[baobab/mallard-documentation] Another review of help/introduction.page



commit 0bfc54816fac2f66ddb3423d7b1f79dd4f1e3600
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 googlemail com>
Date:   Fri Feb 17 09:36:17 2012 +0000

    Another review of help/introduction.page
    
    Changed baobab to Disk Usage Analyzer, as per gnome-user-help

 help/C/introduction.page |   27 +++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 126b8c5..803a072 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-19" status="stub"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-17" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-17" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
@@ -18,8 +18,7 @@
     </credit>
 
     <desc><app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app>, also referred to as
-    <app>Baobab</app>, graphically represent your use of available storage
-    space.</desc>
+    <app>baobab</app>, graphically represent your use of storage space.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -31,21 +30,21 @@
     Manager offers.</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p><app>Baobab</app> is a graphical, menu-driven application to analyse disk
-  usage. It can easily scan either the whole filesystem tree, or a specific
-  user-requested directory branch (local or remote). <app>Baobab</app> also
-  auto-detects, in real time, any changes made to your home directory. It
-  provides a full graphical treemap window for each selected folder and can be
-  used for checking how much disk space your files and folders take up using
-  <link xref="view-ring">charts</link>.</p>
+  <p><app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app> is a graphical, menu-driven application to
+  analyse disk usage. It can easily scan either the whole file system tree, or
+  a specific user-requested directory branch (local or remote). <app>Disk Usage
+  Analyzer</app> also auto-detects, in real time, any changes made to your home
+  directory. It provides a full graphical treemap window for each selected
+  folder and can be used for checking how much disk space your files and
+  folders take up using <link xref="view-ring">charts</link>.</p>
 
-  <p><app>Baobab</app> lets you do this through scanning
-  <link xref="scan-file-system">the whole filesystem</link>,
+  <p><app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app> lets you do this through scanning
+  <link xref="scan-file-system">the whole file system</link>,
   <link xref="scan-home">your <file>Home</file></link>,
   <link xref="scan-folder">any specific folder on the system</link> or
   <link xref="scan-remote">a remote folder</link>.</p>
 
-  <p><app>Baobab</app> can be used to scan multiple internal and external
-  storage devices, including hard disks, USB devices and cameras.</p>
+  <p><app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app> can be used to scan multiple internal and
+  external storage devices, including hard disks, USB devices and cameras.</p>
 
 </page>



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