[release-notes/gnome-3-2] move all XXX/TODO remarks to the end of sections



commit 22cafd1b2a51eff51ee7228913b3ceaeaef4b28b
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Sun Sep 11 01:26:56 2011 +0200

    move all XXX/TODO remarks to the end of sections

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   35 ++++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 16a3506..36271f9 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -12,9 +12,6 @@
 
 	<sect2 id="evolved">
 		<title>&lastversion;, Evolved</title>
-    <para>
-    We listened to GNOME &lastversion; user feedback: https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/FixAnnoyingThings (but make sure that things are not listed twice) - Section with screenshots that compare GNOME 3.0 and 3.2 would be cool, that's aday's idea
-    </para>
 		<para>
       Based on user feedback, lots of small changes have been made to give a
       smoother GNOME &gnomeversion; experience. Some noteworthy highlights:
@@ -62,6 +59,9 @@
     <para>
       Please keep the feedback coming.
     </para>
+    <para>
+      XXX https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/FixAnnoyingThings (but make sure that things are not listed twice) - Section with screenshots that compare GNOME 3.0 and 3.2 would be cool, that's aday's idea
+    </para>
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 id="goa">
@@ -159,16 +159,13 @@
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
     <para>
-      TODO: Epiphany: http://blogs.gnome.org/xan/2011/08/31/web-application-mode-in-gnome-3-2/ | http://blogs.gnome.org/xan/2011/04/11/the-web-comes-to-gnome-ready-or-not/ | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/WebApplicationsIntegration
+      XXX/TODO: Epiphany: http://blogs.gnome.org/xan/2011/08/31/web-application-mode-in-gnome-3-2/ | http://blogs.gnome.org/xan/2011/04/11/the-web-comes-to-gnome-ready-or-not/ | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/WebApplicationsIntegration
     </para>
   </sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="contacts">
 	  <title>Manage your Contacts</title>
     <para>
-      TODO: https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/Contacts | http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Contacts | http://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2011/08/19/a-contacts-update-in-which-robots-take-over-the-world/
-    </para>
-    <para>
       <application>Contacts</application> is a new application focussed on
       people. The goal is to provide one overview of people. One simple
       overview, no matter if the contacts are stored online, within
@@ -181,15 +178,14 @@
         <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-contacts.png" format="PNG"/>
       </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
     </figure>
+    <para>
+      XXX/TODO: https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/Contacts | http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Contacts | http://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2011/08/19/a-contacts-update-in-which-robots-take-over-the-world/
+    </para>
   </sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="documents">
 	  <title>Manage your Documents</title>
     <para>
-      TODO: http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Documents ||
-      http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/08/30/introducing-documents/
-    </para>
-    <para>
       When dealing with a lot of documents, it can be hard to keep track of
       them. In GNOME &gnomeversion;, the Documents application is focussed on
       providing a simple and effective way to find, organize and view documents.
@@ -211,6 +207,10 @@
         <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-documents-google.png" format="PNG"/>
       </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
     </figure>
+    <para>
+      XXX / TODO: http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Documents ||
+      http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/08/30/introducing-documents/
+    </para>
   </sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="sushi">
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@
       pressing <keysym>space</keysym>.
     </para>
     <para>
-      Sushi: http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/04/29/sushi/ | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/FilePreviewing
+      XXX / TODO Sushi: http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/04/29/sushi/ | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/FilePreviewing
     </para>
   </sect2>
 
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
       cursor unless a mouse is attached.
 		</para>
 		<para>
-TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/
+      XXX / TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/
 		</para>
   </sect2>
 
@@ -334,7 +334,11 @@ TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordp
 	    <listitem><para>
         Various visual improvements for people with an eye for detail,
         such as: drop shadows on button labels, new inline toolbar and
-        raised button styles, refined pressed button states
+        raised button styles, refined pressed button states and focus rectangles
+        will only be shown when using the keyboard to interact with an
+        application.
+        XXX - needs to be reviewed -- not everything is clear, might contain
+        duplicates.
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
@@ -374,9 +378,6 @@ TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordp
         Evolution: Google Contacts Photo support
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>
-Cleaner UI: focus rectangles will only be shown when the user is using the keyboard to interact with an app
-      </para></listitem>
-	    <listitem><para>
         A redesigned font chooser dialog
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>



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