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[baobab/mallard-documentation] Edits for scan-remote sub-pages

commit 2fccd6e8cd61435cc61031fd2b940563ec2fec0d
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Sat Feb 4 11:44:36 2012 -0500

    Edits for scan-remote sub-pages

 help/C/custom-location.page |   19 ++++++++++++-----
 help/C/ftp.page             |   35 +++++++++++++++++++++++----------
 help/C/ssh.page             |   36 ++++++++++++++++++++++++----------
 help/C/web-dav.page         |   44 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++------------
 help/C/windows-share.page   |   31 +++++++++++++++++++++--------
 5 files changed, 115 insertions(+), 50 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/custom-location.page b/help/C/custom-location.page
index 6997ad1..8219686 100644
--- a/help/C/custom-location.page
+++ b/help/C/custom-location.page
@@ -9,18 +9,25 @@
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Custom Location</desc>
+    <desc>Scanning a remote file system using Custom Location.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Custom Location</title>
 
   <comment><cite date="2011-12-19" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
-  <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection remotely to scan folders.</p></comment>
+  <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection
+  remotely to scan folders.</p></comment>
+
+  <p>To scan remotely using <gui>Custom Location</gui> as the
+  <gui>Service type</gui>:</p>
 
-  <p>If you selected <gui>Custom Location</gui> as a Service type:</p>
-  <p>Type in <gui>Location (URI)</gui> the URL of your Web site, with a slightly modification. The modification refers
-     in replacing "https" with "davs". For example, instead of "https://example.edu.pe:8443/";; you have to type
-     "davs://example.edu.pe:8443/".</p>
+  <p>For <gui>Location (URI)</gui> enter the URL of your Web site, replacing
+  "https" with "davs". For example, instead of "https://example.edu.pe:8443/";
+  enter "davs://example.edu.pe:8443/".</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/ftp.page b/help/C/ftp.page
index ab03f98..9be06b6 100644
--- a/help/C/ftp.page
+++ b/help/C/ftp.page
@@ -9,31 +9,44 @@
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>File Transfer Protocol</desc>
+    <desc>Scanning a remote file system using FTP - File Transfer Protocol</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>File Transfer Protocol</title>
 
   <comment><cite date="2011-12-17" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection remotely to scan folders.</p>
+    <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish
+    connection remotely to scan folders.</p>
   </comment>
   
-  <p>You can access a remote server by using FTP Protocol:</p>
+  <p>To scan remotely using the FTP Protocol:</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>FTP (with login)</gui> as a Service type.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Write the name or address server to establish the connection.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Add some <gui>Optional information</gui></p>
-      <p>The <gui>Port</gui> to connect to on the server is 21.</p>
-      <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> you want to scan has to be written considering the initial route <gui>/</gui>.</p>
-      <p>The <gui>User Name</gui> is the name of the account used to connect to the server.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>FTP (with login)</gui> as the <gui>Service type</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Enter the name of the remote <gui>Server</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Add the following <gui>Optional information</gui>:</p>
+      <p>The <gui>Port</gui> for this protocol is 21;</p>
+      <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> to be scanned beginning with a <file>/</file>;</p>
+      <p>The <gui>User Name</gui> of the account used to connect to the server.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
   
   <note style="important">
-    <p>If you select <gui>Public FTP</gui> as a Service type the user name information is not neccesary because the user is usually anonymous.</p>
+    <p>If you select <gui>Public FTP</gui> as a <gui>Service type</gui> the user
+    information is not neccesary because the user is usually anonymous.</p>
   </note>
  
-  <p>You can read more about this protocol <link href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc959.txt";>here</link>.</p>
+  <p>You can read more about this protocol
+  <link href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc959.txt";>here</link>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/ssh.page b/help/C/ssh.page
index bfc89f4..ec8f74b 100644
--- a/help/C/ssh.page
+++ b/help/C/ssh.page
@@ -9,27 +9,41 @@
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Displaying a multilevel pie chart of a remote file system over SSH - Secure Shell Protocol</desc>
+    <desc>Scanning a remote file system using SSH - Secure Shell Protocol</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Secure Shell Protocol</title>
 
   <comment><cite date="2011-12-19" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
-  <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection remotely to scan folders.</p></comment>
+  <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection
+  remotely to scan folders.</p></comment>
 
