[baobab/mallard-documentation] Reviewed help/introduction.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 247626e89cf9bcf6dadb4fdf39d1a3fdaf3db58c
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 googlemail com>
Date:   Fri Feb 17 09:10:11 2012 +0000

    Reviewed help/introduction.page

 help/C/introduction.page |   33 +++++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 66880c7..126b8c5 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-19" status="stub"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-20" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-17" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
@@ -18,7 +18,8 @@
     </credit>
 
     <desc><app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app>, also referred to as
-    <app>baobab</app>, represents graphically how much disk space folders are consuming on your hard drive.</desc>
+    <app>Baobab</app>, graphically represent your use of available storage
+    space.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -30,17 +31,21 @@
     Manager offers.</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p><app>Baobab</app> can be used for checking how much disk space your files 
-  and folders take up. It uses <link xref="view-ring">charts</link> to show how 
-  much disk space is being used and you can see the remaining free space.</p>
-
-  <p><app>Baobab</app> lets you do this through
-  <link xref="scan-file-system">Scan filesystem</link>,
-  <link xref="scan-home">Scan Home</link>,
-  <link xref="scan-folder">Scan another folder on the system</link> or
-  <link xref="scan-remote">Scan a remote folder</link>.</p>
-
-  <p>The disk usage space taken up by each folder is not only useful to scan multiple internal hard drives.
-  It also works for external hard drives that are used by USB or cameras.</p>
+  <p><app>Baobab</app> is a graphical, menu-driven application to analyse disk
+  usage. It can easily scan either the whole filesystem tree, or a specific
+  user-requested directory branch (local or remote). <app>Baobab</app> also
+  auto-detects, in real time, any changes made to your home directory. It
+  provides a full graphical treemap window for each selected folder and can be
+  used for checking how much disk space your files and folders take up using
+  <link xref="view-ring">charts</link>.</p>
+
+  <p><app>Baobab</app> lets you do this through scanning
+  <link xref="scan-file-system">the whole filesystem</link>,
+  <link xref="scan-home">your <file>Home</file></link>,
+  <link xref="scan-folder">any specific folder on the system</link> or
+  <link xref="scan-remote">a remote folder</link>.</p>
+
+  <p><app>Baobab</app> can be used to scan multiple internal and external
+  storage devices, including hard disks, USB devices and cameras.</p>
 
 </page>