[release-notes/gnome-3-2] Misc elaborations

[Andre Klapper <aklapper src gnome org>]

commit 38120ad926e176ec6c205fbb9f95297a2da3cf63
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Mon Sep 12 22:38:26 2011 +0200

    Misc elaborations

 help/C/rnlookingforward.xml |   19 ++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
index 052c4cf..f170758 100644
--- a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@
     <title>User visible changes</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
-        Continue the working on evolving GNOME 3. For instance by improving
-        focus follows mouse, making it easier to start multiple applications at
-        the same time and more.
+        Continued work on evolving GNOME 3, for instance by improving
+        "focus follows mouse", making it easier to start multiple 
+        applications at the same time, and more.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-	      TODO: Shell Extensions: Extensions website support: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=654770 / 
+	      TODO: Shell Extensions: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=654770 / 
         https://mail.gnome.org/archives/desktop-devel-list/2011-August/msg00199.html
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
@@ -30,22 +30,19 @@
         complete accessible High Contrast and High Contrast inverse themes.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        <application>Evolution</application>: Better rendering of HTML messages by using WebKit instead of outdated GtkHtml
+        Improved rendering of HTML messages in <application>Evolution</application> (by using <application>WebKit</application> instead of <application>GtkHtml</application>)
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        work on Evolution-EWS (Exchange Web Services) for improved connectivity to Exchange servers
+        TODO: Application menu / Actions / Jumplists IBus/XKB support - https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=641531
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        Application menu / Actions / Jumplists IBus/XKB support - https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=641531
-      </para></listitem>
-      <listitem><para>
-        Automatic multi-seat support using <application>systemd</application>
+        TODO: Automatic multi-seat support using <application>systemd</application>
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
         TODO: Check for postponed features on https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        Add social network integration
+        Social network integration (via <application>libsocialweb</application>)
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
         A new design for the Call UI of <application>Empathy</application> that allows users to select the webcam and microphone used during the call, to move the video preview around, and might also include support for video effects.