[release-notes/gnome-3-2] rephrase a11y yet again, I still do not understand it :(

[Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>]

commit 57e6ab8f5bc103ef8a83aecaa5d2245ddc2b765e
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Thu Sep 15 13:26:49 2011 +0200

    rephrase a11y yet again, I still do not understand it :(

 help/C/rna11y.xml |   25 +++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index c20c565..c144ffe 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -9,8 +9,20 @@
  <title>What's New in Accessibility</title>
    <para>
     GNOME &gnomeversion; is the most beautiful accessible desktop to date, with
-    an emphasis on being usable, reliable, and usable for everyone:
+    an emphasis on being usable, reliable, and usable for everyone.
    </para>
+   <para>
+      Until GNOME &gnomeversion;, assistive technology users have faced an
+      unfortunate catch-22: The option to enable accessibility support is not
+      accessible until the accessibility support has been enabled. Until
+      accessibility support can be enabled by default, Assistive Technologies
+      need a single, reliable means to determine if accessibility support is
+      enabled, as well as to enable it. Thanks to work done with
+      <application>AT-SPI2</application> this is now possible.
+    </para>
+  <para>
+    A list of other improvements:
+  </para>
    <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
         For those users who require an on-screen keyboard, a brand new one has
@@ -49,17 +61,6 @@
         of other bugs have been fixed.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        Until now, assistive technology users have faced an unfortunate 
-        catch-22: The option to enable accessibility support is not easily 
-        accessible until accessibility support has been enabled, and the means 
-        by which to enable it is different in each environment the user wishes 
-        to access. Until accessibility support can be enabled by default, 
-        Assistive Technologies need a single, reliable means to determine if 
-        accessibility support is enabled, as well as to enable it. We are 
-        pleased to announce this is now possible thanks to work done with 
-        <application>AT-SPI2</application>.
-      </para></listitem>
-      <listitem><para>
         GNOME's Accessibility Implementation Library 
         <application>Gail</application> has been completely merged into GTK+;
         bringing GNOME yet another step closer to accessibility which is built