[release-notes/gnome-3-2] reword mallard yet again



commit b79ecc75ba7417a2c493ecb4b25b26e40f9b93ad
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Mon Sep 12 13:27:06 2011 +0200

    reword mallard yet again

 help/C/rnusers.xml |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index a80dd4b..764a69a 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -318,10 +318,10 @@
 	<sect2 id="user-docs">
 	  <title>Documentation That Really Helps You</title>
     <para>
-      Traditional user documentation is written like a paper book, but you
-      often just want to find out quickly how to perform a certain task. The
-      following applications have received new task-oriented documentation
-      and help:
+      Traditional user documentation is written like a paper book; a good story,
+      but it is very long and takes time to read through. Not ideal if you just
+      want to find out quickly how to perform a certain task. To address this,
+      the following applications now include task-orientated documentation:
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem><para>
           The accessibility explorer <application>Accerciser</application>;



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