[release-notes/gnome-3-2] use Docbook Entities, split para's, add commented para linking to potential list of release parties

[Andre Klapper <aklapper src gnome org>]

commit f251c59b2211695714b990de3367c776980bedcb
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Mon Sep 12 14:22:40 2011 +0200

    use Docbook Entities, split para's, add commented para linking to potential list of release parties on the wiki

 help/C/release-notes.xml |   15 ++++++++++++---
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/release-notes.xml b/help/C/release-notes.xml
index bf12f1c..3d316a8 100644
--- a/help/C/release-notes.xml
+++ b/help/C/release-notes.xml
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@
 		<pubdate>2011-09-28</pubdate>
 		<edition>&gnomeversion;</edition>
 		<abstract role="description">
-			<para>GNOME 3.2 follows the project's predictable release cycle and 
-            comes six months after the last GNOME major release, version 3.0. It includes 
+			<para>GNOME &gnomeversion; follows the project's predictable release cycle and 
+            comes six months after the last GNOME major release, version &lastversion;. It includes 
             improvements and interesting new features.</para>
 		</abstract>
 
@@ -61,12 +61,21 @@
         and redistribute, and everyone is welcome to participate in its 
         creation. If you would like to help make our products even better, 
         <ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/JoinGnome";>you can join us</ulink>. 
+      </para>
+      <para>
         You can also support us by becoming a <ulink 
         url="http://www.gnome.org/friends/";>Friend of GNOME</ulink> and 
         follow us on <ulink url="http://identi.ca/gnome";>Identi.ca</ulink>, 
-        <ulink url="https://twitter.com/GNOME";>Twitter</ulink> and <ulink 
+        <ulink url="https://twitter.com/GNOME";>Twitter</ulink> or <ulink 
         url="https://www.facebook.com/GNOMEDesktop";>Facebook</ulink>.
       </para>
+<!--
+      <para>
+        If you want to celebrate the release of &gnomeversion; with others, 
+        <ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/";>check 
+        out whether a Release Party takes place nearby!</ulink>
+      </para>
+-->
 
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