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[gnome-user-docs] Comments and status on net pages

commit 7f01b5991206996ab3059acd84d7a078881e8024
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 26 23:22:53 2011 -0400

    Comments and status on net pages

 gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page              |    2 ++
 gnome-help/C/net-browser.page                |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page        |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page          |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-editcon.page                |    2 ++
 gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page            |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-email.page                  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-findip.page                 |    4 +++-
 gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page        |    7 +++++++
 gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page         |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page       |    4 +++-
 gnome-help/C/net-general.page                |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page          |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page      |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page             |    2 ++
 gnome-help/C/net-manual.page                 |    6 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page          |    7 +++++++
 gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page          |    7 +++++++
 gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page   |    2 ++
 gnome-help/C/net-problem.page                |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page          |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-security.page               |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-slow.page                   |    2 ++
 gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page            |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page     |    2 ++
 gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page          |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/net-wired.page                  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page      |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page |    2 ++
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page          |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page        |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page               |    2 +-
 32 files changed, 66 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page b/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
index 636b58e..cd3efbc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
     
     <desc>There are few Linux viruses, so you probably don't need anti-virus software.</desc>
     
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
index a2fd5b8..b3001e3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-browser">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
index 56cd058..27c2f8b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
index a33a27f..2b521d3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-email"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-editcon.page b/gnome-help/C/net-editcon.page
index b13281e..a4f89d2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-editcon.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-editcon.page
@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless" group="first"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
index fcd2113..27b400d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-antivirus"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
index e479bba..fb47bcf 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-email">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
index 184f2c0..95ad917 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
@@ -5,15 +5,17 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-what-is-ip-address"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
-
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+
     <desc>Knowing your IP address can help you troubleshoot network problems.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
index 036e74a..99ce093 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
     <desc>You can control which programs can access the network. This helps to keep your computer secure.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Paul W. Frields</name>
       <email>stickster gmail com</email>
@@ -15,6 +16,12 @@
 
   <title>Enable or block firewall access</title>
 
+<comment>
+<cite date="2011-09-26">shaunm</cite>
+<p>Continue to revisit this page until we can provide real instructions.
+As it is, we're stuck in "whatever distros do" territory.</p>
+</comment>
+
   <p>Your system should be equipped with a <em>firewall</em> that allows it to block programs from being accessed by other people on the internet or your network. This helps to keep your computer secure.</p>
   <p>Many applications can provide network services. For instance, you can share files or let someone view your desktop remotely. Depending on how your computer is set up, you may need to adjust the firewall to allow these services to work as intended.</p>
   <p>Each program that provides network services uses a specific <em>network port</em>. To enable other computers on the network to access a service, you may need to "open" its assigned port on the firewall:</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
index 4473616..94a8b1e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-firewall-on-off"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
     <desc>You need to specify the right network port to enable/disable network access for a program with your firewall.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Paul W. Frields</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
index 6f67de8..0f2fc0c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
@@ -19,7 +21,7 @@
   <p>To give your computer a fixed (static) IP address:</p>
 
 <steps>
-<item><p>Click the <gui>network icon</gui> in the <gui>top bar</gui>, and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+<item><p>Click the <gui>network icon</gui> on the <gui>top bar</gui> and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p></item>
 <item><p>Select the network connection from the list (<gui>Wired</gui> or <gui>Wireless</gui>) and click <gui>Configure</gui>.</p></item>
 <item><p>Click on the <gui>IPv4 Settings</gui> tab and change the <gui>Method</gui> to <em>Manual</em>.</p></item>
 <item><p>If no connection information is listed in the <gui>Addresses</gui> list, or if you want to set up a new connection, click <gui>Add</gui>.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-general.page b/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
index 9287a6c..3c56fca 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-general">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page b/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page
index 4c9adc2..37d8126 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-install-flash.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page b/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page
index 9fc959e..f785bff 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-install-moonlight.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
index 4af9a23..6de1097 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
index 972b8ba..96b3d61 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
@@ -5,6 +5,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -22,11 +24,11 @@
 
 <steps>
  <item>
-  <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and click <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Find the network connection that you want to setup manually. For example, if you plug in to the network with a cable, look at the <gui>Wired</gui> tab.</p>
+  <p>Find the network connection that you want to setup manually. For example, if you plug in to the network with a cable, look at <gui>Wired</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
index 10a41ba..4032377 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-otherscontrol"/>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -17,6 +18,12 @@
 
 <title>Other users can't connect to the internet</title>
 
+<comment>
+<cite date="2011-09-26">shaunm</cite>
+<p>Language cleanup, admin -> administrative/administrator. We need
+some standard language. grep for similar.</p>
+</comment>
+
 <p>If you have set up a network connection but other users on your computer can't connect to it, they probably aren't entering the right settings when they try to connect. For example, if you have a wireless connection, they may not be entering the right wireless security password.</p>
 
 <p>You can make it so that everyone can share the settings for a network connection once you have set it up. This means that you only need to set it up once, and everyone else on the computer will be able to connect to it without being asked any questions. To do this:</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page b/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page
index 51a2121..4e0def1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -17,6 +18,12 @@
 
 <title>Other users can't control the network connections</title>
 
+<comment>
+<cite date="2011-09-26">shaunm</cite>
+<p>I know there were polkit policy changes. Not sure if this is
+100% on the money for 3.2. Double-check when possible</p>
+</comment>
+
 <p>If you can edit a network connection but other users on your computer can't, you may have set the connection to be <gui>available to all users</gui>. This makes it so that everyone on the computer can <em>connect</em> using that connection, but only users <link xref="user-admin-explain">with administrative rights</link> are allowed to change its settings.</p>
 
 <p>The reason for this is that, since everyone is affected if the settings are changed, only highly-trusted (admin) users should be allowed to modify the connection.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page
index 0429292..b3537ce 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page
@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page b/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
index b2199e3..c0ea443 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-problem">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page b/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
index e0adc59..01783d2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-security-tips">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="3.2" date="2011-09-30" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-30" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-security.page b/gnome-help/C/net-security.page
index 21e3e06..1c398a4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-security.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-security.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-security">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
index e0271f0..a679cfe 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
index 7c826d9..70ab491 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
index 6e153b8..354dae5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
index 0b40b69..e33402e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -24,6 +25,6 @@
  <p>You can't plug one computer directly into another one with a network cable (at least, not without some extra setting-up). To connect two computers, you should plug them both into a network hub, router or switch.</p>
 </note>
 
-<p>If you are still not connected, your network may not support automatic set-up (DHCP). In this case you'll have to <link xref="net-manual">configure it manually</link>.</p>
+<p>If you are still not connected, your network may not support automatic setup (DHCP). In this case you'll have to <link xref="net-manual">configure it manually</link>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
index e0b910d..c35d5d9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-wired">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
index 260c5db..d8aaf31 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -23,7 +24,7 @@
   <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Switch <gui>Airplane Mode</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>. This will turn off your wireless connection until you switch off airplane mode again.</p>
+  <p>Switch <gui>Airplane Mode</gui> on. This will turn off your wireless connection until you switch off airplane mode again.</p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
index cafad55..8e65db2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
@@ -5,6 +5,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
index 7ed27db..0b9a636 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-wireless-hidden"/>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
index 410132c..cd9883c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page
index a5065e6..232fba3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-wireless">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="3.2" date="2011-09-30" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-30" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net" group="#first"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-general"/>
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