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[gnome-user-docs] Review of net-*.page for 3.4 release

commit f0a414daf1a37c8c482cd41fcbe3cfd55ba308df
Author: Baptiste Mille-Mathias <baptistem gnome org>
Date:   Sun Feb 19 16:34:36 2012 +0100

    Review of net-*.page for 3.4 release
    
    review of pages, rename pages for consistency

 gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page                    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-browser.page                      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page              |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page                |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page                  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-email.page                        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-findip.page                       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page               |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page             |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page                |    6 ++--
 gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page            |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page                   |   10 +++---
 gnome-help/C/net-manual.page                       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-no-wireless-connection.page.stub  |   33 --------------------
 gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page                |    4 +-
 ...{net-otherscontrol.page => net-othersedit.page} |    6 ++--
 gnome-help/C/net-problem.page                      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page                        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page                |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-slow.page                         |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page                  |   11 +++++--
 gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page           |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page                |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wired.page                        |    4 +-
 .../C/{net-adhoc.page => net-wireless-adhoc.page}  |    0
 ...tcon.page => net-wireless-edit-connection.page} |    0
 gnome-help/Makefile.am                             |   10 ++---
 27 files changed, 45 insertions(+), 75 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page b/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
index 252aec4..b46127f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
     
     <desc>There are few Linux viruses, so you probably don't need anti-virus software.</desc>
     
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
index 35e9929..4a6df74 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-browser">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
index f08c6ef..75cdd64 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
index f696f9e..9607b78 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-email"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
index 0c294de..0d5de2e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-antivirus"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
index 4ef75c3..c25bac5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-email">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
index 0ee2e66..6b5ceb8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-what-is-ip-address"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
index 81b0fa1..a4b1aad 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
   <title>Commonly-used network ports</title>
   <p>This is a list of network ports commonly used by applications which provide network services, like file sharing or remote desktop viewing. You can change your system's firewall to <link xref="net-firewall-on-off">block or allow access</link> to these applications. There are thousands of ports in use, so this table isn't complete.</p>
 
-  <table>
+  <table shade="rows" frame="top">
     <thead>
       <tr>
 	<td>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
index 4d3e000..34cdd3c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page b/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page
index 4d43f9e..4d9b0a8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
-    
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@
  <p>A handful of free, open-source alternatives to Flash are available. These tend to work better than the Flash plug-in in some ways (for example, by handling sound playback better), but worse in others (for example, by not being able to display some of the more complicated Flash pages on the web).</p>
  <p>You might like to try one of these if you are dissatisfied with the Flash player, or if you would like to use as much open-source software as possible on your computer. Here are a few of the options:</p>
  <list style="compact">
-  <item><p>Gnash</p></item>
   <item><p>LightSpark</p></item>
+  <item><p>Gnash</p></item>
   <item><p>SWFdec (no longer being updated)</p></item>
  </list>
 </section>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page b/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page
index 1d7045a..ee7f88a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
index be4c7d2..b439a59 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -15,13 +15,13 @@
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>The unique code assigned to network hardware.</desc>
+    <desc>The unique identifier assigned to network hardware.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
   <title>What is a MAC address?</title>
 
-  <p>A <em>MAC address</em> is the unique code that is assigned by the manufacturer to a piece of network hardware (like a wireless card or an ethernet card). <em>MAC</em> stands for <em>Media Access Control</em>, and each code is intended to be unique to a particular device.</p>
+  <p>A <em>MAC address</em> is the unique identifier that is assigned by the manufacturer to a piece of network hardware (like a wireless card or an ethernet card). <em>MAC</em> stands for <em>Media Access Control</em>, and each identifier is intended to be unique to a particular device.</p>
 
   <p>A MAC address consists of six sets of two characters, each separated by a colon. <code>00:1B:44:11:3A:B7</code> is an example of a MAC address.</p>
 
