[release-notes/gnome-3-2] reword the installation section



commit 1ad58b70db08e870d8ef5f9cc5fb86dcaa4b947c
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Mon Sep 12 11:50:29 2011 +0200

    reword the installation section

 help/C/rninstallation.xml |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rninstallation.xml b/help/C/rninstallation.xml
index 4dc967a..28c73cd 100644
--- a/help/C/rninstallation.xml
+++ b/help/C/rninstallation.xml
@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@
   <title>Getting GNOME &gnomeversion;</title>
 
  <para>
-   To install or upgrade your machine to GNOME &gnomeversion;, we recommend you
-   install official packages from your vendor or distribution. Popular
-   distributions will make GNOME &gnomeversion; available very soon, and some
-   already have development versions with GNOME &gnomeversion; available.
+   To install or upgrade your machine to GNOME &gnomeversion;, we recommend to
+   install the official packages provided by your vendor or distribution.
+   Popular distributions will make GNOME &gnomeversion; available very soon, and
+   some already have development versions with GNOME &gnomeversion; available.
  </para>
 
  <para>



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