[release-notes/gnome-3-2] combine some web application paragraphs and slightly reword the webapp summary
- From: Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [release-notes/gnome-3-2] combine some web application paragraphs and slightly reword the webapp summary
- Date: Sat, 10 Sep 2011 20:18:36 +0000 (UTC)
commit 3abdc9b53d2406f9aedb37b213b0607c5f1542bd
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date: Sat Sep 10 22:18:25 2011 +0200
combine some web application paragraphs and slightly reword the webapp summary
help/C/rnusers.xml | 15 +++++----------
1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 77e2de2..64524c5 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -104,15 +104,10 @@
<para>
GNOME &gnomeversion; makes it possible to use a site as an application
thanks to <application>Epiphany</application>, our standard web
- browser.
- </para>
- <para>
- Do to so, press <keysym>Ctrl-Shift-A</keysym>, or access the File menu and
- select âSave as Web Applicationââ.
- </para>
- <para>
- Once the Web Application has been created, it can be launched from the
- overview mode. This will show the site in an âapplication modeâ.
+ browser. Do to so, press <keysym>Ctrl-Shift-A</keysym>, or access the File
+ menu and select âSave as Web Applicationââ. Once the Web Application has
+ been created, it can be launched from the overview mode. This will show
+ the site in an âapplication modeâ.
</para>
<figure id="fig.users.webapp1">
<title>Example of a site shown as an application</title>
@@ -121,7 +116,7 @@
</imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
</figure>
<para>
- The following is a brief list of the benefits of showing a commonly used site as an application:
+ The following is a brief list of the benefits of a web application:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>
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