@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wired</gui> or <gui>Wireless</gui> from the list on the left (depending on which device you want to check).</p></item>
     <item><p>Your MAC address will be displayed as the <gui>Hardware Address</gui>.</p></item>
-  </steps>  
-    
+  </steps>
+
   <p>In practice, you may need to <link xref="net-editcon">modify or "spoof" a MAC address</link>. For example, some internet service providers may require that a specific MAC address be used to access their service. If the network card stops working, and you need to change your network card, the service won't work anymore. In such cases, you would need to spoof the MAC address.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
index ab7b6cf..a129ee5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
index 1e70216..e178729 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
       id="net-othersconnect">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
-    <link type="seealso" xref="net-otherscontrol"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="net-othersedit"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page b/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page
similarity index 93%
rename from gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page
rename to gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page
index 132a2e8..0638cca 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic" style="problem"
-      id="net-otherscontrol">
+      id="net-othersedit">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-<title>Other users can't control the network connections</title>
+<title>Other users can't edit the network connections</title>
 
 <comment>
 <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page b/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
index b4a29e4..b4efb26 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-problem">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
index 5675fd3..e57c637 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>    
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page b/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
index 6f31b52..b37d3c8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-security-tips">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
index 4596334..b9f4a74 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
index adb8d02..46e8f5f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -30,12 +30,17 @@
 
 <steps>
  <item>
-  <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select  <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
   <p>In the list on the left, click the <gui>+</gui> button
-  to add a new connection.</p></item>
+  to add a new connection.</p>
+ </item>
+
+ <item>
+  <p>Choose <gui>VPN</gui> in the interface list, and click <gui>Createâ</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
  
  <item>
   <p>Click <gui>Add</gui> and choose which kind of VPN connection you have.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
index 3941a7c..cf0e6bb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="reviewd"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
index 8366b1d..c9defb5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 <p>To set up most wired network connections, all you need to do is plug in a network cable. The network icon on the top bar should spin or pulse for a few seconds and then will change to a "socket" icon when you are connected.</p>
 
-<p>If this does not happen, you should first of all make sure that your network cable is plugged in. One end of the cable should be plugged into the rectangular Ethernet (network) port on your computer, the other end should be plugged into a switch, router, network wall socket or similar (depending on the network setup you have).</p>
+<p>If this does not happen, you should first of all make sure that your network cable is plugged in. One end of the cable should be plugged into the rectangular Ethernet (network) port on your computer, the other end should be plugged into a switch, router, network wall socket or similar (depending on the network setup you have). Usually, a light beside the Ethernet port will indicate it is plugged and active.</p>
 
 <note>
  <p>You can't plug one computer directly into another one with a network cable (at least, not without some extra setting-up). To connect two computers, you should plug them both into a network hub, router or switch.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
index 5820bc5..22a351b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
@@ -3,13 +3,13 @@
       id="net-wired">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
     <desc>
       <link xref="net-wired-connect">Wired internet connections</link>,
-      <link xref="net-fixed-ip-address">fixed IP addresses</link>...
+      <link xref="net-fixed-ip-address">Fixed IP addresses</link>...
     </desc>
  
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-adhoc.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
similarity index 100%
rename from gnome-help/C/net-adhoc.page
rename to gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-editcon.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-edit-connection.page
similarity index 100%
rename from gnome-help/C/net-editcon.page
rename to gnome-help/C/net-wireless-edit-connection.page
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index 353b53c..b6455d4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -164,14 +164,10 @@ HELP_FILES = \
 	nautilus-prefs.page \
 	nautilus-preview.page \
 	nautilus-views.page \
-	net-adhoc.page \
 	net-antivirus.page \
 	net-browser.page \
 	net-default-browser.page \
 	net-default-email.page \
-	net-editcon.page \
-	net-email-virus.page \
-	net-email.page \
 	net-findip.page \
 	net-firewall-on-off.page \
 	net-firewall-ports.page \
@@ -182,8 +178,7 @@ HELP_FILES = \
 	net-macaddress.page \
 	net-manual.page \
 	net-othersconnect.page \
-	net-otherscontrol.page \
-	net-passwordok-noconnect.page \
+	net-othersedit.page \
 	net-problem.page \
 	net-proxy.page \
 	net-security-tips.page \
@@ -193,11 +188,14 @@ HELP_FILES = \
 	net-what-is-ip-address.page \
 	net-wired-connect.page \
 	net-wired.page \
+	net-wireless-adhoc.page \
 	net-wireless-airplane.page \
 	net-wireless-connect.page \
 	net-wireless-disconnecting.page \
+	net-wireless-edit-connection.page \
 	net-wireless-find.page \
 	net-wireless-hidden.page \
+	net-wireless-noconnection.page \
 	net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page \
 	net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page \
 	net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page \
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