[release-notes/gnome-3-2] Copy edits to rnlookingforward

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit 25755371a97be6ce69271f7557851eaf9f750eb9
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Thu Sep 15 16:07:53 2011 -0400

    Copy edits to rnlookingforward

 help/C/rnlookingforward.xml |   12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
index 79dd04d..01f1d00 100644
--- a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 <sect1 id="rnlookingforward">
   <title>Looking Forward to GNOME &nextversion;</title>
   <para>
-    The next release in the GNOME 3.x series is scheduled for April 2012. Many
+    The next release in the GNOME 3 series is scheduled for April 2012. Many
     new features and enhancements to &gnomeversion; are planned.
   </para>
   <sect2 id="rnlookingforward-users">
@@ -22,19 +22,19 @@
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
 	      Better installing, enabling and disabling of GNOME Shell 
-        extensions which can provide tweaks, adjustments and enhanced 
+        extensions, which can provide tweaks, adjustments and enhanced 
         functionality.
         <!-- https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=654770 / 
         https://mail.gnome.org/archives/desktop-devel-list/2011-August/msg00199.html -->
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
         Easier input of certain characters and symbols that are
-        not directly supported by the keyboard (via better 
-        integration of  <application>IBus</application>).
+        not directly supported by the keyboard via better 
+        integration of  <application>IBus</application>.
         <!-- - https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=641531 -->
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        Social network integration (via <application>libsocialweb</application>).
+        Social network integration via <application>libsocialweb</application>.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
         A new design for the Call user interface of
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
       <!-- gdm bug: http://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=655380 -->
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        Improved rendering of HTML messages in <application>Evolution</application> (by using <application>WebKit</application> instead of <application>GtkHtml</application>).
+        Improved rendering of HTML messages in <application>Evolution</application> by using <application>WebKit</application> instead of <application>GtkHtml</application>.
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>