[gcompris] braille activities: review by Zohra of the english sentences.

[Bruno Coudoin <bcoudoin src gnome org>]

commit 12689c4d3296f178bceb99daf736ec0a60834cc2
Author: Bruno Coudoin <bruno coudoin free fr>
Date:   Mon Sep 5 22:55:30 2011 +0200

    braille activities: review by Zohra of the english sentences.

 .../braille_alphabets.xml                          |    6 +-
 .../braille_alphabets.xml.in                       |    6 +-
 src/braille_fun-activity/braille_fun.xml.in        |    2 +-
 src/braille_lotto-activity/braille_lotto.xml.in    |    2 +-
 src/louis_braille-activity/louis_braille.xml.in    |    2 +-
 .../resources/louis_braille/activity.desktop       |   55 --------------------
 .../resources/louis_braille/activity.desktop.in    |   18 +++---
 7 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 73 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/src/braille_alphabets-activity/braille_alphabets.xml b/src/braille_alphabets-activity/braille_alphabets.xml
index 34b023b..ee132e6 100644
--- a/src/braille_alphabets-activity/braille_alphabets.xml
+++ b/src/braille_alphabets-activity/braille_alphabets.xml
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@
         <manual>The screen has 3 sections: braille cell, alphabet name
         and lower board containing 13 letters. Click on each letter in
         the lower board to know its corresponding braille code in the
-        braille cell section.Click on the increment level button to
-        jump to the next 13 letters of the english alphabets.</manual>
+        braille cell section. Click on the increment level button to
+        jump to the next 13 letters of the English alphabets.</manual>
         <credit></credit>
   </Board>
   <Data directory=""/>
-</GCompris>
\ No newline at end of file
+</GCompris>
diff --git a/src/braille_alphabets-activity/braille_alphabets.xml.in b/src/braille_alphabets-activity/braille_alphabets.xml.in
index 601fc40..fa37d06 100755
--- a/src/braille_alphabets-activity/braille_alphabets.xml.in
+++ b/src/braille_alphabets-activity/braille_alphabets.xml.in
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@
         <_manual>The screen has 3 sections: braille cell, alphabet name
         and lower board containing 13 letters. Click on each letter in
         the lower board to know its corresponding braille code in the
-        braille cell section.Click on the increment level button to
-        jump to the next 13 letters of the english alphabets.</_manual>
+        braille cell section. Click on the increment level button to
+        jump to the next 13 letters of the English alphabets.</_manual>
         <_credit></_credit>
   </Board>
   <Data directory=""/>
-</GCompris>
\ No newline at end of file
+</GCompris>
diff --git a/src/braille_fun-activity/braille_fun.xml.in b/src/braille_fun-activity/braille_fun.xml.in
index 7048fba..8199447 100644
--- a/src/braille_fun-activity/braille_fun.xml.in
+++ b/src/braille_fun-activity/braille_fun.xml.in
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
         <_description>Braille the falling letters</_description>
         <_prerequisite>Braille Alphabet Codes</_prerequisite>
         <_goal></_goal>
-        <_manual>Braille code the tile for the corresponding falling letters.Check the braille chart by clicking on the toggle button for help.</_manual>
+        <_manual>Braille code the tile for the corresponding falling letters. Check the braille chart by clicking on the toggle button for help.</_manual>
         <_credit></_credit>
   </Board>
   <Data directory=""/>
diff --git a/src/braille_lotto-activity/braille_lotto.xml.in b/src/braille_lotto-activity/braille_lotto.xml.in
index ecbfe05..4de4eb5 100644
--- a/src/braille_lotto-activity/braille_lotto.xml.in
+++ b/src/braille_lotto-activity/braille_lotto.xml.in
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
         <_description>Discover the Braille system for numbers.</_description>
         <_prerequisite></_prerequisite>
         <_goal></_goal>
-        <_manual>Each player must find if the proposed number is in their board. If the code in the board, just click on it in order to validate it. The player who crosses all the Braille numbers correctly wins the game. Check the Braille table by clicking on the toggle button in the control bar.</_manual>
+        <_manual>Each player must find if the proposed number is in their board. If the code is in the board, just click on it in order to validate it. The player who crosses all the Braille numbers correctly wins the game. Check the Braille table by clicking on the toggle button in the control bar.</_manual>
         <_credit></_credit>
   </Board>
   <Data directory=""/>
diff --git a/src/louis_braille-activity/louis_braille.xml.in b/src/louis_braille-activity/louis_braille.xml.in
index 2cb125a..5d57be8 100644
--- a/src/louis_braille-activity/louis_braille.xml.in
+++ b/src/louis_braille-activity/louis_braille.xml.in
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
         boarddir=""
         demo="1">
         <title>The History of Louis Braille</title>
-        <description>Review the major dates in the inventor of the Braille system.</description>
+        <description>Review the major dates of the inventor of the Braille system.</description>
         <prerequisite></prerequisite>
         <goal></goal>
         <manual>Read the history of Louis Braille, his biography and discovery of the Braille system. Click on the previous and next buttons to move to the respective story page. At the end, arrange the sequence in the chronological order.</manual>
diff --git a/src/louis_braille-activity/resources/louis_braille/activity.desktop.in b/src/louis_braille-activity/resources/louis_braille/activity.desktop.in
index 253e6a6..99b923a 100644
--- a/src/louis_braille-activity/resources/louis_braille/activity.desktop.in
+++ b/src/louis_braille-activity/resources/louis_braille/activity.desktop.in
@@ -1,41 +1,41 @@
 [1]
 year = 1809
-_story = Born January 4th at Coupvary near Paris in France.
+_story = Born on January 4th in Coupvary near Paris in France.
 image = louis_braille/louis.png
 
