[gnome-games] help: some updates to Gnomine Mallard docs



commit 214265c368d17fd69a4a5c6ca2a594e6f0e7019a
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski gmail com>
Date:   Sun Aug 12 12:17:07 2012 -0400

    help: some updates to Gnomine Mallard docs

 gnomine/help/C/board-size.page    |    5 ++---
 gnomine/help/C/bug-filing.page    |    2 +-
 gnomine/help/C/develop.page       |    2 +-
 gnomine/help/C/documentation.page |    7 +++----
 gnomine/help/C/faces.page         |    2 +-
 gnomine/help/C/flags.page         |    7 +++----
 gnomine/help/C/get-help.page      |    5 ++---
 gnomine/help/C/high-scores.page   |    7 +++----
 gnomine/help/C/index.page         |    6 +++---
 gnomine/help/C/license.page       |    2 +-
 gnomine/help/C/new-game.page      |   18 ++++++++++--------
 gnomine/help/C/rules.page         |    3 +--
 gnomine/help/C/shortcuts.page     |    2 +-
 gnomine/help/C/toolbar.page       |    4 ++--
 gnomine/help/C/translate.page     |    2 +-
 15 files changed, 35 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/board-size.page b/gnomine/help/C/board-size.page
index 982ae43..a8b5cb4 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/board-size.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/board-size.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-05" status="stub"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
@@ -17,10 +17,9 @@
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Select an existing or custom field size</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Change the game board size</title>
+  <title>How to change the game board size</title>
 
   <p>You can select a field size at the start of a new game.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/bug-filing.page b/gnomine/help/C/bug-filing.page
index 8e38ecc..91a54ca 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/bug-filing.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/bug-filing.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
     <credit type="editor copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski com</email>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/develop.page b/gnomine/help/C/develop.page
index 8944a53..174d23f 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/develop.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/develop.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
    <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/documentation.page b/gnomine/help/C/documentation.page
index bdcac52..7f14b0d 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/documentation.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/documentation.page
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 	type="topic" style="task"
 	id="documentation">
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.2" version="0.2" date="2012-06-17" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.2" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
     <credit type="editor copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -26,8 +26,7 @@
   welcome to participate.</p>
 
   <p>To contribute to the Documentation Project, get in touch with us on the
-  #docs channel on <link
-  href="http://live.gnome.org/GnomeIrcChannels";>irc.gnome.org</link> or via our
+  <link href="https://client01.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.gnome.org%2Fdocs";>#docs</link> channel on <link href="http://live.gnome.org/GnomeIrcChannels";>irc.gnome.org</link> or via our
   <link href="http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-doc-list";>mailing
   list</link>.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/faces.page b/gnomine/help/C/faces.page
index d5c6739..38ef6fe 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/faces.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/faces.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="faces">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-11" status="stub"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/flags.page b/gnomine/help/C/flags.page
index 8c1dc8e..977d258 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/flags.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/flags.page
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
   <info>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-03-24" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.2" date="2012-06-17" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -25,10 +25,9 @@
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>What flags are and how to use them</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Flags</title>
+  <title>How to use flags</title>
   <table>
   <tr>
    <td>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/get-help.page b/gnomine/help/C/get-help.page
index d969795..a0821ea 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/get-help.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/get-help.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="get-help">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-07" status="stub"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
@@ -16,10 +16,9 @@
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Using hints and warnings when stuck</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Getting help when stuck</title>
+  <title>Hints and warnings</title>
 
   <p>You can use hints to reveal safe tiles and flag warnings to help you keep
   track of flags.</p>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/high-scores.page b/gnomine/help/C/high-scores.page
index 4af84b9..167b9db 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/high-scores.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/high-scores.page
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="high-scores">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-20" status="stub"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.2" version="0.1" date="2012-06-24" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
@@ -17,10 +17,9 @@
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>The list of best performers</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Scores</title>
+  <title>High scores</title>
 
   <p>The scores lists the ten fastest times in which each type of mine field
   has been cleared.</p>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/index.page b/gnomine/help/C/index.page
index b99c612..7a29fd0 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/index.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/index.page
@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@
     </title>
     <title type="link">GNOME Mines</title>
     <title type="text">GNOME Mines</title>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-12-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
-      <name></name>
-      <email></email>
+      <name>Brian Grohe</name>
+      <email>grohe43 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/license.page b/gnomine/help/C/license.page
index 312b6cf..41fa6c3 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/license.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/license.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   
   <info>
     <link type="seealso" xref="index"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.1" date="2009-12-28" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
     <desc>Legal information.</desc>
   </info>
 
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/new-game.page b/gnomine/help/C/new-game.page
index 71287c3..0a4d58b 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/new-game.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/new-game.page
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-07" status="stub"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.2" date="2012-06-17" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
@@ -22,13 +22,15 @@
 
   <title>Start a new game</title>
 
-  <p>To start a new game, click the <gui style="button">New</gui> button or
-  select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Mines</gui><gui style="menuitem">New
-  Game</gui></guiseq> from the menu, then <link xref="board-size">select your
-  preferred board size</link>.</p>
+  <p>To start a new game:</p>
+  <steps>
+    <item><p>click the <gui style="button">New</gui> button or select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Mines</gui><gui style="menuitem">New Game</gui></guiseq> from the application menu</p></item>
+    <item><p><link xref="board-size">select your preferred board size</link></p></item>
+  </steps>
 
+  <note>
   <p>If you are already playing a game, <app>Mines</app> will ask if you want
-  to <gui>Start New Game</gui> or <gui>Keep Current Game</gui>; if you choose
+  to <gui>Start New Game</gui> or <gui>Keep Current Game</gui>. If you choose
   the former, your current game will be lost.</p>
-
+  </note>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/rules.page b/gnomine/help/C/rules.page
index 088598e..896e40a 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/rules.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/rules.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="flags"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-08" status="stub"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
@@ -18,7 +18,6 @@
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>The basics game rules</desc>
   </info>
 
 
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/shortcuts.page b/gnomine/help/C/shortcuts.page
index afe01c3..6cd0f88 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/shortcuts.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/shortcuts.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="shortcuts">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#advanced" />
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Brian Grohe</name>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/toolbar.page b/gnomine/help/C/toolbar.page
index 0001658..ba980fe 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/toolbar.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/toolbar.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="toolbar">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-01-16" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
   <p>The toolbar, located under the menu bar, lets you perform common actions 
   with your mouse. To use a toolbar item, just click on it. The buttons, from 
   left to right, are <gui><link xref="new-game">New Game</link></gui>, <link 
-  xref="get-help">Hint</link>, <gui><link xref="pause">Pause</link></gui> and
+  xref="get-help">Hint</link>, <gui>Pause</gui> and
   <gui>Fullscreen</gui>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnomine/help/C/translate.page b/gnomine/help/C/translate.page
index 00af0ab..2d8e26d 100644
--- a/gnomine/help/C/translate.page
+++ b/gnomine/help/C/translate.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
    <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2012-02-06" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-12" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>



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