[gnome-user-docs] Fixed mistakes, from Gabor Kelemen, #659174



commit c12ded9b4128f7b6fa0e686157a3a29631e868ab
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 19 13:09:03 2011 -0400

    Fixed mistakes, from Gabor Kelemen, #659174

 gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page              |    5 ++---
 gnome-help/C/backup-why.page                     |    8 +-------
 gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page                 |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page                  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/disk-check.page                     |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/disk-format.page                    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page                |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/get-involved.page                   |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/music-cantplay-drm.page             |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/music-player-ipodtransfer.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page           |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/music-player-notrecognized.page     |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-email.page                      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-general.page                    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-duplex.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-singlesided.page   |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/printing-setup-default-printer.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/printing-setup.page                 |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page               |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page            |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page                |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page                   |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-delete.page                    |    6 ------
 25 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
index a5068a1..b8c1027 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
@@ -27,9 +27,8 @@ Listed below are the most common locations of important files and settings that
 <list>
  <item>
   <p>Personal files (documents, music, photos and videos)</p>
-  <p>These are usually stored in your <file>Home</file> folder (<cmd>/home/your_name</cmd>). 
-They could be in subfolders such as <file>Desktop</file>, <file>Documents</file>, 
-<file>Pictures</file>, <file>Music</file> and <file>Videos</file>.</p>
+  <p>These are usually stored in your home folder (<file>/home/your_name</file>). 
+They could be in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music and Videos.</p>
   <p>If your backup medium has sufficient space (if it's an external hard disk, for example), consider backing up the entire Home folder. You can find out how much disk space your Home folder takes up by using the <app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app>.</p>
  </item>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
index 805ea97..9313bd6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
@@ -4,13 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup" />
-    <desc>
-        <link xref="backup-why">Why</link>, 
-        <link xref="backup-what">what</link>,
-        <link xref="backup-where">where</link> 
-        and <link xref="backup-how">how</link> 
-        of backups.
-    </desc>
+    <desc>Why, what, where and how of backups.</desc>
     <title type="link" role="trail">Backups</title>
     
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
index f468885..2a08f75 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
     
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page
index 57df928..73575d4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-capacity.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
     
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-check.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-check.page
index d4b3c2b..e3adaa2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-check.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
     
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
index 56c59ea..5a895a2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
     
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page
index e80da79..d3ca267 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-partitions.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
     
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
    
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page b/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
index 96ba3b5..c54e379 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 <title>Participate to improve this guide.</title>
 <p>This help system is created by a volunteer community. You are welcome to participate. If you notice a problem with these help pages (like typos, incorrect instructions or topics that should be covered but aren't), you can file a <em>bug report</em>. To file a bug, go to <link href="https://bugzilla.gnome.org/";>bugzilla.gnome.org</link>.</p>
    <p>
-   You need to register so you can file a bug and receive updates by e-mail about its status. If you don't already have an account, just click on the <gui>New</gui> link to create one.
+   You need to register so you can file a bug and receive updates by e-mail about its status. If you don't already have an account, click the <gui>New Account</gui> link to create one.
    </p>
    <p>
    Once you have an account, log in, click on <guiseq><gui>File a Bug</gui><gui>Core</gui><gui>gnome-user-docs</gui></guiseq>.
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
index 1359843..28352e2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
  <steps>
   <item>
    <p>
-   Click <guiseq><gui>Alt</gui><gui>F2</gui></guiseq>.
+   Press <guiseq><gui>Alt</gui><gui>F2</gui></guiseq>.
    </p>
   </item>
   <item><p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/music-cantplay-drm.page b/gnome-help/C/music-cantplay-drm.page
index 57bf940..9d9e250 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/music-cantplay-drm.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/music-cantplay-drm.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     
  
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/music-player-ipodtransfer.page b/gnome-help/C/music-player-ipodtransfer.page
index d3e4a3e..d11e11a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/music-player-ipodtransfer.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/music-player-ipodtransfer.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     
  
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page b/gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page
index a7f2cc2..0b5491f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     
  
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/music-player-notrecognized.page b/gnome-help/C/music-player-notrecognized.page
index 6757e6c..7424bc8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/music-player-notrecognized.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/music-player-notrecognized.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     
  
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
index b830d3e..e479bba 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     </credit>
  
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>The GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>The GNOME Documentation Project</name>
     </credit>
   </info>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-general.page b/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
index 998ebc0..9287a6c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
     </credit>
 
