[file-roller] help: Finalising edits



commit 494420867114294db50f8f828811252374f1a6c2
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski gmail com>
Date:   Sun Aug 5 20:45:48 2012 -0400

    help: Finalising edits
    
    Grammar fixes.
    Added link to gnome-help/user-goodpassword.

 help/C/archive-create.page                   |   20 ++++++++++----------
 help/C/archive-edit.page                     |   16 ++++++++--------
 help/C/archive-extract-advanced-options.page |   18 +++++++++---------
 help/C/archive-extract.page                  |   10 +++++-----
 help/C/archive-open.page                     |   21 ++++++++++-----------
 help/C/archive-view.page                     |   16 ++++++++--------
 help/C/introduction.page                     |   10 +++++-----
 help/C/password-protection.page              |   26 +++++++++++++-------------
 help/C/test-integrity.page                   |    2 +-
 9 files changed, 69 insertions(+), 70 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/archive-create.page b/help/C/archive-create.page
index bc6ed09..0a13d73 100644
--- a/help/C/archive-create.page
+++ b/help/C/archive-create.page
@@ -29,16 +29,16 @@
     <item>
       <p>Click the <gui>Create a new archive</gui> toolbar button, or click
       <guiseq><gui style="menu">Archive</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Newâ</gui></guiseq></p>
+      <gui style="menuitem">New</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>The file chooser will open: name your new archive file and choose the
       location for it to be saved to, then click <gui>Create</gui> to
-      continue</p>
+      continue.</p>
       <note style="tip">
 	<p>In this dialog, you may also choose the file format that you want to
-	use: available extensions are listed at the bottom. If you do not chose
-	the file format, the new archive will be a <file>tar.gz</file>.</p>
+	use: available extensions are listed at the bottom. If you do not choose
+	a file format, the new archive will be a <file>tar.gz</file>.</p>
 	<p>By clicking <gui>Other Options</gui> you can set a password, or
 	split your new archive into smaller, individual files by selecting the
 	relevant option and specifying the volume for each part in
@@ -48,20 +48,20 @@
     <item>
       <p>Add the desired files to your archive by clicking the <gui>Add files
       to the archive</gui> toolbar button, or by clicking <guiseq><gui
-      style="menu">Edit</gui> <gui style="menuitem">Add filesâ</gui></guiseq>.
+      style="menu">Edit</gui> <gui style="menuitem">Add files</gui></guiseq>.
       <app>Archive Manager</app> also allows you to add whole folders by
       clicking the <gui>Add a folder to the archive</gui> toolbar button, or
       selecting <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui> <gui style="menuitem">Add
-      a folderâ</gui></guiseq></p>
+      a folder</gui></guiseq>.</p>
       <note style="tip">
         <p>When you add a folder to your archive, you will be offered some
         options:</p>
         <list>
-          <item><p>Whether to include subfolders or not</p></item>
-          <item><p>Choose which files should be included</p></item>
-          <item><p>Select which subfolders or files are to be excluded</p></item>
+          <item><p>Whether to include subfolders or not.</p></item>
+          <item><p>Choose which files should be included.</p></item>
+          <item><p>Select which subfolders or files are to be excluded.</p></item>
         </list>
-	<p>Not all archive file formats support folders: if the file format
+	<p>Not all archive file formats support folders â if the file format
 	that you are using does not, you will not be warned. If the file format
 	that you are using does not support folders, the files from the folders
 	will be added, but not the folder itself.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/archive-edit.page b/help/C/archive-edit.page
index 737d0c9..8cecde2 100644
--- a/help/C/archive-edit.page
+++ b/help/C/archive-edit.page
@@ -36,22 +36,22 @@
     <item>
     <title>Remove files</title>
       <steps>
-        <item><p>Select the file</p></item>
+        <item><p>Select the file.</p></item>
         <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
         <gui style="menuitem">Delete</gui></guiseq>, or right-click on the
-        selected file, and choose <gui>Delete</gui></p></item>
+        selected file, and choose <gui>Delete</gui>.</p></item>
       </steps>
     </item>
     <item>
     <title>Rename files</title>
       <steps>
-        <item><p>Select the file</p></item>
+        <item><p>Select the file.</p></item>
         <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
-        <gui style="menuitem">Renameâ</gui></guiseq>, or right-click on the
-        selected file, and choose <gui>Renameâ</gui></p></item>
-        <item><p>Enter the new file name into the dialog which which has
-	opened</p></item>
-        <item><p>Confirm the name by clicking <gui>Rename</gui></p></item>
+        <gui style="menuitem">Rename</gui></guiseq>, or right-click on the
+        selected file, and choose <gui>Rename</gui>.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Enter the new file name into the dialog which has
+	opened.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Confirm the name by clicking <gui>Rename</gui>.</p></item>
       </steps>
     </item>
   </terms>
diff --git a/help/C/archive-extract-advanced-options.page b/help/C/archive-extract-advanced-options.page
index aec13d1..cc26f3e 100644
--- a/help/C/archive-extract-advanced-options.page
+++ b/help/C/archive-extract-advanced-options.page
@@ -30,15 +30,15 @@
   <terms>
     <item>
       <title><gui>All files</gui></title>
-      <p>All the files and folders in the archive will be extracted</p>
+      <p>All the files and folders in the archive will be extracted.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <title><gui>Selected files</gui></title>
-      <p><app>Archive Manager</app> extracts only the selected files</p>
+      <p><app>Archive Manager</app> extracts only the selected files.</p>
       <note>
         <p>You need to select the files that you wish to extract before before
         you click <guiseq><gui style="menu">Archive</gui>
-        <gui style="menuitem">Extractâ</gui></guiseq>. Do this by clicking on
+        <gui style="menuitem">Extract</gui></guiseq>. Do this by clicking on
         the file name. Use <key>Ctrl</key> and <key>Shift</key> keys, to select
         more than one file.</p>
       </note>
@@ -49,24 +49,24 @@
       Separate individual files using a semicolon (<key>;</key>)</p>
       <note>
         <p>The file name needs to be followed by a file extension. You can use
-        the asterisk (<key>*</key>) as a wild card, for example, to select all
-        <file>.txt</file> files by typing <file>*.txt</file>.</p>
+        the asterisk (<key>*</key>) as a wild card. For example, to select all
+        <file>.txt</file> files, type <file>*.txt</file>.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
   </terms>
 
