[gnome-user-docs] Actually commit the previous changes, other small fixes
- From: Jeremy Bicha <jbicha src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Actually commit the previous changes, other small fixes
- Date: Mon, 6 Feb 2012 01:36:33 +0000 (UTC)
commit 75183eece0187c26baa54b34b19d883c33f03731
Author: Jeremy Bicha <jbicha ubuntu com>
Date: Sun Feb 5 20:35:44 2012 -0500
Actually commit the previous changes, other small fixes
gnome-help/C/get-involved.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/help-irc.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page | 11 ++++++-----
gnome-help/C/more-help.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/translate.page | 5 +++--
5 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page b/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
index 6713c25..8f2444b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
<section id="contact-us">
<title>Contact us</title>
<p>
- You can send an email to the GNOME docs mailing list to learn more about how to get involved with the documentation team. <em>e-mail</em> <link href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org"/>.
+ You can send an <link href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">email</link> to the GNOME docs mailing list to learn more about how to get involved with the documentation team.
</p>
</section>
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page b/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page
index 73e8cfd..7374e32 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="more-help"/>
- <desc>Getting support on IRC</desc>
+ <desc>Get live support on IRC.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-10-09" status="candidate"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-11-05" status="candidate"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page b/gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page
index af72740..39db156 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/monitors-dual.page
@@ -3,14 +3,15 @@
id="monitors-dual">
<info>
- <desc>Set up dual monitors</desc>
+ <desc>Set up dual monitors.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-01-12" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
</credit>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-
+ <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
+
</info>
<title>Connect an external monitor to your laptop</title>
@@ -35,7 +36,7 @@
<tt:div begin="9s" end="16s">
<tt:p>The monitor with the top bar is the main monitor. To change which monitor is
- "main", click onthe top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
+ "main", click on the top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
the "main" monitor.
</tt:p>
</tt:div>
@@ -76,7 +77,7 @@
<section id="steps">
<title>Steps to setup an external monitor</title>
<p>To set up an external monitor with your laptop, connect the monitor to your laptop.
- If your system doesn't recognise it immediately, or you would like to adjust
+ If your system doesn't recognize it immediately, or you would like to adjust
the settings:
</p>
@@ -90,7 +91,7 @@
</p></item>
<item><p>The monitor with the <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link> is the main monitor. To change which monitor is
- "main", click onthe top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
+ "main", click on the top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
the "main" monitor.
</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/more-help.page b/gnome-help/C/more-help.page
index 8497375..df61e3a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/more-help.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/more-help.page
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
<desc>
<link xref="about-this-guide">Tips on using this guide</link>,
<link xref="get-involved">help improve this guide</link>,
- <link xref="help-mailing-list">Mailing-list</link>,
+ <link xref="help-mailing-list">mailing list</link>,
<link xref="help-irc">IRC</link></desc>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/translate.page b/gnome-help/C/translate.page
index 34d2072..382075d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/translate.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/translate.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="more-help"/>
+ <link type="seealso" xref="get-involved"/>
<desc>How and where to help translate these topics.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-12-27" status="review"/>
@@ -21,9 +22,9 @@
</license>
</info>
-<title>Participate to improve translaions</title>
+<title>Participate to improve translations</title>
<p>
- The <app>GNOME help</app> documentation is being translated by a world-wide volunteer community. You are welcome to participate.
+ GNOME's help is being translated by a world-wide volunteer community. You are welcome to participate.
</p>
<p>
There are <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/module/gnome-user-docs/">many languages</link> for which translations are still needed.
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