[gnome-games] Minor review edits

[Tiffany Antopolski <antopolski src gnome org>]

commit 2f0d55e2970beae3ef30acb8df76cf4721e0cf7e
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Feb 6 20:44:56 2012 -0500

    Minor review edits

 iagno/help/C/2player.page   |    3 +--
 iagno/help/C/rules.page     |    6 +++++-
 iagno/help/C/strategy.page  |   41 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------
 iagno/help/C/translate.page |    2 +-
 4 files changed, 39 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/iagno/help/C/2player.page b/iagno/help/C/2player.page
index e2c6141..ff09ef8 100644
--- a/iagno/help/C/2player.page
+++ b/iagno/help/C/2player.page
@@ -17,13 +17,12 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Two-player mode</title>
-  <p>Two player mode allows you to play against another human rather than a computer. To enable this</p>
+  <p>Two player mode allows you to play against another human rather than a computer. To enable this:</p>
 
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq></p></item>
   <item><p>Select the <gui>Game</gui> tab.</p></item>
   <item><p>Check <gui>human</gui> in both player columns.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Your changes will be applied when a new game is started.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui></p>
   <note><p>Your changes will apply when a new game is started.</p></note>
   </item>
diff --git a/iagno/help/C/rules.page b/iagno/help/C/rules.page
index b19bc80..52ad2bc 100644
--- a/iagno/help/C/rules.page
+++ b/iagno/help/C/rules.page
@@ -10,6 +10,10 @@
       <email>tiffany antpolski gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc></desc>
   </info>
@@ -26,7 +30,7 @@
     <note><p>This placement can be horizontal, vertical or diagonal.
     </p></note>
     <p>
-     When the dark tile is placed, the light tiles between the newly placed dark tile and another dark tile are flipped over and become part of the light forces.
+     When the dark tile is placed, the light tiles between the newly placed dark tile and another dark tile are flipped over and become part of the dark forces.
     </p>
     </item>
     <item><p>The players alternate turns until no more legal moves can be made by either player.  At this point the game is over. The end of the game often results in a full board.</p></item>
diff --git a/iagno/help/C/strategy.page b/iagno/help/C/strategy.page
index b63450a..ecdedaf 100644
--- a/iagno/help/C/strategy.page
+++ b/iagno/help/C/strategy.page
@@ -10,25 +10,48 @@
       <email></email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc></desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Strategy</title>
 
-  <p><app>Iagno</app> doesn't have a one particular winning strategery. Rather it has strategic elements which can be used to help one gain advantage. Some strategies, such as tryinging to flip as many of your opponents pieces early on in the game, should be avoided.</p>
+  <p><app>Iagno</app> doesn't have one particular winning strategy. Rather it
+  has strategic elements which can be used to help one gain advantage. Some
+  strategies, such as trying to flip as many of your opponent's pieces early on
+  in the game, should be avoided.</p>
+
+  <p>Much has been written on the topic of strategy for the games
+  <em>Othello</em> and <em>Reversi</em>, which <app>Iagno</app> is based on.</p>
 
-  <p>Much has been written on the topic of strategy for the games <em>Othello</em> and <em>Reversi</em>, which <app>Iagno</app> is based on.</p>
+  <note style="tip"><p>Some sources state that Reversi does not have a
+  predefined starting position, whereas Othello and <app>Iagno</app>
+  do.</p></note>
 
-  <note style="tip"><p>Some sources state that Reversi does not have a predefined starting position, whereas Othello and <app>Iagno</app> do.</p></note>
+  <p>If you are interested in learning about specific strategies for the game,
+  the following links may be of interest:</p>
 
-  <p>If you are interested in learning about specific strategies for the game, the following links may be of interest:</p>
   <list>
-   <item><p><link href="http://othello.dk/book/index.php/From_Scratch";>A great beginners to strategy of the game</link></p></item>
-   <item><p><link href="http://gaurang.org/gothello/guide/guide.html";>An introduction to strategy and tactics</link></p></item>
-   <item><p><link href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reversi#Strategic_elements";>Wikipedia: Strategic elements</link></p></item>
-   <item><p><link href="http://radagast.se/othello/Help/strategy.html";>A strategy guide</link></p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p><link href="http://othello.dk/book/index.php/From_Scratch";>A great
+      beginner's guide to strategy of the game</link></p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p><link href="http://gaurang.org/gothello/guide/guide.html";>An
+      introduction to strategy and tactics</link></p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p><link href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reversi#Strategic_elements";>Wikipedia:
+      Strategic elements</link></p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p><link href="http://radagast.se/othello/Help/strategy.html";>A strategy
+      guide</link></p>
+    </item>
   </list>
 
-
 </page>
diff --git a/iagno/help/C/translate.page b/iagno/help/C/translate.page
index 00af0ab..3ef3a72 100644
--- a/iagno/help/C/translate.page
+++ b/iagno/help/C/translate.page
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 
 <title>Help translate</title>
 <p>
-  The <app>GNOME games</app> user interface and documentation is being translated by a world-wide volunteer community.  You are welcome to participate.
+  The <app>GNOME Games</app> user interface and documentation is being translated by a world-wide volunteer community.  You are welcome to participate.
 </p>
 <p>
  There are <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/module/gnome-games/";>many languages</link> for which translations are still needed.