-  <p>You can specify in the file chooser dialog whether you want:</p>
+  <p>You can specify in the file chooser dialog whether you want to:</p>
   <terms>
     <item>
       <title><gui>Re-create folders</gui></title>
-      <p>Tick this option if you want to keep the directory structure, as it
-      is in your archive</p>
+      <p>Tick this option if you want to keep the directory structure as it
+      is in your archive.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <title><gui>Overwrite existing files</gui></title>
       <p>If your archive contains files with the same name as those in the
       destination folder, then <app>Archive Manager</app> will overwrite them
-      during extraction if this option is enabled</p>
+      during extraction if this option is enabled.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <title><gui>Do not extract older files</gui></title>
diff --git a/help/C/archive-extract.page b/help/C/archive-extract.page
index c4dc47c..34679e6 100644
--- a/help/C/archive-extract.page
+++ b/help/C/archive-extract.page
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <desc>Extract files or folders from your archive</desc>
+    <desc>Extract files or folders from your archive.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Extract an archive</title>
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <guiseq><gui style="menu">Archive</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Extractâ</gui></guiseq> or click <gui>Extract</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Extract</gui></guiseq> or click <gui>Extract</gui>
       in the toolbar button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -60,14 +60,14 @@
       want to:</p>
       <list>
         <item>
-          <p><gui>Quit</gui> to close <app>Archive Manager</app></p>
+          <p><gui>Quit</gui> to close <app>Archive Manager</app>.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <p><gui>Show the files</gui> to view the destination folder with
-          <app>Files</app></p>
+          <app>Files</app>.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p><gui>Close</gui> the dialog</p>
+          <p><gui>Close</gui> the dialog.</p>
         </item>
       </list>
     </item>
diff --git a/help/C/archive-open.page b/help/C/archive-open.page
index c1f2675..ad72da9 100644
--- a/help/C/archive-open.page
+++ b/help/C/archive-open.page
@@ -22,38 +22,37 @@
 
   <title>Open an archive</title>
 
-  <p>You can open an existing archive with <app>Archive Manager</app> in the
-  following ways:</p>
+  <p>You can open an existing archive with <app>Archive Manager</app> by:</p>
 
   <list>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the toolbar button <gui>Open</gui></p>
+      <p>clicking the <gui>Open</gui> toolbar button</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <guiseq><gui style="menu">Archive</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Openâ</gui></guiseq></p>
+      <p>clicking <guiseq><gui style="menu">Archive</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Open</gui></guiseq></p>
     </item>
   </list>
 
-  <p>You may also use the <gui>Open Recent</gui> option:</p>
+  <p>You may also use the <gui>Open Recent</gui> option by:</p>
 
   <list>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <media type="image" mime="image/png"
+      <p>clicking the <media type="image" mime="image/png"
       src="figures/file-roller-open-recent.png"> Open a recently used
-      archive</media> toolbar button and select a file.</p>
+      archive</media> toolbar button and selecting a file</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <guiseq><gui style="menu">Archive</gui>
+      <p>clicking <guiseq><gui style="menu">Archive</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Open Recent</gui></guiseq> to see the list of
-      recently used archives.</p>
+      recently used archives</p>
     </item>
   </list>
 
