[cogl] README: s/draw pretty pictures/render/



commit 96ad4436a7c2d316293dd45b64546057e8a31d7e
Author: Robert Bragg <robert linux intel com>
Date:   Mon Sep 19 17:34:08 2011 +0100

    README: s/draw pretty pictures/render/
    
    This tweaks the overview of Cogl to use more technical terminology
    instead of saying Cogl is used to "draw pretty pictures".

 README.in |   12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/README.in b/README.in
index 709a613..4fbf8e3 100644
--- a/README.in
+++ b/README.in
@@ -8,10 +8,10 @@ sections out for other purposes, such as for release notes.
 DESCRIPTION
 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
-Cogl is a small open source library for using 3D graphics hardware to draw
-pretty pictures. The API departs from the flat state machine style of
-OpenGL and is designed to make it easy to write orthogonal components that
-can render without stepping on each others toes.
+Cogl is a small open source library for using 3D graphics hardware for
+rendering. The API departs from the flat state machine style of OpenGL and is
+designed to make it easy to write orthogonal components that can render without
+stepping on each others toes.
 
 As well as aiming for a nice API, we think having a single library as opposed
 to an API specification like OpenGL has a few advantages too; like being
@@ -95,8 +95,8 @@ The experimental 2.0 API can be found here:
 
    http://docs.clutter-project.org/docs/cogl-2.0-experimental/stable/
 
-   Note: The conflicting "stable" at the end refers to the fact
-   to overall Cogl release status, not the documentation specifically.
+   Note: The confusing "stable" at the end refers to the overall Cogl release
+   status, not the documentation specifically.
 
 --
 LICENSE



[Date Prev][Date Next]   [Thread Prev][Thread Next]   [Thread Index] [Date Index] [Author Index]