 [2]
 year = 1812
-_story = Louis Braille injured his left eye with a stitching awl from his fathers workshop.
+_story = Louis Braille injured his right eye with a stitching awl from his father's workshop.
 image = louis_braille/workshop.jpg
 
 [3]
 year = 1812
-_story = At the age of three Louis became blind due to sympathetic ophthalmia.
+_story = At the age of three, Louis became blind due to a severe infection that spread to his left eye.
 image = louis_braille/fireplace.jpg
 
 [4]
 year = 1819
-_story = At the age of 10 he was sent to Paris to study at the Royal Institute for Blind Youth.
+_story = At the age of 10, he was sent to Paris to study at the Royal Institute for Blind Youth.
 image = louis_braille/rnib.jpg
 
 [5]
 year = 1820
-_story = He began to impress his classmates and began to play piano and the organ.
+_story = He impressed his classmates and began to play the piano and the organ.
 image = louis_braille/piano.svg
 
 [6]
 year = 1821
-_story = Charles Barbier, a french soldier visited school and shared invention of night writing ,a code of 12 raised dots to share information on battlefield.
+_story = Charles Barbier, a French soldier, visited his school and shared his invention of night writing, a code of 12 raised dots to share information on battlefields.
 image = louis_braille/night_printing.jpg
 
 [7]
 year = 1824
-_story = Louis trimmed Barbier's 12 dots into 6 and invented Braille.
+_story = Louis trimmed Barbier's 12 dots into 6 and invented the Braille language.
 image = louis_braille/braile.jpg
 
 [8]
 year = 1828
-_story = He became a professor after graduating and secretly taught his method.
+_story = He became a teacher after graduating and secretly taught his method.
 image = louis_braille/teach.jpg
 
 [9]
@@ -51,5 +51,5 @@ image = louis_braille/statue.jpg
 
 [11]
 _year = After his Death
-_story = Braille got accepted as a world wide standard. Louis proved if you have motivation you can do incredible things.
+_story = Braille got accepted as a world wide standard. Louis Braille proved that if you have motivation you can do incredible things.
 image = louis_braille/braille_ball.jpg