[release-notes/gnome-3-2] reword user-feedback items

[Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>]

commit 421bbc74dfbd1ad7c4e31c1a9868265f2a5bb03c
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Mon Sep 12 13:34:14 2011 +0200

    reword user-feedback items

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   14 ++++++++------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 6596bd6..55da541 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -16,16 +16,16 @@
       Based on user feedback, lots of small changes have been made to give a
       smoother GNOME &gnomeversion; experience. Some noteworthy highlights:
     </para>
-    
+
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem><para>
           It is now easier to resize the size of a window as the area for this has
           been increased;
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
-          <application>System Settings</application> now has links to related
-          settings found in other locations. For instance, the Keyboard section
-          now has a link to easily change the keyboard layout;
+          <application>System Settings</application> now includes links to
+          related settings found in other locations. For instance, the Keyboard
+          section now has a link to the keyboard layout;
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
           Various items of a window such as the window titlebar, comboboxes,
@@ -35,14 +35,15 @@
         <listitem><para>
           Notifications now include a counter. This makes it easier to see how
           many emails are waiting for you without having to go to your email
-          client, or how many messages you have missed in a particular chat;
+          client, or to determine how many messages you have missed in a
+          particular chat;
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
           The highlight effect which indicates that an application is already
           running has been made more obvious;
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
-          Within the user menu dropdown, notifications can be configured
+          In the user menu dropdown, notifications can be configured
           independently from the chat status.
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
@@ -53,6 +54,7 @@
           The battery power status is now shown using a bar;
         </para></listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
+
     <para>
       Please keep the feedback coming.
     </para>