-  <p>Use your SSH credentials and configure the scanning process by doing:</p>    
+  <p>To scan remotely using your SSH credentials:</p>    
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>SSH</gui> as a Service type.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Write the name your server to establish the connection on  <gui>Server</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Add some <gui>Optional information</gui></p>
-      <p>The <gui>Port</gui> of this protocol is 22.</p>
-      <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> is the folder you want to scan, consider <gui>/</gui> to write the specific route</p>
-      <p>The <gui>User Name</gui> is the name of the account used to connect to the server.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>SSH</gui> as a <gui>Service type</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Enter the name of the remote <gui>Server</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Add the following <gui>Optional information</gui>:</p>
+      <p>The <gui>Port</gui> for this protocol is 22;</p>
+      <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> to be scanned beginning with a <file>/</file>;</p>
+      <p>The <gui>User Name</gui> of the account used to connect to the server.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>You can read more about this <link href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4251.txt";>protocol</link> and 
-  get more help <link href="https://live.gnome.org/DejaDup/Help/Restore/WorstCase";>here</link></p>
+  <p>You can read more about this
+    <link href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4251.txt";>protocol</link>
+    and get more help
+    <link href="https://live.gnome.org/DejaDup/Help/Restore/WorstCase";>here</link>
+  </p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/web-dav.page b/help/C/web-dav.page
index 4a42593..c6ce639 100644
--- a/help/C/web-dav.page
+++ b/help/C/web-dav.page
@@ -9,35 +9,53 @@
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>WebDAV (HTTP) Protocol</desc>
+    <desc>Scanning a remote file system using the WebDAV (HTTP) Protocol.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>WebDAV (HTTP) Protocol</title>
 
   <comment><cite date="2011-12-19" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
-   <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection remotely to scan folders.</p>
+   <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection
+   remotely to scan folders.</p>
   </comment>
  
-  <p>The WebDAV protocol makes documents on the Web readables and writables. You can create, 
-  change and move documents within a web server or web share. 
-  You can also lock (âoverwrite preventionâ) and make queries of information about author and modified date.</p> 
+  <p>The WebDAV protocol makes documents on the Web readable and writable. You
+  can create, change and move documents within a web server or web share. You
+  can also lock (âoverwrite preventionâ) and make queries of information about
+  author and modified date.</p> 
+
+  <p>To scan remotely using the WebDAV (HTTP) Protocol:</p>
 
   <steps>
-     <item><p>Click <gui>WebDAV (HTTP)</gui> as a Service type.</p></item>
-     <item><p>Write the name your server to establish the connection on  <gui>Server</gui>.</p></item>
-     <item><p>Add some <gui>Optional information</gui></p>
-      <p>The <gui>Port</gui> of this protocol is 22880.</p>
-      <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> is the folder you want to scan, consider <gui>/</gui> to write the specific route</p>
-      <p>The <gui>User Name</gui> is the name of the account used to connect to the server.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>WebDAV (HTTP)</gui> as the <gui>Service type</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Enter the name of the remote <gui>Server</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Add the following <gui>Optional information</gui>:</p>
+      <p>The <gui>Port</gui> of this protocol is 22880;</p>
+      <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> to be scanned, beginning with a <file>/</file>;</p>
+      <p>The <gui>User Name</gui> of the account used to connect to the server.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
   
   <note style="important">
-   <p>Secure WebDAV requires the port 5006 be opened.</p>
+    <p><gui>Secure WebDAV (HTTPS)</gui> requires 5006 to be entered for
+    <gui>Port</gui>.</p>
   </note>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>You can see more details of the <link href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc5397.txt";>WebDAV protocol</link> and learn more <link href="http://unixwiz.net/techtips/ms971492-webdav-vuln.html";> here</link>.</p>
+    <p>You can see more details of the
+    <link href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc5397.txt";>WebDAV protocol</link>
+    and learn more
+    <link href="http://unixwiz.net/techtips/ms971492-webdav-vuln.html";> here</link>.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/windows-share.page b/help/C/windows-share.page
index 0e3462a..b0e19dc 100644
--- a/help/C/windows-share.page
+++ b/help/C/windows-share.page
@@ -9,23 +9,36 @@
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Windows Share Protocol</desc>
+    <desc>Scanning a remote file system using the Windows Share Protocol.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Windows Share Protocol</title>
 
   <comment><cite date="2011-12-19" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
-   <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection remotely to scan folders.</p>
+   <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection
+   remotely to scan folders.</p>
   </comment>
 
+  <p>To scan remotely using the Windows Share Protocol:</p>
+
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>Windows Share</gui> as a Service type.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Write the name your server to establish the connection on  <gui>Server</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Add some <gui>Optional information</gui>:</p>
-      <p>The name of the Windows <gui>Share</gui>.</p>
-      <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> is the folder you want to scan, consider <gui>/</gui> to write the specific route.</p>
-      <p>The <gui>User Name</gui> is the name of the account used to connect to the server.</p></item>
-      <p>The <gui>Domain Name</gui> is the name of the Windows domain.</p>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Windows share</gui> as the <gui>Service type</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Enter the name of the remote Windows <gui>Server</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Add the following <gui>Optional information</gui>:</p>
+      <p>The name of the Windows <gui>Share</gui>;</p>
+      <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> to be scanned, beginning with a <file>/</file>;</p>
+      <p>The <gui>User Name</gui> of the account used to connect to the server;</p>
+      <p>The Windows <gui>Domain Name</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 </page>
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