[gnome-user-docs] Actually commit the previous changes, other small fixes



commit 75183eece0187c26baa54b34b19d883c33f03731
Author: Jeremy Bicha <jbicha ubuntu com>
Date:   Sun Feb 5 20:35:44 2012 -0500

    Actually commit the previous changes, other small fixes

 gnome-help/C/get-involved.page  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/help-irc.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page |   11 ++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/more-help.page     |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/translate.page     |    5 +++--
 5 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page b/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
index 6713c25..8f2444b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
    <section id="contact-us">
    <title>Contact us</title>
    <p>
-     You can send an email to the GNOME docs mailing list to learn more about how to get involved with the documentation team. <em>e-mail</em> <link href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org"/>.
+     You can send an <link href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">email</link> to the GNOME docs mailing list to learn more about how to get involved with the documentation team.
    </p>
    </section>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page b/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page
index 73e8cfd..7374e32 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="more-help"/>
-    <desc>Getting support on IRC</desc>
+    <desc>Get live support on IRC.</desc>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-10-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-11-05" status="candidate"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page b/gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page
index af72740..39db156 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page
@@ -3,14 +3,15 @@
       id="monitors-dual">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>Set up dual monitors</desc>
+    <desc>Set up dual monitors.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-01-12" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-    
+    <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
+
   </info>   
 
 <title>Connect an external monitor to your laptop</title>
@@ -35,7 +36,7 @@
 
           <tt:div begin="9s" end="16s">
             <tt:p>The monitor with the top bar is the main monitor. To change which monitor is
-           "main", click onthe top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
+           "main", click on the top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
            the "main" monitor.
             </tt:p>
           </tt:div>
@@ -76,7 +77,7 @@
   <section id="steps">
   <title>Steps to setup an external monitor</title>
   <p>To set up an external monitor with your laptop, connect the monitor to your laptop.
-     If your system doesn't recognise it immediately, or you would like to adjust
+     If your system doesn't recognize it immediately, or you would like to adjust
      the settings:
   </p>
 
@@ -90,7 +91,7 @@
   </p></item>
 
   <item><p>The monitor with the <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link> is the main monitor. To change which monitor is 
-           "main", click onthe top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
+           "main", click on the top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
            the "main" monitor.
   </p></item>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/more-help.page b/gnome-help/C/more-help.page
index 8497375..df61e3a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/more-help.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/more-help.page
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
     <desc>
         <link xref="about-this-guide">Tips on using this guide</link>, 
         <link xref="get-involved">help improve this guide</link>,
-        <link xref="help-mailing-list">Mailing-list</link>,
+        <link xref="help-mailing-list">mailing list</link>,
         <link xref="help-irc">IRC</link></desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/translate.page b/gnome-help/C/translate.page
index 34d2072..382075d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/translate.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/translate.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
    <link type="guide" xref="more-help"/>
+   <link type="seealso" xref="get-involved"/>
     <desc>How and where to help translate these topics.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-12-27" status="review"/>
 
@@ -21,9 +22,9 @@
      </license>
   </info>
 
-<title>Participate to improve translaions</title>
+<title>Participate to improve translations</title>
 <p>
-  The <app>GNOME help</app> documentation is being translated by a world-wide volunteer community.  You are welcome to participate.
+  GNOME's help is being translated by a world-wide volunteer community. You are welcome to participate.
 </p>
 <p>
  There are <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/module/gnome-user-docs/";>many languages</link> for which translations are still needed.  



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