[release-notes/gnome-3-2] reorder sections and slightly reword some text
- From: Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [release-notes/gnome-3-2] reorder sections and slightly reword some text
- Date: Sat, 10 Sep 2011 23:19:39 +0000 (UTC)
commit 348506a4085c6157b6343928f38a4e972c0d5ecc
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date: Sun Sep 11 01:19:33 2011 +0200
reorder sections and slightly reword some text
help/C/rnusers.xml | 74 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------------
1 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 37 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 9f23087..f188855 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -92,9 +92,9 @@
<sect2 id="messaging">
<title>Messaging Built In</title>
<para>
- You know longer have to start a specific application to be signed in to
- your favourite chat and messaging services - from &gnomeversion;, GNOME 3
- will do it for you.
+ No longer a seperate application has to be started to be sign in to
+ chat and messaging services - from &gnomeversion;, GNOME 3 will do it for
+ you.
</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>
@@ -184,11 +184,35 @@
</figure>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="shell">
- <title>Shell Extensions</title>
- <para>TODO: extensions website support slowly getting in place: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=654770 / https://mail.gnome.org/archives/desktop-devel-list/2011-August/msg00199.html - need to check status; maybe LookForward section?
+ <sect2 id="documents">
+ <title>Manage your Documents</title>
+ <para>
+ TODO: http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Documents ||
+ http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/08/30/introducing-documents/
</para>
- </sect2>
+ <para>
+ When dealing with a lot of documents, it can be hard to keep track of
+ them. In GNOME &gnomeversion;, the Documents application is focussed on
+ providing a simple and effective way to find, organize and view documents.
+ </para>
+ <figure id="fig.users.documents1">
+ <title>Documents screenshot</title>
+ <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-documents-local.png" format="PNG"/>
+ </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
+ </figure>
+ <para>
+ Thanks to the <application>Online Accounts</application> integration,
+ finding documents is the same, no matter if the document is stored locally
+ or online.
+ </para>
+ <figure id="fig.users.documents2">
+ <title>Documents showing online documents</title>
+ <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-documents-google.png" format="PNG"/>
+ </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
+ </figure>
+ </sect2>
<sect2 id="sushi">
<title>Quickly Preview your Files in the File Manager</title>
@@ -281,36 +305,6 @@ TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordp
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="documents">
- <title>Manage your Documents</title>
- <para>
- TODO: http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Documents ||
- http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/08/30/introducing-documents/
- </para>
- <para>
- When dealing with a lot of documents, it can be hard to keep track of
- them. In GNOME &gnomeversion;, the Documents application is focussed on
- providing a simple and effective way to find, organize and view documents.
- </para>
- <figure id="fig.users.documents1">
- <title>Documents screenshot</title>
- <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-documents-local.png" format="PNG"/>
- </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
- </figure>
- <para>
- Thanks to the <application>Online Accounts</application> integration,
- finding documents is the same, no matter if the document is stored locally
- or online.
- </para>
- <figure id="fig.users.documents2">
- <title>Documents showing online documents</title>
- <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-documents-google.png" format="PNG"/>
- </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
- </figure>
- </sect2>
-
<sect2 id="beautification">
<title>Even more beautiful</title>
<para>
@@ -346,6 +340,12 @@ TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordp
</itemizedlist>
</sect2>
+ <sect2 id="shell">
+ <title>Shell Extensions</title>
+ <para>TODO: extensions website support slowly getting in place: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=654770 / https://mail.gnome.org/archives/desktop-devel-list/2011-August/msg00199.html - need to check status; maybe LookForward section?
+ </para>
+ </sect2>
+
<sect2 id="misc">
<title>But Wait, There's Moreâ</title>
<para>
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