[release-notes/gnome-3-2] shorten sentence



commit 6199edf6917f533e50b19909595ea62bde29488e
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Sat Sep 10 22:37:09 2011 +0200

    shorten sentence

 help/C/rnusers.xml |    7 +++----
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 8ffe959..4a514ef 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -36,10 +36,9 @@
           on small screens;
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
-          Notifications now include a counter. This means that it will be
-          possible to see how many emails are waiting for you without having to
-          go to your email client, or how many messages you have missed in a
-          particular chat;
+          Notifications now include a counter. This makes it possible to see how
+          many emails are waiting for you without having to go to your email
+          client, or how many messages you have missed in a particular chat;
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
           Instead of assuming <application>Evolution</application>, the calendar



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