[gnome-user-docs] Edits to shell pages for review

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 751a2cea259bc47e5357bea0e506a9dd59dca31f
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Sun Feb 19 09:10:54 2012 -0500

    Edits to shell pages for review

 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page  |   12 ++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page       |    4 +++-
 gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page            |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page    |    9 +++++----
 gnome-help/C/shell-net-remote.page.stub |    5 ++++-
 gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page     |    2 +-
 6 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
index bf72039..4ad0570 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     
     <desc>Add (or remove) frequently-used program icons on the dash.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -21,15 +21,19 @@
 
 <title>Pin your favorite apps to the dash</title>
 
-<p>To add an application to the <link xref="shell-terminology">dash</link> for easy access:</p>
+<p>To add an application to the <link xref="shell-terminology">dash</link> for
+ easy access:</p>
  <steps>
   <item><p>Open the <link xref="shell-terminology">Activities overview</link>.</p></item>
   <item>
-   <p>Find the application you want to add to the dash by clicking on <gui>Applications</gui>. Right-click on the application icon and select <gui>Add to Favorites</gui>.</p>
+   <p>Find the application you want to add to the dash by clicking on
+    <gui>Applications</gui>. Right-click on the application icon and select
+     <gui>Add to Favorites</gui>.</p>
    <p>Alternately, you can click-and-drag the icon into the dash.</p>
   </item>
   </steps>
 
-<p>To remove an application icon from the dash, right click on the application icon and select <gui>Remove from Favorites</gui>.</p>
+<p>To remove an application icon from the dash, right click on the application
+ icon and select <gui>Remove from Favorites</gui>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
index 905a69d..3f7e052 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#apps" />
     
     <desc>Launch apps from the activities overview.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -64,6 +64,8 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
  dash (or from the list of applications), and dropping it onto one of the
  workspaces on the right-hand side of the screen. The application will open in
  the chosen workspace.</p>
+  <p>You can launch an application in a <em>new</em> workspace by middle-clicking
+ its icon in the dash or in the application list.</p>
  </item>
  
 </list>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
index 776fba9..3fae5b6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     and so on.</desc>
     <!-- Should this be a guide which links to other topics? -->
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
index 1cc297f..186ed3b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
@@ -123,9 +123,9 @@ You can also access the date and time settings and open your full
 <p>Click your name in the top-right corner to manage your profile and
 your computer.</p>
 
-<p>You can quickly set your availability directly from the menu. When you
-use the <app>Empathy</app> instant messaging application, this will set
-your status for your contacts to see.</p>
+<p>You can quickly set your availability directly from the menu. This will set
+your status for your contacts to see in instant messaging applications such as
+<app>Empathy</app>.</p>
 
 <comment>
 <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
@@ -167,7 +167,8 @@ suspend or power off the computer from the menu.</p>
  ready to view them.</p>
 
 <list style="compact">
-<item><p><link xref="shell-notifications">Learn more about notifications and the message tray.</link></p></item>
+<item><p><link xref="shell-notifications">Learn more about notifications and
+ the message tray.</link></p></item>
 </list>
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-net-remote.page.stub b/gnome-help/C/shell-net-remote.page.stub
index 21d6c83..12a6be5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-net-remote.page.stub
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-net-remote.page.stub
@@ -19,7 +19,10 @@
 <title>Run GNOME Shell remotely, over a network</title>
 
 <comment>
- <p>Notes on trying to run GNOME Shell remotely, over a network. If it doesn't work that's fine, but explain why, or what the user should expect. This topic is aimed more at sys admins than end users. See here for some more info: http://live.gnome.org/GnomeShell/RemoteDisplay</p>
+ <p>Notes on trying to run GNOME Shell remotely, over a network. If it doesn't
+  work that's fine, but explain why, or what the user should expect. This topic
+  is aimed more at sys admins than end users. See here for some more info:
+  http://live.gnome.org/GnomeShell/RemoteDisplay</p>
 </comment>
 	
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
index ae0f3ef..57a5402 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     
     <desc>An overview of terms used to describe different parts of the desktop.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>