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[gnome-user-docs] Fix validation error, clean-up some typos in keyboard

commit 2a7f5bdd54d34b7577fca657152bd6d20966fedd
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 19 23:31:48 2012 +0000

    Fix validation error, clean-up some typos in keyboard

 gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page  |   16 +++++++----
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-layouts.page       |   18 +++++++++---
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page           |   14 +++++----
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page   |   22 ++++++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page |   42 ++++++++++++++++-------------
 gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page              |   26 +++++++-----------
 6 files changed, 78 insertions(+), 60 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page
index e649387..c2f9bf6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="a11y-locate-pointer"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="final"/>
 
     <desc>Make the insertion point blink and control how quickly it blinks.</desc>
 
@@ -31,13 +31,17 @@
      you can make it blink to make it easier to locate.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings
-    </gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Open <gui>Keyboard</gui> and select the <gui>Typing</gui> tab.</p>
+    <item>
+     <p>Click your name on the top bar and select 
+     <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item><p>Open <gui>Keyboard</gui> and go to the <gui>Typing</gui> tab.</p>
     </item>
     <item><p>Select <gui>Cursor blinks in text fields</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Use the <gui>Speed</gui> slider to adjust how quickly the cursor 
-          blinks.</p></item>
+    <item>
+     <p>Use the <gui>Speed</gui> slider to adjust how quickly the cursor 
+     blinks.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-layouts.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-layouts.page
index 6df42f0..c77701c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-layouts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-layouts.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-language"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="i18n"/>
 
-        <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -29,10 +29,18 @@
   languages.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Open <gui>Region and Language</gui> and select the <gui>Layouts</gui> tab.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click the <gui>+</gui> button, select a layout, and click <gui>Add</gui>.
-    You can add at most four layouts.</p></item>
+    <item>
+     <p>Click your name on the top bar and select 
+     <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+     <p>Open <gui>Region and Language</gui> and select the 
+     <gui>Layouts</gui> tab.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+     <p>Click the <gui>+</gui> button, select a layout, and click 
+     <gui>Add</gui>. You can add at most four layouts.</p>
+    </item>
     <!--
     https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=640774
     -->
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page
index 1f084ce..bb4bbbe 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="a11y"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jeremy Bicha</name>
@@ -15,7 +15,8 @@
        <name>Julita Inca</name>
        <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
     </credit>
-    <desc>Use an on-screen keyboard to enter text without using a keyboard.
+    <desc>
+     Use an on-screen keyboard to enter text by clicking buttons with the mouse.
     </desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -30,7 +31,7 @@
    </p></item>
    <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Typing</gui> tab.
    </p></item>
-   <item><p>Switch <gui>Typing Assistant</gui> to turn on the screen keyboard.</p>
+   <item><p>Switch on <gui>Typing Assistant</gui> to show the screen keyboard.</p>
    </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -39,8 +40,9 @@
   alphabet keyboard, click the <gui>Abc</gui> button.</p>
 
   <p>If the screen keyboard gets in your way, click the button that looks like a
-  keyboard (next to the tray button) to hide the keyboard. To make the keyboard 
-  show, open the <link xref="shell-notifications">messaging tray</link> and click
-  the keyboard tray item.</p>
+  keyboard (next to the <gui>tray</gui> button) to hide the keyboard. To make 
+  the keyboard show again, open the 
+  <link xref="shell-notifications">messaging tray</link> by moving your mouse 
+  to the bottom right of the screen and click the keyboard tray item.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page
index bbe123e..8a64778 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -33,12 +33,18 @@
   start repeating.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Open <gui>Keyboard</gui> and select the <gui>Typing</gui> tab.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Turn off <gui>Key presses repeat when key is held down</gui> to disable
-    repeated keys entirely. Alternatively,
-    adjust the <gui>Delay</gui> slider to control how long you have to hold a key
-    down to begin repeating it, and adjust the <gui>Speed</gui> slider to control
-    how quickly key presses repeat.</p></item>
+    <item>
+     <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+     <p>Open <gui>Keyboard</gui> and select the <gui>Typing</gui> tab.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+     <p>Turn off <gui>Key presses repeat when key is held down</gui> to disable 
+     repeated keys entirely.</p>
+     <p>Alternatively, adjust the <gui>Delay</gui> slider to control how long 
+     you have to hold a key down to begin repeating it, and adjust the 
+     <gui>Speed</gui> slider to control how quickly key presses repeat.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page
index b1f5983..83c0250 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 
 
