</p>
+  <p>The screen will automatically turn off after you have not used it for a
+  while. This only affects the display, and does not turn off your computer.
+  You can adjust how long you have to be inactive with the <gui>Turn screen off
+  when inactive for</gui> option.</p>
 </page>