   <note>
     <p>If <app>Archive Manager</app> cannot open your recently used archive and
     shows the error message <gui>The file doesn't exist</gui>, it may be that
-    the location of the archive file has changed. You can try using
+    the location of the archive file has changed. You can try using the
     <gui>Open</gui> option to search for it.</p>
   </note>
 
diff --git a/help/C/archive-view.page b/help/C/archive-view.page
index d2b4541..876c402 100644
--- a/help/C/archive-view.page
+++ b/help/C/archive-view.page
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@
       inside the archive. You will see their names, sizes, types, dates of the
       last modification and locations.</p>
       <note style="tip">
-	<p>You may use these column headings mentioned above (name, sizeâ) to
+	<p>You may use the column headings mentioned above (name, sizeâ) to
 	sort the files in your archive. Do this by clicking on them; you can
-	click the same one again to sort in reverse order.</p>
+	toggle to sort in reverse order.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -54,23 +54,23 @@
 
   <section id="file-open">
     <title>Open files in your archive</title>
-    <p>Open files which are in you archive by double-clicking the file name, or
-    right-click on the file name and select <gui>Open</gui>
+    <p>Open files which are in your archive by double-clicking on the file name, or by
+    right-clicking on the file name and selecting <gui>Open</gui>.
     <app>Archive Manager</app> will open the file with the default application
     for that file type.</p>
 
     <note>
-      <p>Open the file with different application by following these steps:</p>
+      <p>Open the file with a different application by following these steps:</p>
       <steps>
         <item>
-          <p>Right click on the file</p>
+          <p>Right click on the file.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p>Click <gui>Open Withâ</gui></p>
+          <p>Click <gui>Open With</gui>.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <p>Select the application that you want to use and click
-          <gui>Select</gui></p>
+          <gui>Select</gui>.</p>
         </item>
       </steps>
     </note>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 481c720..73571bd 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
 
   <p>With <app>Archive Manager</app> you can:</p>
   <list>
-    <item><p>Create new archive</p></item>
-    <item><p>View the content of the existing archive</p></item>
-    <item><p>View a file contained in the archive</p></item>
-    <item><p>Modify existing archives</p></item>
-    <item><p>Extract files from an archive</p></item>
+    <item><p>create a new archive</p></item>
+    <item><p>view the content of an existing archive</p></item>
+    <item><p>view a file contained in an archive</p></item>
+    <item><p>modify existing archives</p></item>
+    <item><p>extract files from an archive</p></item>
   </list>
 
   <figure>
diff --git a/help/C/password-protection.page b/help/C/password-protection.page
index 41dc50f..a6be11f 100644
--- a/help/C/password-protection.page
+++ b/help/C/password-protection.page
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@
   <title>Password protection</title>
 
   <p>You can encrypt an archive with a password so that only you and those with
-  whom you chose to share the password are able to access it. Note that the
-  password can still be guessed, so for highest security, use a non-dictionary
-  password that cannot be associated with you.</p>
+  whom you choose to share the password are able to access it. Note that the
+  password can still be guessed, so for highest security, use 
+  a <link href="http://library.gnome.org/users/gnome-help/stable/user-goodpassword.html"; xref="help:gnome-help/user-goodpassword">good password</link>.</p>
 
   <note style="warning">
     <p><app>Archive Manager</app> allows you to encrypt an archive with a
@@ -39,42 +39,42 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Start <link xref="archive-create">creating a new archive</link></p>
+      <p>Start <link xref="archive-create">creating a new archive</link>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>At the bottom of the file chooser dialog you can choose the
+      <p>At the bottom of the file chooser dialog you can choose a 
       <gui>File Format</gui> and enter a password into the <gui>Password</gui>
-      field in <gui>Other Options</gui></p>
+      field in <gui>Other Options</gui>.</p>
       <note style="warning">
-	<p>You may not be able to type password, because not all archive types
-	support encryption, so it is better to choose file format before
+	<p>You may not be able to type a password, because not all archive types
+	support encryption, so it is better to choose a file format before
 	setting a password.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Continue with <link xref="archive-create"> creating a new
-      archive</link></p>
+      archive</link>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <p>Protect an existing archive by setting a password:</p>
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p><link xref="archive-open">Open an archive</link></p>
+      <p><link xref="archive-open">Open an archive</link>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
-      style="menuitem">Passwordâ</gui></guiseq></p>
+      style="menuitem">Password</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Type a password into the password field</p>
+      <p>Type a password into the password field.</p>
       <note>
         <p>If you want to encrypt the list of files tick
         <gui>Encrypt the file list too</gui>.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui style="button">OK</gui> to continue</p>
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">OK</gui> to continue.</p>
       <note style="warning">
         <p><app>Archive Manager</app> will encrypt only new files which will be
         added to the archive!</p>
diff --git a/help/C/test-integrity.page b/help/C/test-integrity.page
index 9136941..3bfaf21 100644
--- a/help/C/test-integrity.page
+++ b/help/C/test-integrity.page
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <desc>Check the archive for errors</desc>
+    <desc>Check the archive for errors.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Test integrity</title>



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