 <section id="defined">
-<title>Pre-Defined Shortcuts</title>
+<title>Pre-defined shortcuts</title>
   <p>There are a number of pre-configured shortcuts that can be changed,
   grouped into these categories:</p>
 
@@ -316,12 +316,12 @@
 <title>Windows</title> 
 
   <tr>
-	<td><p>View slipt on left</p></td>
-	<td><p><keyseq>Super<key></key><key>Left</key></keyseq>(Super is the Windows key)</p></td>
+	<td><p>View split on left</p></td>
+	<td><p><keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Left</key></keyseq> (Super is the Windows key)</p></td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
-	<td><p>View slipt on right</p></td>
-	<td><p><keyseq>Super<key></key><key>Right</key></keyseq>(Super is the Windows key)</p></td>
+	<td><p>View split on right</p></td>
+	<td><p><keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Right</key></keyseq> (Super is the Windows key)</p></td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
 	<td><p>Activate the window menu</p></td>
@@ -393,33 +393,37 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id="custom">
-<title>Custom Shortcuts</title>
+<title>Custom shortcuts</title>
 
 <p>To create your own keyboard shortcut:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Custom shortcuts</gui> on the left side of the window.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Custom Shortcuts</gui> on the left side of the window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>+</gui> on the right.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui>+</gui> button. The <gui>Custom Shortcut</gui> 
+      window will appear.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Write a <gui>Name</gui> to identify what the shortcut is about, 
-      and a <gui>Command</gui> to run an application. For example if you want to 
-      open Rhythmbox, write 'Music' (without quotes) in <gui>Name</gui> and 'Rhythmbox'
-      (without quotes) in <gui>Command</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-
-    <item><p>Click <gui>Apply</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Double click <gui>Disabled</gui> on the far right.</p>
+      <p>Write a <gui>Name</gui> to identify the shortcut, and a 
+      <gui>Command</gui> to run an application, then click <gui>Apply</gui>. 
+      For example, if you wanted the shortcut to open Rhythmbox, you could name 
+      it <input>Music</input> and use the <input>rhythmbox</input> command.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Hold down the desired key combination.</p>
+      <p>Double click where it says <gui>Disabled</gui> on the far right, and 
+      then hold down the desired shortcut key combination.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
-
+ <p>The command name that you type should be a valid system command. You 
+ can check that the command works by opening a Terminal and typing it in 
+ there. The command that opens an application may not have exactly the 
+ same name as the application itself.</p>
+      
+ <p>If you want to change the command that is associated with a custom keyboard 
+ shortcut, double-click the <em>name</em> of the shortcut. The 
+ <gui>Custom Shortcut</gui> window will appear, and you can edit the command.</p>
 </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
index cefa5bb..b16c9b2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
   <title>Define proxy settings</title>
 
- <section>
+ <section id="what">
   <title>What is a proxy?</title>
 
   <p>A <em>web proxy</em> filters websites that you look at, it receipts requests
@@ -28,29 +28,23 @@
   checks on websites.</p>
  </section>
 
- <section>
-  <title>Change proxy method.</title>
-   <steps>
+ <section id="change">
+  <title>Change proxy method</title>
+  
+  <comment>
+    <cite>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</cite>
+    <p>We should develop the proxy methods, and how they work.</p>
+   </comment>
+  
+  <steps>
     <item>
     <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
    </item>
-
    <item>
     <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and choose <gui>Network Proxy</gui> from the list on the left side of the window.</p>
    </item>
-
-   <comment>
-    <cite>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</cite>
-    <p>We should develop the proxy methods, and how they work.</p>
-   </comment>
-
    <item>
     <p>Choose which proxy method you want to use among the following methods.</p>
-    <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom">
-     <tr>
-      <td><gui>None</gui></td>
-     </tr>
-    </table>
     <list>
      <item><p><gui>None</gui></p></item>
      <item><p><gui>Manual</gui></p></item>
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