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>The GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>The GNOME Documentation Project</name>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-duplex.page b/gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-duplex.page
index 078c855..e4fe6c3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-duplex.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-duplex.page
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
  <p>n, 1, 2, n-1, n-2, 3, 4, n-3, n-4, 5, 6, n-5, n-6, 7, 8, n-7, n-8, 9, 10, n-9, n-10, 11, 12, n-11...</p>
     <p>Examples:</p>
     <list>
-     <item><p>4 page booklet: Type <input>4,1,2,5</input></p></item>
+     <item><p>4 page booklet: Type <input>4,1,2,3</input></p></item>
      <item><p>8 page booklet: Type <input>8,1,2,7,6,3,4,5</input></p></item>
      <item><p>20  page booklet: Type <input>20,1,2,19,18,3,4,17,16,5,6,15,14,7,8,13,12,9,10,11</input></p></item>
     </list>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-singlesided.page b/gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-singlesided.page
index 73c1f46..988c3c1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-singlesided.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/printing-booklet-singlesided.page
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 
 
  <note><p>Examples:</p>
-     <p>4 page booklet: Type <input>4,1,2,5</input></p>
+     <p>4 page booklet: Type <input>4,1,2,3</input></p>
      <p>8 page booklet: Type <input>8,1,2,7,6,3,4,5</input></p>
      <p>12 page booklet: Type <input>12,1,2,11,10,3,4,9,8,5,6,7</input></p>
      <p>16  page booklet: Type <input>16,1,2,15,14,3,4,13,12,5,6,11,10,7,8,9</input></p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/printing-setup-default-printer.page b/gnome-help/C/printing-setup-default-printer.page
index 7a2cfe5..5864b11 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/printing-setup-default-printer.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/printing-setup-default-printer.page
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
       <p>Select your desired default printer from the list of available printers.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui>Unlock</gui> button in the bottom-left corner and enter your password.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui>Unlock</gui> button in the top-right corner and enter your password.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select the <gui>Default</gui> option.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/printing-setup.page b/gnome-help/C/printing-setup.page
index 6e8397c..1b86df8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/printing-setup.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/printing-setup.page
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <gui>Printers</gui>.</p></item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui>Unlock</gui> button in the bottom-left corner and enter your password.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui>Unlock</gui> button in the top-right corner and enter your password.</p>
     </item>
     <item><p>Click the <gui>+</gui> button.</p></item>
     <item><p>In the pop-up window, select <gui>Local</gui> on the left and
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page b/gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page
index 18ea214..0073b99 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <desc>If print-outs are streaky, fading, or missing colors, check your ink levels or clean the print head.</desc>
 
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
index 870d486..c5ca928 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
       <p>Select your user name in the upper right-hand corner, then choose <gui>My Account</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Unlock your account using the <gui>Unlock</gui> button at the bottom left of the <gui>User Accounts tool</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Unlock your account using the <gui>Unlock</gui> button in the top-right corner of the <gui>User Accounts</gui> tool.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Enter your password at the prompt.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
index fb37e19..d9dfd61 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
   </steps>
 
   <section id="security">
-  <title>Security security</title>
+  <title>Security</title>
 
   <p>It is important that you consider the full extent of what each security option means before changing it.</p>
   <terms>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page
index d10f5f2..2f9bd09 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 <item><p>
 Press <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq> to bring up the window switcher. </p></item>
 <item><p>Release the <key>Alt</key> to select the next (highlighted) window in the switcher.</p></item>
-<item><p>Otherwise, still holding-down the <key>Alt</key> key, press <key>Tab</key> to cycle through the list of open windows, or <keyseq><key>Tab</key><key>Shift</key></keyseq> to cycle through it backwards.</p>
+<item><p>Otherwise, still holding-down the <key>Alt</key> key, press <key>Tab</key> to cycle through the list of open windows, or <keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq> to cycle through it backwards.</p>
 </item>
 </list>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
index b5b2350..929fe09 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 
 <p>To change the sound volume, click the volume icon on the top bar and move the
 volume slider left or right. You can completely turn off sound by dragging the
-slider all the way to the right.</p>
+slider all the way to the left.</p>
 
 <p>Some keyboards have keys that let you control the volume. They normally look
 like stylized speakers with waves coming out of them. They are often near the
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
index 3c0f5ec..26d32f0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
@@ -39,10 +39,4 @@
   may want to back up the files to an external drive or CD before deleting
   them.</p></item>
 </steps>
-<note style="bug">
- <p>
-   You may not be able to delete the user.  This is a bug.  It has been filed with bugzilla.  
-   For more information see <link href="https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=652073";>Bug #652073</link>
- </p>
-</note>
 </page>



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