[release-notes/gnome-3-2] expand integration section; various typo fixes

[Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>]

commit cf41b7405f78c9420ae116e88ac4822a4c8631ef
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Sun Sep 11 04:09:54 2011 +0200

    expand integration section; various typo fixes

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   46 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------
 1 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index a18dd16..50e27e2 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@
 	  <title>Manage your Contacts</title>
     <para>
       <application>Contacts</application> is a new application focussed on
-      people. The goal is to provide one overview of people, no matter if the
+      people. The goal is to provide one overview of people; no matter if the
       contacts are stored online, within <application>Evolution</application> or
       the chat application <application>Empathy</application>.
     </para>
@@ -226,10 +226,35 @@
 
   <sect2 id="integration">
     <title>Greater Integration</title>
+    <sect3 id="integration.colors">
+      <title>Colour management</title>
+      <para>
+        Due to differences in the way colours are shown, the same picture can look
+        different between monitors. Similarly, when the picture is printed its
+        colours might have changed again.
+      </para>
+      <para>
+        GNOME &gnomeversion; allows to calibrate devices to ensure the shown
+        colours are representative.
+        XXX / TODO: https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/ColorManagement
+    </para>
+  </sect3>
+  <sect3>
+    <title>Wacom graphics tablets</title>
+    <para>
+      Wacom graphics tablets can be configured in <application>System
+        Settings</application>.
+    </para>
+  </sect3>
+  <sect3>
+    <title>Login screen</title>
     <para>
-    The GNOME 3 login screen has been integrated with the rest of the 
-    experience. - https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/LoginScreen | https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/
+      The GNOME 3 login screen has been integrated with the rest of the 
+      experience. - https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/LoginScreen | https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/
     </para>
+  </sect3>
+  <sect3>
+    <title>Other Integration Improvements</title>
 		<para>
 		GNOME 3 now features integrated media hotplugging notifications: https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/ has a screenshot
 		</para>
@@ -241,24 +266,18 @@
 		<para>
       XXX / TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/
 		</para>
+    </sect3>
   </sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="control-center">
     <title>Improvements in System Settings</title>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem><para>
-          New online accounts panel
-        </para></listitem>
-        <listitem><para>
-          New color management panel: https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/ColorManagement
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
           Ability to set regional settings in Region panel
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
-          New panel for configuring Wacom graphics tablets
-        </para></listitem>
-        <listitem><para>
           A number of smaller usability improvements - redesigned power options and 
           lock buttons. - https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/SystemDialogs
         </para></listitem>
@@ -365,10 +384,10 @@
         to be rotated in case they're in the wrong orientation
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>
-       http://stef.thewalter.net/2011/09/viewer-for-certificate-and-key-files.html | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/CryptoGlue - Further improvements are planned for version 3.4.
+        XXX/TODO: http://stef.thewalter.net/2011/09/viewer-for-certificate-and-key-files.html | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/CryptoGlue - Further improvements are planned for version 3.4.
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>
-        Empathy: SMS support and experimental new call UI (probably not available by default)
+        Empathy: SMS support and experimental new call UI (XXX / TODO: probably not available by default)
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>
         NetworkManager 0.9: http://blogs.gnome.org/dcbw/2011/08/25/when-the-sun-shines-well-shine-together/
@@ -380,7 +399,8 @@
         A redesigned font chooser dialog
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>
-        Various performance improvements
+        Various performance improvements. Most noticable improvement is with
+        fullscreen 3D games.
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>
         Redesigned user interaction in the file chooser dialog (see federicos posts for details)