[release-notes/gnome-3-2] Small fixes in a11y notes



commit 0ce9483900ed323d20037c1891b07d2da20718fe
Author: Juanjo MarÃn <juanj marin juntadeandalucia es>
Date:   Tue Sep 13 20:40:17 2011 +0200

    Small fixes in a11y notes

 help/C/rna11y.xml           |    9 ++++-----
 help/C/rnlookingforward.xml |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index 188741e..2421277 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -8,22 +8,21 @@
 <sect1 id="rna11y">
  <title>What's New in Accessibility</title>
    <para>
-    GNOME &gnomeversion; includes an On-Screen Keyboard that can be used on keyboard-less devices.
+    GNOME 3.2 is the most beautiful accessible desktop to date, with an emphasis on being usable, reliable, and performant for everyone:
    </para>
    <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
-       GNOME 3.2 is the most beautiful accessible desktop to date, with an emphasis on being usable, reliable, and performant for everyone:
-      </para></listitem>
-      <listitem><para>
        Interacting with GNOME Shell via the keyboard now works better than ever! In addition to being fully keyboard navigable, Orca users will experience much more reliable and accurate presentation during navigation. For those users who require an on-screen keyboard, a brand new one has been built into the GNOME Shell.
+      </para>
       <figure id="fig.a11y.osk">
       <title>On-Screen Keyboard</title>
        <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
          <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;on-screen-keyboard.png" format="PNG"/>
        </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
       </figure>
+      </listitem>
 <!-- https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/OnScreenKeyboard and http://justabovethetagclouds.blogspot.com -->
-      </para></listitem>
+
       <listitem><para>
        AT-SPI2 has been greatly stabilized: Crashes, memory leaks, and a variety of other bugs have been fixed.
       </para></listitem>
diff --git a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
index 4af61e2..7ccaf49 100644
--- a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
   <sect2 id="rnlookingforward-devs">
-    <title>Accessibilty-related changes</title>
+    <title>Accessibilty changes</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
         Two  brand new high-contrast themes with fresh symbolic style icons.



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