[gnome-user-docs] Fixes from Gabor Kelemen, #659171



commit 9771d254742615acac73207e9b12d57d97330d53
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 19 11:22:08 2011 -0400

    Fixes from Gabor Kelemen, #659171

 gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page   |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page          |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page   |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/files-preview.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/files-recover.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/printing-envelopes.page |    6 +++---
 6 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
index 7efe8fc..86fe0b9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
@@ -29,6 +29,6 @@
   <item><p>Switch <gui>Simulated Secondary Click</gui> on.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
-<p>You can change how long you must hold down the left mouse button for before it is registered as a right click. In the <gui>Pointing and Clicking</gui> tab, change the <gui>acceptance delay</gui> under <gui>Simulated Secondary Click</gui>.</p>
+<p>You can change how long you must hold down the left mouse button for before it is registered as a right click. In the <gui>Pointing and Clicking</gui> tab, change the <gui>Acceptance delay</gui> under <gui>Simulated Secondary Click</gui>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index 1cea7a5..8d0ea01 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@
  <item><p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p></item>
  <item><p>Adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to choose the year, day, hour and minute. You can choose the month from a drop-down list.</p></item>
  <item>
-  <p>If you like, you can have the clock update itself automatically by turning the <gui>Network Time</gui> ON.</p>
-  <p>When <em>network time</em> is turned on, the computer will periodically synchronize its clock with a very accurate clock on the internet, so you don't have to do it manually. This will only work if you are connected to the internet.</p>
+  <p>If you like, you can have the clock update itself automatically by switching <gui>Network Time</gui> on.</p>
+  <p>When <em>Network Time</em> is switched on, the computer will periodically synchronize its clock with a very accurate clock on the internet, so you don't have to do it manually. This will only work if you are connected to the internet.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>You can also change how the hour is displayed by turning the 24-hour format ON or OFF.</p>
+  <p>You can also change how the hour is displayed by switching the 24-hour format on or off.</p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page b/gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page
index 8b528ad..21c68d4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 
   <title>Write files to a CD or DVD</title>
 
-  <p>You can put files onto a blank disc by using <gui>CD/DVD Creator</gui>. The option to create a CD or DVD will appear in the file manager as soon as you place the CD into your CD/DVD writable driver. The file manager lets you transfer files to other computers or perform <link xref="backup-why">backups</link> by putting files onto a blank disc. To write files to a CD or DVD:</p>
+  <p>You can put files onto a blank disc by using <gui>CD/DVD Creator</gui>. The option to create a CD or DVD will appear in the file manager as soon as you place the CD into your CD/DVD writer. The file manager lets you transfer files to other computers or perform <link xref="backup-why">backups</link> by putting files onto a blank disc. To write files to a CD or DVD:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Place an empty disc into your CD/DVD writable drive.</p></item>
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
     </item>
     <item><p>In the <gui>Disc Name</gui> field, type a name for the disc.</p></item>
     <item><p>Drag or copy the desired files into the window.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>Write to Disc</gui></p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>Write to Disc</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Under <gui>Select a disc to write to</gui>, choose the blank disc.</p>
      <p>(You could choose <gui>Image file</gui> instead. This will put the files in a <em>disc image</em>, which will be saved on your computer. You can then burn that disc image onto a blank disc at a later date.)</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <gui>Properties</gui> if you want to adjust burning speed, the location of temporary files, and other options. The default options should be fine.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-preview.page b/gnome-help/C/files-preview.page
index 5c45209..5fc0789 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-preview.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-preview.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-03" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
-      <name>Shaudn McCance</name>
+      <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
index b25158d..36c543b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Recover a file that you deleted</title>
-    <p>If you deleted a file by pressing <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>delete</key></keyseq>,
+    <p>If you deleted a file by pressing <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Delete</key></keyseq>,
     clicking the <gui>Move to Trash</gui> menu item, or dragging the file to the Trash,
     the file should be in the Trash.</p>
     <steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/printing-envelopes.page b/gnome-help/C/printing-envelopes.page
index 61e6153..bbd15e6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/printing-envelopes.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/printing-envelopes.page
@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@
  <p>There are two things you need to check when trying to print onto an envelope.
  The first is that your printer knows what size the envelope is. After you click
  <gui>Print</gui> and the Print window appears, go to the <gui>Page Setup</gui>
- tab and choose the <gui>paper type</gui> as "envelope" if you can. If you can't
- do this, see if you can change the <gui>paper size</gui> to an envelope size
+ tab and choose the <gui>Paper type</gui> as "Envelope" if you can. If you can't
+ do this, see if you can change the <gui>Paper size</gui> to an envelope size
  (e.g. "C5"). The pack of envelopes will say what size they are; most envelopes
  come in standard sizes.</p>
 
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 <note style="warning">
  <p>Some printers are not designed to be able to print envelopes, especially some
  laser printers. Check your printer's manual to see if it accepts envelopes;
- otherwise, you could damage the printer by feeding an envelop in.</p>
+ otherwise, you could damage the printer by feeding an envelope in.</p>
 </note>
 
 </section>



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