[baobab/mallard-documentation] Edit protocols in easy way.

[Julita Inca <jinca src gnome org>]

commit ca0dae4d0f95f7ecb9c95ee54628be63ae683712
Author: Julita Inca <yrazes gmail com>
Date:   Sat Feb 18 10:24:33 2012 -0500

    Edit protocols in easy way.

 help/C/scan-remote.page |   29 +++++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/scan-remote.page b/help/C/scan-remote.page
index ff9851e..8f99c95 100644
--- a/help/C/scan-remote.page
+++ b/help/C/scan-remote.page
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@
   </comment>
 
   <p><app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app> can scan folders that are shared over the
-  network. This feature can be used to scan individual folders or a whole file
-  system. To scan a remote folder:</p>
+  network. You can scan the whole filesystem or any particular folder remotely 
+  by doing:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -48,16 +48,14 @@
       <p>Choose one of following protocols:</p>
       <list>
         <item>
-          <p><link xref="ssh">SSH</link> (Secure Shell) is a protocol which
-          lets you access other folders from another computer over the
-          network. It uses a secure remote login because it is not possible
-          to discover users and passwords.</p>
+          <p><link xref="ssh">SSH</link>, Secure Shell, lets you access folders 
+          from remote computer over the network. This offers you a secure 
+	  connection because you need to login with user and password.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p><link xref="ftp">FTP (with login)</link> (File Transfer
-          Protocol) with login, lets you share and transfer folders reliably
-          and efficiently from remote computers. In this case a user account
-          is required.</p>
+          <p><link xref="ftp">FTP (with login)</link>, File Transfer Protocol 
+          with login, lets you share and transfer folders over the network. This 
+          process is reliably because a user account is required.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <p><link xref="ftp">Public FTP</link> lets you share files without
@@ -70,19 +68,18 @@
           shares from a Linux machine.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p><link xref="web-dav">WebDAV (HTTP)</link> (Web-based Distributed
+          <p><link xref="web-dav">WebDAV (HTTP)</link>, Web-based Distributed
           Authoring and Versioning methods of Hypertext Transfer Protocol
-          HTTP) lets you collaborate with other users in editing and managing
+          HTTP, lets you collaborate with other users in editing and managing
           documents over the network. These folders are stored on World Wide
           Web servers.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p><link xref="web-dav">Secure WebDAV (HTTPS)</link>: Secure WebDAV
-          ensures encryption of transfered data (WebDAV over HTTPS will be
-          used).</p>
+          <p><link xref="web-dav">Secure WebDAV (HTTPS)</link>, Secure WebDAV,
+          ensures encryption while you are transfering data.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p><link xref="custom-location">Custom Location</link>: enables you
+          <p><link xref="custom-location">Custom Location</link> enables you
           to access a particular function from the folder manager.</p>
         </item>
       </list>