[release-notes/gnome-3-2] combine some web application paragraphs and slightly reword the webapp summary



commit 3abdc9b53d2406f9aedb37b213b0607c5f1542bd
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Sat Sep 10 22:18:25 2011 +0200

    combine some web application paragraphs and slightly reword the webapp summary

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   15 +++++----------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 77e2de2..64524c5 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -104,15 +104,10 @@
     <para>
       GNOME &gnomeversion; makes it possible to use a site as an application
       thanks to <application>Epiphany</application>, our standard web
-      browser.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      Do to so, press <keysym>Ctrl-Shift-A</keysym>, or access the File menu and
-      select âSave as Web Applicationââ.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-     Once the Web Application has been created, it can be launched from the
-     overview mode. This will show the site in an âapplication modeâ.
+      browser. Do to so, press <keysym>Ctrl-Shift-A</keysym>, or access the File
+      menu and select âSave as Web Applicationââ. Once the Web Application has
+      been created, it can be launched from the overview mode. This will show
+      the site in an âapplication modeâ.
     </para>
     <figure id="fig.users.webapp1">
      <title>Example of a site shown as an application</title>
@@ -121,7 +116,7 @@
       </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
     </figure>
     <para>
-      The following is a brief list of the benefits of showing a commonly used site as an application:
+      The following is a brief list of the benefits of a web application:
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>



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